Reunited After a Long Separation

Pingyang, I started to pay attention to you, starting from your Night Bright Pearl. This was an accident. At that time, I read another book called Night Bright Pearl, written by Brunn Hill. Later, I discovered your Night Bright while reading the book review. Zhu, I have almost forgotten how I felt at that time, but the character of the heroine in the book is independent and confident, not arrogant and pretentious, steadfast, has a disdain for the world, and yearns for freedom. Such a woman is simply a rare treasure! If you have a beautiful appearance, it will drive all men crazy. I know that such an image is unique in reality (no exaggeration), but it does not prevent me from witnessing the journey of such a perfect lover in the book. I know what kind of author writes what kind of book, so you will be a similar person, at least on the way to becoming such a person. I am full of curiosity and admiration for you. I haven't read many books by female authors. The only ones I can remember the names of are Gu Man and Shanshan. She smiles slightly. Her articles seem to have a tranquil and warm feel, so it's only natural that her articles can be adapted into IP hits. I don't know how you felt when I saw you writing that your collection only had more than 50 items. I felt helpless and self-deprecating. So, after thinking for a long time, I decided to give some opinions. Your article is sophisticated, which is the same as Gu Man's, that is, there is no world view, mainly dialogues between characters, and there are only a handful of characters. But why is Gu Man so popular? Because she is actually a joke maker. She puts together all kinds of silly and sweet jokes into a book, and any section can be read separately. The pace is very fast, readers can get started at once, and any section can retain people, so it looks very coherent and beautiful. But if you want to write a plot for this exquisite type, there will be no tension. No matter how exquisite your micro-carved walnut is, it will definitely be far less shocking than A River Along the River During the Qingming Festival. Can the chaffinch compare to the swan? So here you have a branching option: Change the delicate type to the grand type, which means depicting many characters with distinctive personalities and constructing a realistic, concrete and grand world view. Of course, judging from your past articles, this path may not work. The Wild Fox Under the Tree (Department of Chinese Language and Literature, Peking University)'s The God Search and The Wilderness are very popular, if you can accept fantasy novels. So, if you want to be compact, you have to find a way to expand the tension in a limited space. Comparing it with Gu Man's article, the focus of Gu Man's article is not on the heroine at all, but on how the heroine is conquered by the male protagonist. When reading it, female readers have a kind of erotic pleasure of imagining meeting that kind of domineering president; however, the focus of your work is on the heroine. There are two types of novels from the protagonist's perspective, one is Jin Yong type and the other is Gu Long type. What readers get from the Jin Yong type is the pleasure of character growth, and what they get from the Gu Long type is the pleasure of looking down at all living beings from outside the chess game and strategizing. Your heroine is top-notch from the beginning, so she should be the Gu Long type. However, the characters in Gu Long's books have very distinct personalities, and there are even some supporting characters that leave an impression. To surpass the protagonist, this is his tension, and his plot is suspenseful, unexpected, and even the death of some villains is regrettable. These are his tension, so you have to think about where your tension is. Looking at the worldly mind, I basically don't see tension, and Jiang Xiaoqi, I don't see tension either. Although "The Unpolluted Girl" has no tension, it is actually very close to the level of Gu Man's works. Unfortunately, the juvenile theme does not involve too much love and love, and it cannot satisfy the readers' youthful heart. In the elegant hall, dancing in shackles is tense and very good. In fact, the image of your heroine is the same in my eyes. Maybe it is because that is the ideal image you have pursued all your life. You do not want this image to be slightly flawed. However, what you always express in the book is what you are pursuing, rather than what the readers like. Ask yourself, if I were a reader, could I get a sense of empathy? So, you have another branch here: Change Gulong type to Jin Yong type In fact, "The Heart of the World" is a very typical Jin Yong-type theme. You can write that the female protagonist only has beauty and a little bit of humble self-esteem, and then she grows up little by little after getting in touch with all kinds of outstanding men and experiencing many things. It is best to add some bloody plot, such as the man who once abandoned you regrets it. This kind of readers will buy it the most, and, The reason why the Jin Yong type has more readers than the Gu Long type is that it is long, and the audience can read it at once. For the author, the reader stickiness is also high. If it is the Gu Long type, then the plot concept must be exquisite and the characters must be distinct. This is more difficult, and the length will be short. Therefore, if you want to become a productive and popular author, the Gu Long type is poisonous (unless you are Gosho Aoyama) In addition, your character may be a bit extreme. Those who pursue freedom will always have some extremes in their hearts. For example, Master Hongyi abandoned his wife. To put it mildly, it means he has no regrets. In the eyes of the world, it is selfishness. Therefore, your article can only accommodate two people, the perfect heroine and the perfect lover. Lawyer Liao has a relatively distinctive personality, but you can only tolerate her surrounding the heroine. People like Ji Kun don't write much about it, so even though you are the Gu Long type, you don't have the two selling points of Gu Long, the characters and the plot. The whole text only has a male protagonist and a female protagonist, and the two of them had a fight and it was over after two chapters. Where is the tension? Whether it is love, hate, or something else, at least the readers must first remember that books that can make readers feel emotional, no matter good or bad, are successful as a text. Your elegant hall, dance, and heroine are all flawed, and can make people feel sorry, regretful, and distressed. However, because of your own pursuit of the ideal image, in the world, especially in that kind of birth environment, the protagonist has no shortcomings at all! Is this realistic? Your character goes from flaws to perfection, but you go from fullness to lack. There is indeed a trade-off between popularity and literati sentiment. I believe that evaluating the success of a work does not depend on whether its ideas are right or wrong, but on how many readers it has had an impact on. If you not only want to be popular, but also want to encourage readers to pursue the realm you pursue, then you should change to the Jin Yong type. If you want to be popular, silly, sweet, or sadomasochistic (you were good at this in your early works, and your level is already very high), you can just pick it up again. In fact, I want you to be famous, but I feel a little complicated, because then you may not have time to reply to readers one by one after you are busy, but no matter what, I still hope you are well.

It's very beautiful. I like the story of childhood sweethearts and first love. This subject matter is very precious.

I am very happy that the bandit can understand and go on with Qiqi firmly. I am very touched. Such pure people and feelings that have been consistent for many years can only exist in words. In real life, it is indeed rare for people regardless of their knowledge, character or cultivation to have such pure persistence, and they will be more or less affected by the outside world. That's why I hope to see the childhood sweethearts' relationship go all the way to the end! Thank you Pingyang Jun for writing touching stories with plain words as always, and I will always support you!

Thank you Pingyang for your persistence, everyone has a perfect ending!

You will be unhappy if you know that he is not doing well, and you will be even less happy if you know that he is doing well.

Very good article! Previously, I bought a paper book to share with my children. The children have been asking when the later stories will be published. Fortunately, the ending is now. I use the winter vacation to bring such wonderful and youthful colors to my daughter. I hope she can learn innocence, beauty, persistence, and struggle from Qiqi and her friends! Thank you Mr. Pingyang for bringing us such a wonderful experience!

I can finally give my daughter an explanation for this fairy tale that starts well and ends well. The sequel is over. I recommend it to her during the winter vacation! ! ! ! ! ! Thank you Pingyang for your persistence in this article! ! ! ! ! ! !

More than two years have passed in a flash

Where there is a will, there is a way, and God does not disappoint people.

It's really surprising that a bandit can actually deign to become a courier boy. Can you persist?