The Handbook of Youth Training

I don't like Zhanyan's character a bit, and why is it that the target is the winner, but the result is mutual attack? It's a bit of a criticism of me, but everything else is okay. However, I feel that my wife's best article is Star Journey Guide. This article makes me feel unspeakably frustrated and awkward. I'm sorry, but please keep up the good work!

Well, it's true that except for the last chapter, everything is pretty good. . . The ending was too hasty. . . Your writing on swimming competition is really great. Writing about competitions can completely arouse everyone's passion. However, it is okay to use short sentences to emphasize repeatedly in competitive writing, because competition is inherently the more passionate, the better, and the competition time is very short, so short sentences are also very reasonable, but it is very strange to describe it like this in other types of writing. . . New article. . .

In fact, except for the last chapter, the author's writing is quite good. Come on, I will definitely follow the new article!

I hope you can also write competitive articles QAQ

It feels like a lot of other people's emotional experiences have been cut off.

My favorite swimmer is Da Da. I wasn't really interested in it when I first read this article, but I gradually fell in love with it. I like Zhan Yan's warm character and Wu Huai's determination not to let go once he's convinced. Although the ending is a bit regretful and I didn't get the blessing of my family, the relationship between Zhan Yan and Wu Huai still makes me feel very warm. Keep up the good work Da Da!

It feels like the rhythm before and after is different, and the omitted ones...(You know) also have some impact on the plot. When reading the whole text, it felt like I was working hard but ran out of energy in the middle. The pace was obviously faster at the end, and the writing was a bit scattered. No matter what, thank you for showing us such a story, keep it up.

The beginning of this article is still great, and it continues well in the middle. However, towards the end, I feel that Xiaoyao is deflated, and the article does not seem as passionate as before. However, compared to many authors, Xiaoyao's article is still super good-looking. Come on, little demon! The new article is also good to read, and it's an angry and scumbag attack!

It's very beautiful. I stayed up late to see it now. It's almost five o'clock. I will recommend it to others~

In fact, at the beginning, I felt that the character design was very positive, and Huaizai really made me feel warm. Later, the change of character design was the first time I encountered it when I was chasing articles, and I could accept it. After all, I had such high expectations at the time, and few people supported it. I understand the disappointment, and I also admit that after the change, I was a little uncomfortable with it, especially the rhythm of this article. I didn't have the feeling that it would be gone before I invested. I hope it gets better and better