Lonely Old Bones

Forget it, let's all be. Although I quite like Master

Lying on the bed and crying, we Awan are suffering so much

(?⌒`?) Where is Ji Mei... Dirty adults want both!

Sigh~ I feel bad. I can't explain it. I feel like these two are being treated differently. ╮ (╯_╰)╭

Completed! I have a lot of emotions. This is the only article recently that made me interested in evaluating the characters in detail. Let me briefly share my personal opinions. If there is anything wrong, I hope you can correct me. The author's writing style is magnificent and the words are gorgeous. The article is always filled with a depressive atmosphere, which is very consistent with Rong Wan's state of mind. This is a very special style in Jinjiang. There are three important characters in the story, the first is Rong Wan. He is a contradictory character in which reality and ideals intersect, and innocence and worldliness coexist. When I was reading the book, I wanted to talk more about my views on him, but it was difficult to put it down. During his lifetime, he was greedy for vanity, longed for power, hated those who were above him, and hated himself who could only struggle at the bottom. Becoming a popular actor was the only way for him to get closer to the world that he was born to be out of reach. Therefore, he hung around among all kinds of rich young men, using his beauty and small tricks to lure the young Wulings to "fight for his head". Only then did he become conflicted and struggled after Mr. Li appeared. Is it sad? Sad. But he also has innate innocence and stubbornness, which is why he beat up the young master and ran out to find the divination master. That's why he cut off contact with the young master and chose to be his equal instead of treating him as a tool. That's why he chose to reject Mr. Li. It is said that actors are meaningless. He is so naive and inappropriate, and yet so pitiful and cute. He later asked to die with the Gua Master, but this was still untimely. Logically speaking, the Gua Master did not trust him and regarded him as a despicable plaything. However, he was still naive and did not want to believe it, so he had to force the person in front of him to prove it with his life, so that he could see this person's heart through the layers of flesh and bones. After his death, at first he couldn't understand why Rong Wan continued to abuse Yuan Qing so much after the misunderstanding was resolved, but later he came to understand it better. I died with hatred and was driven by my hatred to make a doll. I couldn't even see clearly what I looked like. But it turned out that this century-old obsession was just a ridiculous misunderstanding. So who am I who was driven to this day by the hatred of the wrong person? He hurt the immortal because he actually wanted to find a reason to live for so many years. He also hated himself and gave up on himself. He had nowhere to vent, so he had to vent to the closest and strangest person. Fortunately, there were no longer so many misunderstandings after death, and the immortal did not let Rong Wan down after all. He said that no matter what A Wan was, he finally found the reason for the existence of this soul that had been wandering for many years. No matter what he became, Yuan Qing always wanted him to love him. There was finally a person in his life who never regarded him as a plaything. The person A Wan loves has always been Yuan Qing. Although there is a dilemma between love and hate, and hate is even greater than love, is hate not a manifestation of love? In the ending, he let go of the past and is no longer the same actor as before. I believe that Yuan Qing will find him soon, and then the Pipa performer and the immortal can start over again. Another male protagonist, Yuan Qing, is a divination master. When he meets a young actor, he can never let go. He is also an immortal, paranoid and crazy, and has a demonic debt in his heart. In my previous life, I actually didn't quite understand how much the Gua Master's actions were motivated by demons and how much of his true intentions. I believe that the Gua Master never regarded Rong Wan as a lowly plaything, but he also understood that Rong Wan was indeed not that young man without any haze under the sun. The human heart is the most unpredictable thing, and so is trust. People are like a waltz, and they are all looking for the most suitable distance in the intersection. Absolute trust without reason itself has a creepy