
[Free!] The Sky Was Gray and Blue at Dawn
[Free!]天早灰蓝
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- Completed
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- 178k Words
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- Romance
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- Modern Era
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- 5y ago
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- JJWXC
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I was looking for food after completing "Free". Unfortunately, there are very few fanfics about "Free", but fortunately there are several articles that are not many words but are completed. Then I clicked on my wife's article. Although the copy said something like "the process is not necessarily certain", I didn't pay much attention to it at first. It was a sour pull, and I had read it a lot. It was really sweet at first! The pull between teenagers and girls, when they are not together, I want to shout loudly in their ears, "She/he likes you!" Later, the confession also poked me, very young and sweet. Hotaru's tennis is booming, and his wife's writing is also very delicate. It seems that when she sees Hotaru smiling because of her victory in the article, she really can't help but smile for her too. Rin's failure is actually not that important to her heart (because of the original work, but Xiao Rin's private Marseille) because Yingying is here, and her friends are also there, and one day she will be on the world stage and achieve outstanding results. Later, the heroine was forced to leave with her mother, and the part where Xiao Lin and Ying were reluctant to leave was also very sweet! ! But then came Rin's pain and struggle, and saw Hotaru who was completely different from before, and I always felt very regretful. Later, I saw Hotaru's life experience, and saw Hotaru's misfortune, as if she fell from a high platform into the mud, and found out how miserable her life experience was, and there was even another victim, and even her own existence hurt her. The letter she sent did not get a reply, and she closed herself off. "Meiling", who originally thought she was very romantic, became a thorn in her heart. It really makes me cry, but Yingying is very strong, even though she thinks her birth was a mistake. Although it is not described, I am wondering whether Hotaru feels distorted by her appearance? He looks like the father he identifies with, but only because his brother looks like his father. It's like a fake, like but not (sorry if I guessed wrong). I cried for them countless times. The future I imagined when they were young was completely different. Hotaru was introduced to Haru and the others, always with a sly and confident smile. Regarding my mother's speculation, I actually thought at first that my mother was simply escaping from reality because Hotaru's father died in a shipwreck, but in the end I found that my thinking was too simple. A mother would abandon her daughter for her own benefit, but at the same time give up herself for her daughter. It's very contradictory. It doesn't feel completely cold-blooded and selfish, but it's inexcusable. Ahhh, I am typing this late at night. Please forgive my confusing language. After watching the extra story, the two daughters really cried a lot, but in the end they were probably happy. After all, there is no existence more deserving of happiness than them.
Recently, I have been deeply depressed about getting into my senior year. I happened to come across Rin's video, and suddenly I wanted to watch something. I searched for free on jj and kept scrolling down. After seeing this article, I read the first part first, and then spent an afternoon reading the story of Mingling and Hotaru. How can I put it... It makes me feel very uncomfortable and sad. Watching the time move from 15 years to 21 years, I feel like I am really seeing the changes in my wife, and my writing power is getting stronger and stronger... The characters have become so vivid in your writing, and the ocean, youth and love seem to have become real. Thank you for your creation
After reading it, I was left with endless emotion in my heart: My wife used cold words to portray vivid characters, and they seemed to really exist. The article is not long, but it slowly tells the first half of Rin and Ying's life, from their acquaintance at the age of 14 to their encounter at the age of 17. The two seemed to redeem each other. Just like what Rin said in the article, "Ying is companionship. Without her, I would not have love." (Ah, my memory is a bit poor). The many references to the wife in the article are also a great point, pushing the character structure to another climax, and the grasp is super good! It feels like it was only a short three years, but the entire storyline is very full, I really like it! ! !
I didn't expect that Rin wasn't wearing a yukata, but Ying was dressed up carefully to see you [pointing] When I saw the two pouting, I was already praying for Lian. Lian, who didn't show up during the whole process but was still being persecuted, hahaha, is such an old hapless guy. He tried hard to follow her but was forced to eat dog food hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. I enjoyed reading this chapter too! Kiss my wife mua~
I finished the update all night long, and I'm really touched to read this article (ㄒoㄒ). The big writing style gives me a very gentle feeling, and it depicts not only human nature, but also the soft warmth buried deep in my heart. Woo woo woo (what the hell am I talking about...) In short, it's a big contest!
Rin looks so cute when she pretends to be bad haha
They were fifteen or sixteen years old at this time. Why do I always feel that the two children and the relationship between them are full of innocence when I read it (?>?<?) It is really rare to see such simple and beautiful words and feelings as clear as lemonade in summer.
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha I literally laughed my head off when I saw April's misunderstanding. Evil people will have their own trials and tribulations, and it's true that I won't bully you (laughing) (Rin: Who are you calling the evil person???) But April's mental journey is so real... So real that it's suffocating, ah, I can't breathe xxxx I thought of "My Brilliant Girlfriend" that I was watching before But! Anyway! It was too much for her to withhold Yingying's letter and hang up Yingying's phone number (seriously) I will never forgive her for this! (But she also indirectly added 100,000 words to this article???) (Then should I hate her or like her???)
Hahahahahaha Ying is everywhere, even though she is not present in the audience, her name is always there in memories and conversations. The last sentence made me excited for a long time, Rin is so handsome! Also, it's so funny to see Rin deliberately misunderstanding her. He's such a clever guy.
It's Sister Mochizuki—my sister is so sassy—(makes a chicken crow. MP3) Alas, it looks like Sister Mochizuki is really much worse off than Yingying! (Although people are not as miserable as each other) Fortunately, she always has Yao with her! Both of them are not good at words, but they still feel so warm when they cling to each other. Rin, you should learn more from your brother-in-law! (Rin: ??) The little girl Nanase also has a name. I remember when we all said we should just name her Nanase, but it was not adopted! ! ! (Sitting up in shock while dying of illness) Haru's dad is so cute when he takes care of his baby online! And she gave birth to a daughter, daughter Nuharusegao! I think Sister Mochizuki's suffering has been overdrawn in the first half of her life. In the rest of her life, she will have Haruka, Mio, and unlimited sunshine! Happy Mother's Day, Sister Wangyue! (Although I'm late orz) Although this extra chapter has nothing to do with Xiaoying, releasing this chapter on Xiaoying's birthday really makes people feel mixed! After all, Lavender's mother left Sister Mochizuki's TAT in order to give birth to Xiaoying. It was obviously the mistake of the previous generation, but it caused so much harm to the next generation of Mochizuki and Xiaoying. I feel so sad. You four must be happy— (Super loud)