She Just Wants to Have a Baby

I really want to read Pei Shiguan's story

Is this an overhaul that has not been completed? Repeat the unnecessary

The overall story line is quite good, but the writing is too messy, with too many threads buried and not sorted out!

The article is good, but it is too messy, with too many characters and too complex writing. Moreover, both the heroine and the male protagonist are not very likable. The heroine in particular is a bit too perfect, too holy, and is nice to everyone except her biological father. To be honest, he is not as cute as the sixth girl, and the male protagonist is not as interesting as the prince. How to put it, the heroine is too nice, but not like a normal person, her way of thinking, emotions and desires are not very worldly. For example, she finally found out that her father is the mastermind. Normal people usually will cover up for the other party even if they know that it is their biological father who is wrong. Even if the other party is wrong, they will be hit hard and hope to make up for the mistake themselves, or To atone for the sins of her biological father, even if she is imprisoned, she still hopes that the other party will survive. However, the heroine said that she would collect the body. Compared with the big belly she used to treat the person who hurt her, it is simply... Therefore, the heroine and the hero are not as flesh-and-blood as Huairan and Shizi. Although they have a few flaws and are selfish, they are kind and open-minded in nature. This is interesting to write. The female protagonist is too Mary Sue, while the male protagonist is too strong, has no shortcomings, but is not cute either.

I finally saw that the overhaul was different from before.

Is there another plot twist?

Mr. Yue Si, after all, before he resigned due to the death of his wife, he was also a man of great devotion and talent. His motive was to avenge his wife who died innocently and unjustly. The Zhang family and the Wang family involved were both behind the scenes and the murderers of that incident.

Who is it? I can't understand (#-.-)

It is true that some parents are unworthy of being parents. To put it a bit too much, the child is yours to have, not his own.

Are you going to return to normal?