
[Naruto and Rin] Help! Why Is My Match the Most Wanted Criminal in the Galaxy?
[火影带琳]救命!匹配对象怎么是星际头号通缉犯
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[Orange candy] Got it [Purple candy] kswl This one comes from Chaohua. It has been in my favorites for a long time and is finally on holiday! I was so excited when I watched it that I kept taking screenshots and screaming for my best friend. () It is a very special setting and the world view is well constructed. It is completely different from the original work, but the way Xiaotu and Xiaolin treat each other is equally sincere. Lin does not treat Obito differently because he is a wanted criminal. Her bright eyes are still looking at him. Even if Zuto can't suppress his impulse, the first thing he thinks about is Lin's position. When I read it, I was always curious why it was just a temporary mark. Later I realized that this was Obito giving Lin: "I hope you always have the right to choose freely." It is a good explanation that love is entrustment, not possession. Many people tend to fall into the stereotype of physiological drive when writing ABO. Belike, our compatibility is so high that we can get married right where we are -. Obito's pheromones are not a simple tool of conquest, but the externalization of his pain, obsession, and unquenchable love; Lin's Omega status does not mean weakness, but instead becomes her unique talent for understanding Obito's inner storm and soothing everything with the breath of her hometown. Although it is a cute light comedy, the underlying emotional discussion is very serious and in-depth. Is love based on instinct (pheromone) or free will? Is there a compromise between personal happiness and worldly responsibility? Obito's struggle to "save both the world and Lin" This article gives a warmer answer, but the tearing and entangled feeling in the process still has the shadow of the original work. Whether it is handing over the spaceship and Lin's anonymous life or continuing to complete her career, this is the goal he pursues. What moved me most was the portrayal of Xiaolin - she is not a typical Omega waiting to be marked and rescued. Faced with the shocking change of matching with a wanted criminal, her reaction was real and layered - from panic, accepting the committee's task, to gradually understanding, and even taking the initiative to approach Obito. Especially at the decision-making moment of the "secondary match", I once guessed that the match would be with someone with a different identity, but I didn't expect that the glands would be removed! She soberly chose "Be it lonely, not him, she doesn't want anything." This courage transcended the pull of pheromones and the matching of genes, and was a determination from the heart. She redefined this relationship in her own way, making "protection" no longer one-way, but supporting and respecting each other, and even later went to Tu's hometown to provide medical aid. This is undoubtedly the best extension of the kind and persevering medical ninja in the original work. "Why is the matching partner a wanted criminal?" - The story begins with a ridiculous coincidence, but ends with a well-thought-out journey across the stars. This may be their most extreme romance. Thank you for the baby's food production. Dailin Universe is happy to have you! Please keep writing such beautiful words [Blue Heart]💜
In the ABO framework, when I picked up Dai Lin's "Unfinished" and followed this Dai Lin ABO fanfic, I always felt as if my heart was being dipped in warm water - it did not deliberately subvert the original work, but used settings such as pheromones and imperial conspiracy to make up for Dai Lin's "almost" regret into a hot and soft obsession. Let me first lament that the author understands Obito's "twisting" very well. In the original work, he was a madman who fell into the abyss for Lin, but here he has become an upright and wanted criminal who "wants to save the world but is afraid of burning Lin": it is clear that the pheromone and Lin are welded to death, but he hides the thought of "I am a dangerous person" and pushes her away; the temporary mark