Where You Are Not [Naruto]

I like it so much, I really want it to become my top Madara fan. In fact, I have seen a lot of Madara Otome, and most of them were in the early Warring States Period timeline. At that time, nothing had happened yet, and everything was possible. You could kick Izuna's bento, and you could fall in love with Madara when you retreat. The timeline of this article is rarely chosen after Madara was separated from his tribe after the establishment of Konoha. The heroine cannot change any regrettable things and can only participate in Madara's life. In a sense, this minimizes the possibility of OOC. I also feel that the author's Madara is really close to the feeling of the original work. The period when tide Mei was taught by Madara was like being covered with a super double white moonlight filter of childhood (although we know that the man was really that handsome). So what, you can't meet someone who is too stunning when you are young, otherwise you will remember him for a lifetime. The feeling of the first volume is really very warm and beautiful, so much so that when Xi Mei collapsed after learning about Madara's death, my first thought was "Daddy's flower has fallen, and I am no longer a child." The author's writing style is quite delicate, and some of the plots I'm looking forward to are very touching. It's super xp for me, thank you, thank you [cross hands]. I have always thought that Madara's departure from the village is a very important event, but in other stories I have read, either the progress of Madara's departure from the village was too fast or the story did not briefly mention Madara and then left silently, anyway, there was almost no tension at this node. In this article, when Ban left, tide Mei silently caught up with her, the conversation, hug and the final illusion were so satisfying to me that I cried silently. In fact, most of the second volume is about Xi Mei's growth alone. Sometimes I feel as if she is silently living like the person I admire most. The sharp and stern description really seems like it. Later, everyone who cared about left her, and it felt like she was not alive, but just not dead. What I like most is when they meet again in Volume Three. Just like the author said, if Xiimei didn't love Madara and learned that he was still alive, then she would treat him as an ordinary elder. She would return to Konoha and see him every now and then as a filial elder. But she loved him, so when she learned that he was not dead, she was angry, painful, and even hated. She used the sharpest words to retaliate against him, but knowing that going too far would break both of them, she stopped at the right time and kissed him to comfort him. It's too bitter, too bitter, this conflicting yet tender and painful atmosphere… The final reconciliation was not what I expected. After all, Madara and tide Mei love each other so much and they are the only remaining bond between each other. Reconciliation is only a matter of time. Although there will be no follow-up, after experiencing so many things and finally being together, I know that they are happy and will continue to be happy. Actually, I really want to see Madara Obito and Gentoshi making trouble as a trio [crying]

It has been three years, and I have said that I will not give up. . . I have really been waiting for you for too long, but my love for this work and for Da Da will never change. I really hope that if Da Da can read this review, I will update it quickly. I fell in love with Lord Ban when I was young. I was lucky enough to read this book and meet Da Da. I hope this is not a regret of my youth. Come back. Really, when I dream back at midnight occasionally, I will always think of Lord Ban, this novel, and you. . Every time I think about the fact that this book is unfinished and there is no update at all, I always feel that my heart is empty. There is a corner that has not been filled and cannot be filled. I can't tell what kind of feelings it is, but these feelings have been lingering with me. For three years, I only know that it is getting stronger and stronger, but I still can't understand it. The emptiness in my heart is getting bigger and bigger. It's me who insists. The next one is to tell us that you will not give up. . . . . . I believe you are not a person who makes promises casually, so I have waited for you for three years. I also firmly believe that you will be perfect one day, but I hope to be filled with regrets when my youth is about to end. This is the only Madara fanfic that can't touch my heart. It's also one of the few novels that can touch my heart. I will continue to wait for you. I hope you can come back for more.

I have just read the article my wife wrote six years ago, and I may not be able to see the ending in the future... I can subtly understand Ximei's previous feelings towards Madara: "You are born before I am born, and I am old after giving birth to you."

Will the teacher update again? I know it would be too abrupt to ask this question now in 2025. But I still hope, and I firmly believe that the story between them is not over. After reading this book, my heart was really shocked for a long time. (Let me tell you in advance because I started reading this book in 2025... The group has already filled up, so I am probably reading the abridged version. Woohoo? A lot of them are locked.) But forget it, I am very satisfied to see the exciting parts of this book. The most memorable thing is probably the time when the heroine went to see Madara every day when she was still an innocent girl. I really think it is a very beautiful thing. Many times when I read it, I will unconsciously feel a touch of happiness and loneliness in my heart. In my opinion, Madara is undoubtedly a lonely person. Maybe at that time, the only person who could really understand him, love him, and trust him wholeheartedly was the heroine. (Sorry, I really can't remember the names of the people. I even had to think twice about the names of my classmates.) But I really felt the power of worship. My writing is very poor, please forgive me. First of all, I found the heroine's character particularly attractive from the beginning. At first, I thought she might simply be attracted by Madara's mystery and power, and then this person's charm and power ran through her life, causing her final love to turn into endless despair and hatred. And I think the heroine is really courageous, strong, and dares to love and hate. And free and easy. In short, I think the bond and relationship between the two of them have reached a level that I cannot describe in words, so when I am reading these words, the only person who is reading these words is the heroine. (Sorry, I really can't remember the names of the people. I even have to think twice about the names of my classmates) But I really feel the power of admiration. My writing is very poor, please forgive me. First of all, I found the heroine's character particularly attractive from the beginning. At first, I thought she might simply be attracted by Madara's mystery and power, and then this person's charm and power ran through her life, causing her final love to turn into endless despair and hatred. And I think the heroine is really courageous, strong, and dares to love and hate. And free and easy. In short, I think the bond and relationship between the two of them have reached a point that I can't describe in words, so when I read these words, their stories and the characters' inner monologues. I really felt deeply powerless. Facing fate, maybe I really can't change anything, or maybe I am too weak to have the courage to face fate again. At the end, the girl seemed to me to be hysterical and desperate. It's just that I really can't say anything. Maybe I just want them to be happy, but I still feel that people can't be resurrected, so I don't think I can go back to the innocent life I had before, but I think these two people are still very idealistic. They have the power to change the world and I don't expect them to put it down. I just think that they should take their past and present selves with them to move forward into the future and move towards their dreams again (maybe I am the most idealistic... I don't need to worry about my own nonsense at all... In fact, there is a lot more that I want to say but I haven't edited it yet. I'll post it later when I think of it. I saw that everyone's comments below were all from many years ago (why do they sound like archeology...). I'm really moved. We all love this great work. Finally, I wish you a happy day! Want to be happy??! (Hey, will you come back to update?)