meaning. If there was no demon, the divination master might still doubt whether Rong Wan would be shaken after Mr. Li appeared, but he would soon be relieved, and then they would be together as before. But the demon appeared, and he amplified the malice in the divination master's heart, making him fall into endless doubts, and even controlled the divination master's body, eventually drowning Rong Wan. In this life, Yuan Qing is no longer the powerless hexagram master. He is a powerful immortal, but he is also crazy in his obsession. Perhaps due to his past life, Yuan Qing was paranoid, dark and extremely controlling in his early days. After Rong Wan regained his feelings, he seemed to have gradually calmed down. He was no longer as gloomy as before and seemed to be just an infatuated person. But judging from his plan to let Rong Wan devour him, he was just hiding his paranoia and desire for control. He wanted to let Rong Wan eat him, wanted Rong Wan to take revenge, wanted to fulfill the promise of his previous life and give his life to Rong Wan. He did everything he thought would make Rong Wan happy, but he never asked Rong Wan. He was still the superior immortal. Therefore, Rong Wan asked him to be a mortal and be truly equal to this person, but he couldn't understand it - he loved Rong Wan, but he didn't really understand him. Even if he was willing to do anything for Rong Wan's wish, he still didn't know why the person he loved so much was acting like this. Later, Rong Wan rescued him and knocked him unconscious. This should be the first time that the lover he carefully guarded was out of his control and told him to be his own master. This should be a very important thing to Yuan Qing. I have never doubted Yuan Qing's love for Rong Wan. He is willing to bear all the pain Rong Wan has brought to him. However, the aloof immortal is willing to die in such an embarrassment for his lover. He knows that he will die but still comes to save Rong Wan. How many people can have such deep love? For him, nothing should be more important than Rong Wan, so I also think that after realizing Rong Wan's true wish, he will try to understand him, respect him, and curb his excessive desire for control. This is also a personal guess. If I'm lucky enough to be right, I wonder if the author's fullness will be shown in the extra story? As for Ji Mei, he really can't be considered the protagonist of this article. In the early stage, his appearance was vague, and he seemed to be just a moody and nervous city lord. The most amazing thing is the inner drama when he finally understood his own feelings, which made him different from the ordinary male supporting characters who can't get it. Specifically, I wrote in a previous comment that rather than saying that he likes Rong Wan, it is better to say that he likes "liking someone". He knew clearly that what he did would only make him completely defeated in the war with Yuan Qing, but he still allowed himself to be dominated by his emotions. He was enjoying the process of an ordinary person falling in love with another person, then asking for nothing, and finally giving up. He had already written the script for this war, and it was clearly written when to destroy the flower and when to let go. Ji Mei told Yuan Qing that he lost, Rong Wan also lost, and only Yuan Qing won with the chips he had already obtained. Rong Wan did lose. He had to admit that he still loved Yuan Qing, admitted that he needed him and could not leave him. Yuan Qing won the love from Rong Wan that he had always had, and I think Ji Mei could not be considered a loser. In this love triangle, he was an anomaly. He loved Rong Wan, but he loved "love" itself even more. In this game, he got his wish and tasted the feeling of "love", so how can he be considered a loser? These three protagonists each have their own characteristics. None of them are perfect characters in the general sense, but they all have their own unique charm, which made me judge the fictional characters involuntarily based on reality. To me, this is a very interesting novel. In addition to the above, I have to say that although the large amount of psychological descriptions heightens the atmosphere and clarifies the psychology of the characters, it still seems too much and is cumbersome. It makes the readers tired and easily makes the characters feel sick. Finally, all the verbosity is just my personal opinion. I look forward to a sweet extra episode! Update soon!

