Every Day, I Fight Off My Boyfriend's Love Rivals

The author's writing skills really need to be improved. No matter the heroine, the hero, the supporting characters, or the system, they are all repetitive and inconsistent in what they say and do!

I finished it in one day, and the ending made me a little disappointed... It just felt very bland. The male protagonist woke up and was with the female protagonist. I always felt that the male protagonist's love for the female protagonist was not as deep as when the heroine first time traveled. It was because the interaction between the male and female protagonists was too little and too bland! I have been thinking a lot about the male protagonist regaining his memory and then pursuing the female protagonist...

I really hope that there will be a side story about the male protagonist at the end, about the male protagonist's inner drama, but I feel like the finale is not sweet enough, it's a bit unfinished...

Big, great, great! Spread flowers, sprinkle flowers~(≧▽≦)/~pen core loves you

Hey... I said before that Xu blocked the knife, but here it is written that the woman blocked it... Please change it!!!

So does the heroine, as I said before! I'm sorry for Xiaoliu, hey, let me go, Xiaoliu was named last, and then I asked you to give me your last drop of blood, because I feel sorry for you, haha. I want to drain you dry, just because of me! Sorry?? …Oh My God

I'm going! Baffling? What the hell is that girl? An unexpected stab? Still saying you owe it? Is this a mashup? The cause and effect are not clearly explained.

Oh my god! The three years you mentioned suddenly passed???? Got stabbed and lay there for two years??? Funny??

Ouch, let me go! A while ago, when I took the dog with me, my menstrual pain was excruciating. Now, I told you that I haven't had any pain at all???

It seems that I have always felt that the role of the male protagonist is relatively pale and lacks emotional drama. But the whole story is humorous and interesting, and the plot is well handled and full of ups and downs. Although I feel that the writing is not strong enough to complete the story, the details are still rather stiff and the span is too big. But I think the ending is really well-conceived and eye-catching. If I can brew it for a while and wait until I have enough writing power, I can revise this article again, add some emotions, descriptions of supporting characters, add more chapters to foreshadow the plot, and occasionally send sweets to add some foreshadowing of the ending. It's really exciting~ Overall, it's a pretty good article, and the concept is quite interesting and fascinating (>_