Oh my god, I really beg you to come back (///▽///) This is the only Madara article that made me burst into tears and couldn't help myself. My eyes are swollen every morning, not only because of the characters' experiences and the ups and downs of the plot, but also because I think of the sadness I have experienced and this article is far away. Lost... I know that Dada has experienced very unpleasant things before, but we will always support you and accompany you. You can even come to us at any time to complain or communicate and discuss [as long as you want], just like Madara saved tide Mei, please come back and give us a chance. Okay? If I hadn't seen the ending of this article, I might have regretted it for the rest of my life. I've always been deeply regretful...?

I feel really sad after reading this. I have read a lot of Madara's fanfics and this is one of the rare articles that I can't get out of. The author's writing style is really great. I feel that the first volume has some emotions that go beyond love, but the foreshadowing for Madara and Genxi's emotions later does not seem too abrupt. In the finale, I personally regard the knight as being with Madara, whom she has always wanted to protect, and will never be separated. Just think of it as the best ending... Madara and Genxi must be happy. The stamina after reading it is so great, and the more I think about it, the more touching it becomes. This book is well-deserved number one in my heart

This article is enough for me to have spots in my life...

Come and relive it! The first time I read Madara BG was this book, and I immediately got the charm of Madara. It opened the door to a new world for me at that time. The big characters are really well designed. Every character who appears is a flesh-and-blood person (unlike the current fan fiction where the supporting characters are just tool people). Thank you again to the author for creating such a good work! <3

I always fall into a tangled state when watching Madara's BG, because I feel that Madara is so good (in all aspects) that even a ninja god like Hashirama cannot walk with him on the road to his dream. It is too difficult for a woman to struggle with a person like Madara to write well. Huanxi is one of the few female protagonists I like. Although I personally belong to the kind of athletic, short-haired and muscular man, in terms of taste, I prefer the kind of gentle, restrained, delicate and traditional Japanese women. Although generally speaking, such women are unlikely to have a long-term relationship with Madara (unless Madara stays in the village to live as a retired patriarch hhhh). Therefore, you can't have both... I don't watch Madara BG very much, and he wanders in the pillar pit all day long. . . I felt very sorry for Huan Xi when I saw it later. I usually put myself into Madara's role when reading the novel, but this time I turned into Huan Xi in the later part. So when I saw Madara's return, I felt that Huan Xi's reaction was a bit different. . How should I put it, I regard you as my faith and my only dream, and you just died without any meaning at all. It took me a long time to accept your death, because your death has greatly damaged Konoha's strength. The war broke out, and my family and friends died because of the war. You suddenly came out and told me that you are not actually dead. You just hide in the cave and sleep all day long? ? If it were me, my first reaction would be that this person doesn't take me seriously at all. I'm nothing compared to other people's ideals, so I'm still a little annoyed with Master Ban (but actually I can't blame him, because when he got along with Huan Xi, his ideals were still unformed, and it was not necessary for him at that time to cut off the bonds or pinch out the seedlings). I regard Master Ban in this article as the one in the original work. I watched Madara, and what I really admire about it is that you were able to write a completely different Madara without making people feel OOC (I think the reason why those girls in the front felt OOC was because there were so few scenes showing Madara and his close relatives in the original work. Even most of the scenes between Hashirama and Madara happened after Konoha established the village. At this time, the two of them were the heads of the two clans, and their relationship as colleagues would definitely not be the same as when they were children. He took off his pants while peeing like that and threw his penis into the river. So although we all know Tobirama's Uchiha theory that whoever is stronger will love the most and Hashirama's theory of gentleness, piety and responsibility, but this is too pale and just a label. Knowing it does not mean true understanding, so the general impression of it still remains on the surface of being cold, belligerent and unstable, so it is normal to think of OOC. When you make up your mind, When you write about the side of Madara that no one understands, some people are bound to think it is OOC. The side of Madara getting along with his close relatives is completely blank in the original work. Before that, my favorite part of Madara's family relationship was Uchiha Izuna's Darkness, and now that you are gone, I really like the interaction between Madara and Genxi.) Oops, I just said a lot of nonsense. .

When I saw "You have grown up", I instantly broke my guard.