This monologue is really shocking. I didn't like the city lord very much at first. After all, compared to the immortals, his face was too vague. He was a careerist? A person who doesn't know how to love? Or maybe a stick for beating mandarin ducks (laughs)? He seems to be just promoting the development of the story, but as soon as this part comes out, he is immediately different from ordinary male supporting actors (forgive me for describing it this way, I still think the protagonists of this story should be Rong Wan and Xianren). He knew that what he did would only push his beloved further towards his love rival, and would only further prove the validity of the Romeo and Juliet effect, but he still indulged himself and acted like an irrational jealous person. But if he really cared about someone, how could he indulge himself at the risk of losing him? It's not that he doesn't love Awan, but I think his love is based on himself. His inner obsession with "emotion" is greater than the person "Awan" itself. Compared with the immortal, I think his feelings are not so much "I love Awan" as "I like and I love Awan". Therefore, although the immortal is too paranoid and crazy, I am still more inclined to him emotionally. No matter how many misunderstandings and suspicions there are along the way, his feelings are indeed real. In my personal opinion, the author has done a great job!

Say a few more words, Hin likes a strong partner like Ji Mei, but no matter what, he supports the official partner to be his lover from the end, 2333, let Yuan Qing also have sex? Hehe

I am very happy and look forward to seeing you write touching stories one day. Did you think I would say that? Are you stupid? ! Don't you, the author, be more confident in yourself? I think you are making progress with every article you write. I didn't feel that Old Bones was jerky in the early stages. Instead, it was a full description of the characters. The writing technique is also very unique. There is some redundancy, but it is not as unbearable as you think. It seems that the author is very good at exaggerating his own shortcomings and repeatedly worrying about his little shortcomings. As an author, you can perform so well in writing a novel for the first time, so why not be proud of yourself. You always seem to be like this, caring about inadequacies, dissatisfaction and inconsideration. I hope you can care about other things one day. Your progress, your character, your plot. Your writing style is brilliant. You seem unconscious.

Yuan Qing is really annoying to the extreme! Although the author's writing is good, but goodbye, never see you again! ?

I wanted to give the author a long review for no reason, but I read this article intermittently, and some fragments were blurred, so I briefly reviewed it. First of all, the writing style. I really like the author's writing style. I always feel that it is chewed carefully and left a fragrance on my lips and teeth, which is endless aftertaste. The words are not flashy. Beautiful, but always the finishing touch in just the right outline. I feel that the author's writing skills are very profound, and I don't know why. I feel that the author's narrative style reminds me of Mr. Lu Xun. It is probably because you have some similarities and similarities, but there is always a trace of scars, which is touching. I remember that when I first read this article, the writing didn't attract me much, and the cuteness didn't impress me much. I just wanted to see the kneeling and licking I received after the early torture. It can be seen that the author writes the article very carefully, and the structure bit by bit supports the framework and outlines the characters vividly and fully. At that time, the author was slow to update and the progress was slow. Every time I waited for an update, there were always fewer words and more cumbersome outlines, which made me fatten for a while. If I actually came here to be tortured in the early stage and licked on my knees in the later stage, now it is better to be completely impressed by the author's writing style. It has been a long time since I have encountered an article that made me stay longer and consider it carefully. The author's exquisite words always make me unable to help but read it back and forth. What impresses me so far are some of the dialogues and phrases, which always give me a sense of amazement. For example, when Rong Wan was an actor, he was pestered by the young master. The young master said, "You will not lose your appearance, and I will not lose my money." Rong Wan is selfish and vain, and his humanity has been thoroughly exploited. He can understand what others want from him and what they are greedy for. He is a human being, and his essence is pure. He lives a very sober life, struggling soberly and stubbornly. He holds on to his self-esteem. I don't know why, but I actually want to cry. The tone of the writing style is feminine, sinister, and a little cruel. The characters in it are all incomplete and incomplete. The perfection is like a false illusion, which can be broken at the first glance. That's not worth mentioning. In the later period, Rong Wan seemed to be a little twisted, and those dark and repressed emotions that were difficult to vent were slowly revealed, but he could not be more cruel. He was a little soft-hearted after all, and he also knew his soft-heartedness. He resented Yuan Qing's calculations, but he was still closely entangled with this person. This part was a bit bloody. His resistance was always so powerless, and he could only use childish and stupid methods in return. The more cruel he was, the less he would be released. The memory was also sweet. Although it soon became like a broken mirror, they should have had a moment of joy when the wedding ceremony was held, but it was all stripped away of falsehoods. The divination master understood the actor's vanity, his restlessness, and his greed and desire. He could not condone it. He could only find another way. Fortunately, he found it, and that was to ruin the actor. Love and hate are tangled and twisted imperfections. I don't like Yuan Qing. I feel that his feelings are not that pure. He wants too much and can't let go. He also tries to hold Rong Wan tightly in his hands. I hate his selfishness, just like when he was a divination master and destroyed the actor for his own selfish desires, he only wanted to make the actor depend on him for life, so that he could not escape from him. I like the part where the author strips away human nature. It made me tremble with fear when I read it. Those ugly and shameful desires were revealed so unabashedly. They are not good people. However, Rong Wan is soft after all. The logic of the author's progress is very clear, and the goals are clear, but the slow-burning foreshadowing always makes people feel too draggy. However, the highlight of the author is the brilliant wording. What I like every time is the author's finishing touch. But it's hard to calm down. After all, Ji Mei was unwilling and helpless. There are so many emotions, but it's hard to calm down. (This is indeed a good article. I always feel that it would be too embarrassing not to write a long review to praise it. However, if there is anything I don't understand well, please forgive me for my clumsiness.)