Zhu Xian: The Beginning of Fate (GL)

I've read it three times. It's the best Zhu Xian fanfic I've ever seen.

The writing style is very delicate, starting from the original work but not sticking to the original work. This article seems to take me back to the time of Zhu Xian that year. I like Xue Qi very much. She is persistent and single-minded. Xiu's love of "cherishing everything she cherishes" is very touching. They are legends. I am very grateful to the author for presenting an excellent work. Thank you for your persistence and him and them in your writing.

It's actually finished. I really like this article. Apart from the two protagonists, I especially like the pairing of Yan Hong and Jin Ping'er. I think the portrayal of these two people is particularly successful! Thank you so much!

The writing is still good, although the first half contains a lot of descriptions of "whose heart, who's eyes", and similar ones. One or two sentences are enough. The author can't stop writing this kind of description. At that time, I was a little irritated and wanted to complain. Although I could clearly explain something in two words or one sentence, I added a bunch of adjectives, just like when I used to write essays and couldn't hold back the words, so I had to make up my words. After I calmed down and was attracted by the plot, I continued to watch the second half and felt better. I also admire the author for persisting in writing this novel. After all, he felt that there were not many people around him and he persisted in writing more than one million words. I really admire your perseverance. Although it has flaws, I think it is better than some stupid articles on the Baihe Wen channel gold list. I really don't know how some articles got on the list. It's a pity that some good articles are not heard by anyone. It's hard to find even if you want to.

Happy New Year, 9012, I wish all my friends good luck in the Year of the Pig, and all my wishes may come true^_^

Ah! I knew there was something about Zhixuan and Xiaobai. So sad to leave!

I finally finished reading it -) This wonderful article was written 7 years ago, and it is still being read over and over again 7 years later. It is really a wonderful feeling. I wish them happiness forever in that parallel world.

A future that does not require sacrificing one's own happiness is what people really want. Very nice.

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Thank you for being so persistent and writing this article carefully.