
Kalahuo's Collection of Novellas and Short Stories
卡拉火同中短篇集
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 2k Words
- Genre
- No CP
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 10y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
1Chapters
12Favorites
1.2kClicks per chapter
5Comments
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I felt great since I was in the second grade of junior high school
Your second semester is really different from mine.
Ah, your second grade is really artistic.
I just saw you post this today, hehe, why didn't you tell me that you posted a new post, you little devil~ pinch~ I couldn't sleep in the middle of the night and clicked on the friendly link, and then slowly finished reading it. After reading it, I couldn't help but sigh with regret: You Uchihas... Haha, just kidding, but it's great to read this short story in the dead of night, and the writing amazed me. Although I have never been able to grasp the profound things you want to express, because your second grade is not that of ordinary people, you have a realm. Obviously my realm is still at the stage of the evil king's true eye (laughing, if you don't understand the evil king's true eye, go to Baidu, little fairy~) The most emotional sentence in the article is, "The world is vast, but he feels cramped." Sasuke's state of mind is really strong and can be seen on the back of the paper. The ground is a prison, but he cannot keep the world outside. With such a heavy heart, how can he walk far away? Looking at it this way, Young Master Zuo is really willing to live and die, unable to love and hate, well, this is very Uchiha. This gap between the past and the present and the emotions expressed are really amazing. Although abuse is inevitable, as for the tendency of self-deprecation, I feel that from Madara to Itachi and Obito, they all have this tendency in their hearts. No Uchiha is really as proud and hard as they appear on the surface after the death of Chiho. They all have more or less self-loathing emotions. So regarding the treatment of Sasuke's inner monologue in the article, please allow me to whistle to you~ Oops, actually the above is my personal understanding, and it may not be accurate. Since the second young master was cleared a few years ago, I have changed my fandom. Among Uchiha, I only fantasize about the unrepentant Madara. Suddenly this article made me appreciate the long-lost charm and emotion. It is no exaggeration to say that I have regained a little bit of the youthful mood that I used to be a fan of him. As expected, I prefer the tragic image of being tortured (pervert). The most important thing is that the author controls it very well. Sasuke no longer has any bonds. He shouldn't be the kind of person who says, "Although he is dead, he will always live in my heart, and I want to pass on this will." He will not use the previous bonds to motivate himself. If they are gone, they are gone, so they can only remember and be sad and angry, young man. There is nothing wrong with it. Looking back at a short story, I talked so much, and suddenly I felt disgusted with myself, and I covered my face~ Jiyou, please write slowly, I will wait and see~ Chirmi~