The Broken Hairpin

The overall writing is very good, especially the heroine who gradually unravels her inner knots through various changes, truly cultivates her mind and nature, and becomes a better self. This kind of growth line is written very smoothly and completely, and it is not just for the sake of character design. The relationship between the male and female protagonists before remarriage was quite good, and they were well pulled together. However, in the later stage, the male protagonist fell out of control. The writing was too awkward. The female protagonist immediately fell in love and was obsessed with everything. She could forgive everything. The habitual thinking that was vaguely hidden in the depths of male superiority and female inferiority came to the surface again through the female protagonist's love for the male protagonist. From all aspects To promote the male protagonist, you must put the female protagonist at a disadvantage in all aspects. What's more, what is unbearable is that the male protagonist really likes to verbally flatter the female protagonist. Even though he does love the female protagonist deeply and has really done a lot for her sincerely, but combined with the frequent moral kidnapping of the heroine by his surrounding relatives and friends, it is really frustrating to watch. But after all, this article was written almost ten years ago. It is relatively good, and the description of friendship and family is quite good. Except for the old lady Yao who is just like Mai Lin in ancient times, you can't say how heinous she is, but the description is very annoying. , In the end, she was paralyzed by a stroke and looked at the pain of other people's family and their beauty, even if she was punished, but I just felt it was not enough, and I couldn't vent my anger. The author was still too soft-hearted, so he chose to go over it in one stroke like a holy mother, and finished it by making a dumpling. I also understand that in my opinion, writing is more important than the author's self-expression. This book is carried out to the end. The heroine did not forget her original intention, paid a lot, and got what she really wanted. I am not worthy here. It is just a boring sigh as a reader. I hope the author will continue to write!

I read your works over and over again and feel wonderful, thank you

I like it so much, I really like it. I really want more people to read this good article. It would be great if it could be made into a TV series. I really want to read your article, but I can't read it, so these are the only ones I can read.

The author said that he did not want to write He as Shen Yan, but she succeeded. He is indeed not as good as Shen Yan and Yousheng. Mrs. Yao has been accustomed to it since she was a child. By the time she reaches old age, it will be too late to educate her. The roots are all crooked.

I just saw this article recently. 996 Patients read it in the middle of the night. I wonder if I will be late to move the bricks tomorrow morning [crying]

Actually, I think Ai Chongshan is cuter than the male protagonist_(:з∠)_

Love your article. I like the inner analysis and monologue in your article. I hope to keep writing and I will follow it.

I reviewed these two articles again, and I still prefer Huanyu, maybe because I am a weak bun.

I stayed up a few nights to watch it, it was really good

This is the third time. I'm running out of books, so I pick a big book to read. Each book brings endless aftertaste.