
[Harry Potter] The Platinum Trap
[HP]铂金陷阱
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[HP]铂金陷阱
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... To sum up, the rest of the story is messy, the plot doesn't connect, and there are a lot of pitfalls. The protagonist's details are not up to par. The heroine's setting at the beginning is particularly eye-catching. The plot is also broken later on. I can't watch it anymore. After the heroine dies, I won't read it. The heroine's children are also written in a mess. After reading it, I feel that it is a pity. What a great beginning.
Wouldn't it be better if it was simply written around Lucius Rebecca?
How should I put it? It's just a thunder drama. The heroine's mother is a love brain. The beginning is speechless.
I think... No matter what, there must be a difference in character between Xia and the heroine. So what if there is a mirror, they grew up in completely different environments, and the only thing that resembles her is the mirror. I don't know if she remembered it at the end of the story, but seeing this, all the characters ended up BE. Liberta loved Lucius so much that she never got to be with him in the end, they just tortured each other. Finally, Dad, can there be a sequel? That kind of summer restored the memory of her previous relationship with Brother Drag, and Liberta returned to this world to be with Lucius. Lucius's father traveled back to the time when Tom was still around and asked him to make a new choice. May I? Woohoo, humble.
Ah, I didn't know this good article until now. It's a pity that it has been finished for a long time. Otherwise, I would have urged the author to make a big extra chapter about Lucius and Abu.
Ah, I didn't know this good article until now. It's a pity that it has been finished for a long time. Otherwise, I would have urged the author to make a big extra chapter about Lucius and Abu.
Such a dark style, very uncomfortable to look at
There is no cp in this article. Although the beginning is novel and fun, some of the settings are really uncomfortable and the ending is a bit confusing. I didn't understand it.
I'm jumping to see... What did the priest do to the heroine?
Please tell me about the extra story ~ give Lucius and Abu a good ending ~