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- Danmei (BL)
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- Ancient Era
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- 8y ago
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Explore more →The Amazing Stories That Hit All My Kinks
I read both top and bottom POVs, and these are worth rereading. I prefer nonhuman characters, horror, cultivation, Western fantasy, and sci-fi, with strong couples, mutual devotion, and ensemble casts. Plot over romance
Strong Protagonists in Xianxia, Cultivation, and Otherworldly Fantasy
Great adventure and progression stories, or tales of protecting all living beings without powering up. The protagonists have the presence of cultivators, or are small yet unbroken, or defy fate itself
Older Fics, Mostly Fully Purchased
Books I bought before 2020, rated 3–4 stars. See the other list for five-star reads. Two stars means the author had some controversy; this is just for my own records.
Original BL Reading Notes 1
CPJ, bottom-leaning. No insulting the other half of the ship, no breaking up or reversing the ship, and no self-insert romance. Any genre is fine. Pregnancy is a hard no.
Eclectic Mystery Box (Stars = Overall Experience, Not Quality)
I love stories with lots of couple interactions and fantastic plots! (I only remember how the stories made me feel. The plot itself is hidden behind a veil of ignorance x)
Protagonist Enthusiast
An extreme protagonist fan: I’m fiercely devoted to the top when he’s the viewpoint character, and equally devoted to the bottom when he’s the viewpoint character. I love watching the viewpoint character rise in both love and career.
Silly, Feel-Good, and Sweet, Completed Stories
Lighthearted sweet stories, feel-good stories, funny stories, infinite flow, all kinds of fanfiction. No bad endings, please. A little angst is fine, but it must end happily. I'm a scaredy-cat, so no horror. I like interesting premises.
Top-Centric Stories I Enjoy
As long as the writing is good and there are no dealbreakers! I prefer a sweet, affectionate, gentle, carefree puppy of a girl who can take charge, and so on. I can only give four stars. So sad.
For Personal Use: My Years of Finding Land Mines on Xiao Lv
Lately I've been reading more fanfiction than original fiction. I tend to prefer feel-good stories and fluffy, brain-off reads, or stories focused on close platonic relationships. My preferences: platonic relationships > no romance > danmei = straight romance > yuri.
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My Favorite Books to Keep
Books I save for rereading. I have broad tastes and read most genres.
Mutual Pampering, Top-Preference Stories: Personal Recommendations
My opinions are very subjective. If this list offends you, run. Mostly top-protagonist stories, with couples who dote on each other. Absolutely not into heartthrob protagonists or weak tops; I can’t stand them. I also automatically weed out bugs.
Rich in Ancient Charm
Includes xianxia, jianghu, political intrigue, and times of turmoil. I like serious stories, character growth, ensemble casts, and sects. Not a fan of pure fluff. I prefer when supporting characters die. Romance is optional.
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A Life of Being Obsessed with the Protagonist
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Some Fanfic to Enjoy
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Powerful Male-Male Leads
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I can reread them three times and still never get tired of them.
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Danmei I like and have reread many times
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Jian Cheng: Hey! You absolute scumbag! Chen Xuzhi: Hey, you playboy! Jian Cheng: You have peach blossoms all over the cultivation world! Chen Xuzhi: You are so beautiful all over the world. Jian Cheng: You deceived people into guarding the seal for you! Chen Xuzhi: Once you learn the exercises, you will massacre others. Jian Cheng: That's too much! Chen Xuzhi: Tell the truth. Jian Cheng: Then Phoenix will come to compete with me! Chen Xuzhi: Zhong Miaoer also had a romantic relationship with you. Jian Cheng: The master and servant of the eclipse divination turned against you because of you. Chen Xuzhi: The Ye family sisters were separated because of you. Jian Cheng: I finally unify the two paths of good and evil. Chen Xuzhi: I have also restored peace to the world. Jian Cheng: Former Emperor Star! Chen Xuzhi: Ziwei in this world! Jian Cheng: Ancestor of the Great Sun! Chen Xuzhi: Master of Taixuan! Jian Cheng: As expected, you and I—— Chen Xuzhi: A match made in heaven. Jian Cheng: A pair of land designs! Jane & Chen: (laughing) (Me: Big mistake. If there are any discrepancies, think I made them up. If they don't add up, think I made them up.)
Any questions? It was obvious from the moment Chen Xuzhi agreed to marry Jian Cheng that he had never regarded Jiufeng as a lover. At most, he was just a friend or family member. It had always been Jiufeng's unrequited love. What's wrong with him?