under the empire's surveillance is a sign of immorality, but the details of him blushing and avoiding Lin's sight drag the "paranoid boss" back to the boy who scratched his head at Lin's smile. This contrast is too shocking - his "save the world" is never an empty slogan. He is afraid that Lin will live in the turmoil caused by him, so he would rather label himself as a "wanted criminal" and even think about "whether it will implicate her" even when they meet. The reader said that he has a "heavy self-destructive tendency" which is quite accurate, but this self-destruction is all wrapped up in the weakness of "I am afraid of hurting her even when I breathe". In many ABO stories, omega is a "protected symbol", but here Lin is "the person who takes the initiative to catch Obito": from the instinctive attention of pheromones, to understanding the anger at injustice behind his "save the world", to seeing his fragility in the imperial conspiracy - she is not Xiaolin waiting to be rescued, but a fellow traveler who can pat Obito on the shoulder and say "I recognize your ideals too". The dream in Chapter 12 is so amazing: the blurry kiss and the dazzling light, it's like the "hand that Obito didn't grasp" in the original work was clenched tightly in the dream, and the loss in waking up added to the tension of "we are still on the run in reality". Her psychological struggle is so realistic: She is greedy for the closeness caused by the pheromone, but she is also afraid of breaking his thread of salvation. This entanglement of "wanting to get closer but being afraid of being held back" prevents "pure love" from floating in the sky, and falls in the fireworks of "two idealists are afraid of delaying each other". The best thing is the echo of "Unfinished". In the original work, Obito did not dare to see Lin until his death. Here he is also struggling with "meeting Lin" and "saving the world" - but the difference is that Lin is waiting for him, waiting for him to understand "I should be in your ideal." The "monitored" part of the temporary mark was a knife, but the sugar leaking out of the knife's gap was even sweeter: he gritted his teeth to endure the pheromones, but squeezed her hand tightly when she was trembling; she called him "idiot" with red eyes, but took the initiative to rub the side of his neck. This is not a "mark". It is two people who have been forced into a corner by the world and finally dare to admit "I need you." It's really delicious to see someone say "I want them to keep kissing" - the most awesome thing about this article is not "rounding up Dailin's HE", but allowing them to use the ABO setting to dismantle the unspoken "I care about you more than the whole world" in the original work into the itch of pheromones, the unethical kiss, and the look back during the escape. Obito's "I don't dare to see you" and Lin's "I'll wait for you" are all footnotes of "in our ideals, we should pretend to be each other". The only greed is: wanting to see more of their "vulgar" daily life - for example, Obito secretly brought Akahoshi flowers to Rin, and she complained that "a wanted criminal still dares to visit the flower market"; for example, Rin hid his wanted notice under the pillow and wrote "I didn't get caught today, so good". After all, no matter how great the savior is, he should still have room to "bathe in the sun with you." This article is not a "fan". It stitches Tai Lin's "almost" regret into the tenderness of "even if we are on the run, we can still hold each other's hand" - after all, the best love is never "I give up everything for you", but "I want to occupy a place in everything you have."
After reading it quickly, I felt it was so good... The teacher really grasped the essence of Dai Lin. In addition to physical attraction, what they care about more is actually spiritual communication. The portrayal of Obito as a terrorist who resists the fruit company really grasps the essence of the character. The plot arrangement of the purpose of the empire is very exquisite. In the end, it is a good ending for both CP and CP. It is really great... The teacher is so good at writing...
