Harry Potter: Severus Snape, the Winner in Life

Although the professor was forced to be the heroine... The writing is good and the narration is very good. It is a story that can be read all the time. The flaws are not hidden. To be honest, when I saw the heroine following Sirius every day, I specifically came to the comment area... When I found that everyone, like me, felt that she was not worthy of being a professor, it was great. I finished reading it and thanked the author for his selfless dedication. To be honest, the heroine doesn't feel like living in Ravenclaw at all, including the supporting characters around her. There is only one roommate who is Ravenclaw, and the frequency of her appearance is not as high as the other Gryffindors... There are too many flaws to pick out, but overall the beginning is pretty good. Anyway, I was reluctant and curious, and I finally saw how to make it up to the professor.

Finished reading it. Some diaphragm response. People from the Yingyuan who took the test three times on the official website said that people from the Yingyuan would never be like the heroine, and it would be better to assign her to the Lion Yard from the beginning. Halfway through, I thought this was a CP article about Sirius. It's all for the sake of Sri Lanka that I can persist in watching it.

I read half of the article and couldn't help but read the comments. Sirius is really like a brainless troll. He only believes in what he believes in. He is immersed in his own world and is very stubborn. On the other hand, he is too arrogant, even to the heroine. He doesn't care what other people think and only sticks to his own ideas. James and Sirius seemed to have only love in their heads, and all their actions were only out of love. The friendship between the heroine and Sirius is also very fascinating. The heroine's tolerance for him is too high. No matter how much Sirius is not angry with the professor, he just gives gentle advice, which makes him angry. Speaking of the part in the diary, I really don't understand it. As someone who has watched Harry Potter, the heroine should know that Ginny was controlled by the diary. The heroine didn't hand it to the principal as soon as she got the diary. She also appeared in the women's bathroom for no reason for several nights and felt that she might be sleepwalking. She was very confused. Isn't this a typical case of being controlled by a diary? The heroine later showed her trust in the principal, so why didn't she give the principal the diary in the first place? The author's writing is very good, and the daily life of the heroine and the professor is very sweet. These are just superficial thoughts from readers who haven't finished reading. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

The further you get to the back, the more the heroine seems to be brainless. Her various ambiguities with Sirius are purely friendship, and she doesn't consider the hero's feelings at all. It's a typical Gryffindor brainless behavior, and it won't do if she is a little wronged. Lily No. 2 Is here.

I finally finished watching it. When I first started watching it, I was almost scared away by the comments in the comment section. Fortunately, I was obsessed with the professor enough to really watch it. It felt pretty good. What I like very much is that none of these people are perfect. I saw someone say that the heroine is stupid before. In fact, each of the protagonists here has shortcomings. The impulse of the heroine will put herself in dangerous situations and cause conflicts between them. But at the same time, This kind of enthusiasm is also the root of attracting Snape and the opportunity for them to reconcile again and again; and Snape is not overly beautified here. He is still gloomy, cold, and vicious in his daily life, but his charm has not diminished. Whether it is his forbearance when he first entered the Snake Yard as a fledgling, or his later desire for powerful power and study of black magic to get closer to the Laofu camp, or his later humiliation and silent dedication, he feels familiar with the shadow version of the professor. In addition, I personally think that the heroine is not that stupid. Without a God's perspective, especially when the impression of the original novel bothers her, she still chooses to believe Snape time and time again, seeing through his true intentions in every word of his hurtful words, and taking the initiative to break the deadlock after each cold war. I still admire her. In fact, I don't like some of the settings in the article, but the things I like far exceed the minor points. Overall, I would like to thank the author for writing this article. I just was caught off guard when I read it. I didn't expect that I would be saddened by the news about Allen again after five years... (I didn't quite understand the chapter about Claire at the end. I wonder if I can get some popular science from an informed person?

The relationship between the heroine and Sirius is really...

My Merlin, the heroine is really not suitable for the Eagle Academy.

It took me a day to read the novel. I feel that the original characters are not too OOC and are within the controllable range. Applause? Give it to Dada. The novel reads very smoothly and the writing style of Dada is really good. The setting of the plot is also very interesting. There is no three vulgar settings of black snake, black lion and black old Deng. The only thing that I personally don't like or even feel a little upset about is probably the character setting of the heroine... The further I go, the more I feel that the heroine has a bit of green tea X potential. I don't know if that's right. After all, I don't quite understand the true definition of this term... Although I can feel that I want to highlight the justice and courage of the heroine and other series. Quality, including the heroine's concept of love, friendship and family... But many aspects reflect the character setting of the heroine. It's hard to explain in one sentence. I won't talk about the complicated "friendship entanglement" between Sirius and the professor. The feelings of separation and union with the professor are not clearly explained. It seems that in the later stage, the professor blindly gives and the heroine blindly accepts. Overall, the early stages are great, but the plot and characters in the later stages have some flaws, but from a professorial perspective, it's still worth watching.

The heroine makes me very uncomfortable. Since the author wrote that the heroine is a Ravenclaw, why does she act like a Gryffindor? She is not worthy of teaching. In fact, there is no difference between her and Lily in the original work. She just fell in love with the professor, but she hurt him even more in the process. I was very angry and said it was disgusting to the heroine Sirius that it was purely friendship. Hehe

The first Snape fanfic I read when I was a kid, My White Moonlight Wow (although I also had doubts about the friendship between Sirius and the heroine)