I won't rate it if it doesn't give it five stars. To avoid lowering the rating, just write a review at the end. Manual five stars. I really like the growth line of the two protagonists, the maturity of their minds, and the changes in their attitudes towards people. It makes me see that the two people are changing, getting closer to each other, and learning from each other. It's a pity that Chen Xuzhi changed so much in the last few chapters, and it suddenly became dark several times. Jian Cheng's open-minded and open-minded character is what I have always longed for. He can take things up a notch and let go, he is optimistic and brave, he can be ridiculous sometimes but he can hold up when he should be reliable. He is also a top student in science and engineering (sorry, I am a sapiosexual). Although Jian Cheng is often short-sighted, it won't be a big problem with Chen's help. I like Chen Xuzhi's gentle, restrained and sinister character, but the difference between his past life and this present is so great that it's hard for me to integrate it (tears). When it was revealed, it was the finale, and I still didn't fully understand the changes in the character. The plot is very interesting, and it's a pleasure to watch it in one sitting. The supporting characters also have their own character arcs, and each has their own logic for their actions. The author's writing style is light and humorous, often making people giggle. It's just that sometimes it's too refreshing to give out lunches, and some people I like are gone in a superficial way, and there is no heavy color to exaggerate the sadness. But it is such an abrupt but reasonable death aspect that shows the cruelty of the world of cultivation. Sometimes the tenacity and perseverance cannot be killed, and sometimes it is fleeting. People close to you will disappear silently due to bad luck, and enemies will be beaten and killed directly due to accidents. Things in the world are unpredictable. P. S. I hate that there are comments fighting for each chapter. It affects the reading experience too much. When I see interesting flaws, I even have to work hard to restrain my urge to click on the comments. I read the comments to discuss the plot and characters, not to watch some people go crazy. I hate the way the author's complex characterization is flattened by labeling characters as offensive or passive. It seems that the body position can determine a person's character, and the "butt" determines the head. Well, there's no point in getting angry here, and it won't change the minds of those who believe in the dualism of attack and acceptance, but I still want to express my emotion. I hate the practice of labeling characters as attackers and receivers to characterize characters. First, framing people in the "attack" and "sufferer" frames and then filling them with flesh and blood is simply putting the cart before the horse. When I was in primary school, I first watched Danmei instead of romance because I wanted to see equal love and equality without physical differences. Now I can accept romance, and accept the equality of status and love between men and women despite the physical differences. On the contrary, some people are using aggression and suffering to frame two people with no physical differences. If there is no difference, you have to create differences. Sometimes the world is really full of irony.
Ah? Why do I feel that Mr. Tang regards Jiufeng as a heartless younger brother?
The best Xianxia Danmei I have ever seen. I still feel the same way about the article I wrote four or five years ago.
As long as this ending is not the last chapter, as long as the author writes about the senior brother's reaction to Jiufeng, I won't be so speechless. If you don't write about senior brother's reaction, are you afraid that np won't be able to pass the trial in Jinjiang?
Help, I'm so confused. I never thought Jiufeng liked Tang Minghe. I always thought he was a loyal friend. . .
I really hate emotional ambiguity. Before, I was cheering for the protagonist's emotions, but now it's like I've been fed shit.
Why are Jiu Feng and Jian Cheng equally stupid, but Jian Cheng embraces the beauty, but Jiu Feng can only make a big fuss on the wedding day? Jiu Feng, it stands to reason that he had a good chance. He was raised by Tang Minghe's side since he was a child. But what about Jian Cheng? You will find that Jian Cheng has been accompanying his senior brother all the way from foundation building to Jindan and Nascent Soul. Chen Xuzhi recalled that in those days, whether it was the red and white carp, the Xiangliu snake demon, even the old turtle and the big orange cat, as well as the bamboo demon and the Zhong family siblings, he spent a lot of energy to achieve his goals - did we see Jiu Feng among them? With Jiufeng's IQ, it's hard to compare, right? What about after Tang Minghe's reincarnation? Who gave senior brother the opportunity to form elixirs? Chen Xuzhi almost blew himself up for the first time, who saved him? Who killed old man Tianji? Who made his senior brother feel the importance of his existence for the first time? You will find that Jian Cheng is everywhere. So back to the question we started earlier, why Jian Cheng was able to embrace the beauty. Jian Cheng had opened countless harems in his previous life, but in this life, he was able to change himself. But what about Jiufeng? He didn't. Feelings need to be maintained, and they need to be expressed. Just in this life, Jian Cheng was the first to take the initiative to say I like you, so he had a head start. In other words, he was the first in line. So is Jiufeng a pity? It's a pity and it's not a pity either. Because love never makes sense.
Tang Minghe Zhen, oh, this person couldn't curse and scold, and he felt a little distressed. But he is also sincere and ruthless...