The mutual attraction between the two is engraved in the pheromones. The almost completely matched pheromones also represent a complete burst of desire, but the two of them pay more attention to spiritual compatibility with each other. They are obviously a match made in heaven, but the two of them have to be platonic, so pure love. What draws them in is a common dream and a mission to help the weak. But the two of them still have careful thoughts when facing each other. When Lin was matching, she still couldn't help but fantasize about her future partner, until Uchiha Obito's face appeared in front of her. Due to her genetic attraction, although she thought "it won't affect me", she kept thinking about him and kept searching for his information. In fact, this is the "seeing" of the original work, seeing everything about him under his status as a wanted criminal, and accepting everything about him. Unlike others, Lin is the only one who understands Obito from the beginning. Although it may be just out of her instinct at the beginning, she slowly understands the inequality of the world and truly understands Obito. At the same time, the people of the empire used despicable means and used the alpha and omega that they naturally loved to force Obito to confess, which also made her see the darkness of the empire. However, in addition to his ideals, Lin also saw his lovely side beyond his ideals. For example, he would blush and be shy when he saw her. In fact, she really cared about his feelings for her! Besides love, Obito wanted to protect her, and he wanted to possess her but had to push her away due to some strange combination of circumstances. The temporary marking section was really about a loving couple being observed and monitored in a completely transparent space, and both parties involved broke out in extreme helplessness, and finally completed the marking under the supervision of officials. It was very irritating and unethical, but it was good to watch. The official represents authority, and he in prison and she, who is treated as a pawn, are players in the game. This means that when they are most vulnerable, two people will warm each other up. After finally escaping, Obito didn't want to look for Lin again, also out of consideration for her safety. He could accept Lin and him not being together, as long as she was happy and lived an ordinary life. He doesn't know that Lin will still choose him... It reminds me of the Kamui space where Obito showed Nohara Lin who said "I like you" to Cassie, but the real Lin was always looking at him. The long-awaited reunion back at Akatsuki headquarters was different from the temporary mark of being monitored. The two were finally able to be together wholeheartedly. The suppressed ending was the ultimate explosion. The kiss scene was so perfect. It felt like my daily life after they were together. I saw my real aunt laughing after staying in the room for a day. The young couple was so full of energy. But I can now understand why one of the endings Obito envisioned was to hand over the location and be with Rin. In this story, his rationality is for the justice of Akahoshi, and his sensibility is with Lin. During the negotiation, his love for Lin, emotion defeated rationality, but afterwards he was grateful that fate had allowed him to embark on the path of rationality. Even if he lost Lin because of this, he would not bother Lin again. In the end, just like the original work, Obito is an unsung hero and even leaves a negative comment in history, but Nohara Rin doesn't care. What she liked had always been Uchiha Obito himself, not about status or winning or losing.
Thanks for the output, thank you for your hard work, teacher... QAQ I want to say that I am pregnant! In fact, in the middle of the story, I thought that Obito would try to escape and get seriously injured, because I felt that Obito was the kind of person who would risk everything for Xiaolin, and would do anything for Xiaolin. But the Toko brother in this story is a decent person, so I can't figure out whether he will choose to save the world or Lin. Maybe he will go through psychological torture, but I feel that the Toko brother will do his best in everything and fight to the death. Brother Tsuchiko is the savior. He will definitely do everything about Rin himself, whether it is escaping, rescuing Rin, or returning to Akahoshi with Rin (I don't think he will let Rin be put in any danger, especially during the war, he will not care even if he faces the danger of Iwagakure) 😭 I think Obito has reached the level of paranoia towards Rin [covering his face and laughing] It would be great if Obito could be more proactive in participating in Rin's important moments! He really cares about not saving Lin that time... (I feel that Obito is a person with serious self-destructive tendencies. I even think that he will be so depressed that he will let the empire protect Lin, but because of his own risk factors, he would rather never meet her. In the end The key thing is, I think if the price of meeting Lin is to let go of Akahoshi's dream, he should not want to meet Lin again, just like when he was defeated in the original work, he said he had no face to see Lin) I have finished explaining the explanation, let Lin fall in love and have a good time! Getting to know each other from the beginning, their common dreams after becoming familiar with each other, and Obito's respect for Rin. Whether they love each other because of pheromones or true love, there is room for discussion. This is really restorative. The dream at the beginning of Chapter 12 is really written about the wife. I thought that the chapter was skipped. The kissing scene is so beautiful. I really want them to keep kissing like this... The second match, Rin's psychological struggle, even if Brother Toko will not come again, she does not want a future without him. This kind of relationship is really firm. Then the several scenes of kissing and tagging were really beautiful, and I felt like my love was about to overflow. That's probably all. Anyway, I like the teacher's works very much. I also read the articles that the teacher previously posted in Hongbai. They really smell good. Thank you, teacher, for producing the food!!!
