The Transmigrated Snack Street Tycoon

I don't like Zu Xin in the comments. Although I can't say I like him, I don't dislike him either. I think he is quite cute. After knowing that Fan was not interested in me, I found a reason to leave. I was so stupid and didn't know where to go... Hhh It's so weird for me to be cute.

As promised... The extra story...

The writing is actually quite good... But Zu Xin is really annoying... I feel like I can't stand it anymore...

Damn, you still have a novel to finish.

From beginning to end, I felt very angry. Not to mention the fact that Fan Yu saved Zu Xin, Zu Xin usually acted like a fool at home and even got into trouble with his nose. Did he ask for it and not get it, so he should be like this? Fan Yu usually has to focus on making money to support his family, and he is also distracted by taking care of his little one. This time, she was pregnant and had to be accused by Ji Huai of seducing and instigating her, and she had to be distracted to lecture him, making it seem as if Fan Yu had made a mistake in rescuing Zu Xin. Really farmers and snakes, this kind of people are quite annoying.

The new year has come to an end (*`▽?*) Waiting for the sequel~~ I want to say that I am also obsessed with details. I will read quickly without paying attention, and then I will go back and read it again in detail! (V^_^)v

The story is quite interesting, but I also don't like Zu Xin very much. I really want to tell him to be cannon fodder, and I especially don't want to see him. I think the author is quite cute, and the male protagonist Xiao Fan is actually a scumbag. I originally wanted to complain about him betraying his trust and breaking the contract, but the author The author so readily admitted that it was a blemish in his life, which left me speechless. However, he also had other flaws. For example, in his previous life, he seduced female classmates and gave them all kinds of gifts and warmth for the sake of academic performance. In the end, when his grades were good, he abandoned them like worn-out shoes. Why would he flirt with her if she didn't marry him? It made the other person forget him for many years, how could he be such a scumbag, so Zu Xin's secret love didn't work out because he was a sissy. This type of male protagonist needs a domineering attack to correct him, and the author's paragraphs should be shorter, otherwise it will look very hard. And I can't tell what's weird about the sentence descriptions. It's like trying to find grammatical problems in a Chinese paper. It's very awkward. I feel that the author should make the sentences shorter and not add too many kinds of fixed forms. I feel that there are too many descriptions of small details and the sentences are not smooth. It is easy to have dyslexia.

Ahhhhh, the more I watch, the more I hate people like Zu Xin. It's so annoying that I can't stand it anymore _

Will there be any extras? Can you tell a story about two children? And Little Pudding?

Is the use of clever words and persuasion wrong?