Tales of Dreams in Kanto

I ended up spreading flowers. Actually, I saw this article in my portfolio. I read ten chapters and thought it was very interesting. However, I came to subscribe and couldn't underline the excerpt, so I went back to browse the txt and resubscribed. Overall, the plot setting is great, especially the goldfish murderer part. In terms of language, the dialogue is rather long-winded, and every time I think about life, I have to drink a bowl of chicken soup angrily, but many of the psychological descriptions and environmental descriptions are particularly apt (excerpted 2333). In short, the romance part has the feel of a fairy tale, and most of the bloody love is spilled on Xiong Pang's two roses getting married. I didn't even bother to look for it while driving. I feel that Qingshui's story is also very complete.

Congratulations on the official completion. I have been busy these past two days and I just saw it today. The article "Xinghai" gave me a new reading experience that is not available in other articles. I always like the new and hate the old when reading articles. After reading one of the same themes, I don't want to read the second one. Your article rescued me from the literary drought. In short, "Xinghai Shibei" is the shining pearl I found this year in the vast sea of ​​​​stars. I think of a poem by Zen Master Chai Lingyu. I have a bright pearl, which has been locked up by the dust for a long time. Now the dust is gone and the light is born, shining through thousands of mountains and rivers. I hope that Xinghai, like this pearl, can illuminate mountains and rivers and be seen and recognized by more people.

Congratulations on the completion! After following it all the way, I feel that the early part is better written. The description of the scenery in the whole text is my favorite part! It can always vividly bring out the mood of the protagonist at that time, etc. I especially have the urge to take out my notebook and excerpt some good sentences! But in the later stages, such as the confessions of the last four people, I always felt that it was a bit strange to insert it in that crisis moment, but I couldn't think of a more natural way to write it. Also, Yamane's approach to dealing with them was a bit too casual. Of course, OJZ may have lost his IQ due to the painful loss of his puppet. In short, the second half of the plot always gives me the feeling that they are just following the plot and everything has been arranged. It is not realistic enough to be involved in the drama_(:з∠)_Especially the last chapter, in order not to make it too trivial, I asked Meng Xiang to briefly describe everything for you. It feels like it makes the whole world false. These are my thoughts after reading it. Please don't mind. I hope you can write better and better in the future, and more and more people will like your novels. I'm really looking forward to your ancient style writing. I like martial arts the most!

Sahuahua=￣ω￣=See you in the next book, madam! ! ! ! !

╭(╯ε╰)╮Congratulations~ I will pay attention to the new article! Lin Chang and Xu Can are so good together~

Finally a book that I can follow from beginning to end! Happy!

Well, congratulations to Xingda for completing the third chapter. Already collected new articles

Congratulations on the completion and happy birthday!

Are there any extras? ⊙⊙

Ang Lee:? ? ? (Black question mark. Jpg) Congratulations on the completion of the text! Happy birthday! Waiting for the extra episode!