I can't help but I'm so stunned 😢😢😢After reading the whole article, I kept laughing that my CPs were finally together, hehe, but there were also times when I felt sour and sour. When I saw Xiaolin and Brother Tu missing each other but couldn't be together, I really felt a pang in my heart and so sad! The teacher's writing style is very delicate. It allows us to feel the true feelings of Dai Lin and the two people. We can feel the process of two people from being strangers and wary to slowly opening their hearts and falling in love with each other. Tuzi brother and Xiaolin are both people with great love, so I think it must not only be the reason why they can fall in love. The process of Tuzi brother and Xiaolin talking to each other. Zhong must have also discovered similarities with each other... Brother Tuzi overthrew the Red Star government for the sake of the civilians of Red Star, and Xiao Lin became a doctor for the injured people. Both of them changed their views on each other because of their similar beliefs. In the end, they really fell in love with each other. I really want to cry😭😭... Dai Lin is really happy... Teacher, please continue to be prolific. I love watching it!
It is truly a supremely delicious article... I watched it when I first browsed it on The further you look down, the more you look at it. It doesn't deviate from the character. Lin is still the sunny little girl. In order to save many people who are suffering, she became a doctor. When she proposed to help Akahoshi, she immediately thought that she is indeed Lin. Obito is still kind in his heart, and he does not hesitate to sacrifice everything for the sake of the world's righteousness and dreams. I I really cried when I saw the sentence "I hope you always have the right to make free choices". Obito is never a forced paranoia, but a soft and warm heart under the strong appearance... Let's lead Lin to live a happy life in every world...
It's so beautiful, this is a state banquet! I must watch every day to stay rich
[Orange Candy] Got it [Purple Candy] kswl is so sweet, so sweet, a whole new world view. It's delicious to eat when you wake up in the morning. I'm full. It's so sweet that I keep rolling over in bed haha. I especially like the sentence "I hope you always have the right to make free choices." Even though my physical and mental desires have reached the limit, I still want Xiaolin to respect her wishes. I feel that she is also a person with a particularly strong self-destructive tendency. It doesn't matter how Xiaolin is happy, but in fact, neither of the two can live without the other. The kiss scene was sour and bitter. The kiss scene was well received. There was no very deliberate description. I can only imagine the scene where Xiaolin was hesitant. The only thing that hurts my stomach is that I feel so bad. I don't care about winning or losing. I don't care about life and death. I work hard to do what I insist on. When I negotiated with the government I hate the most, I used myself as a bargaining chip. I hope to spend the rest of my life with Xiaolin. But after I escaped, I was afraid that Xiaolin would lose her life. Even though I was in unbearable pain, I didn't want to disturb Xiaolin. Brother Tuzi, you really made me cry to death. Brother Tuzi also knew from the beginning that Xiaolin was sent to be interrogated as a pawn by the imperial government. But it can't beat the resonance in his heart. A person who is truly willing to understand him, help him, and blend into him with the most tender and delicate love. This is something I have never experienced in my family. Finally, the receptionist called and said that he would help you build a bridge. Hahaha, eat dog food! Now that Dai Lin is 99, Dai Lin is getting married💗
[Orange Candy] I've had it. [Orange Candy] I've had it. Oh my god, I've been crying. 😭 I read Xiaohongshu in the middle of the night. I came over and read it. A series of settings are so easy to poke me. This is my favorite state banquet, mom, mom. I felt so sweet, distressed, and crying when I watched it. Two gentle and firm people caught each other. After watching it, I felt so soft and sweet, and I secretly felt a little red-eyed. They both love each other very much. In particular, Rin's "I only want you" attitude towards Obito just hits the core of Rin's always being Obito Hikaru in the original work. [Cathead] The kiss scene of the final reunion was not deliberately sensational, but it felt like the emotions that had been stored for a long time finally came to fruition. The details of the young couple lingering in the room were so soft that I turned over and over in bed. This is the unadulterated sweetness they should have. It's so good~😭😭