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(0 v 0) An ancient soul, hoping to forget, begins a new life and makes its way through the thorns.
C.M. and Voldemort made a deal.
A deal with the devil.
For the most ordinary kind of magic love in all the world.
The hero said to the Demon King, "I will kill you!"
Notice of Eating
1. This is a BG romance, one-on-one, with Draco as the male lead. A coming-of-age story, slightly slow to warm up, with a happy ending.
2. Dumbledore won't be bashed, and V won't be whitewashed. I'll do my best to keep everyone in character. Draco has a minor role at first, so please be patient.
3. Important notice: This story is entirely fictional. Please do not imitate anything that happens in it.
4. No comparisons with other works, please.
5. This story will be published on May 21, 2014, with a 10,000-character update that day. Thank you for your support. I hope we can see this through to the very end together ↖(^ω^)↗.
Completed: Original heroine x Kyoya Ootori: [Ouran] The World of the Rich Is Beyond Me
Coming up next: Reborn Pansy Parkinson: [**] Lovely Memories
Original Apocalypse story: [Apocalypse] Great Demon, Little Immortal
Here's Luoluo's author page. Click to transmigrate there.
Intended theme:
I personally think that the most exciting part of this book is the chapters that are free to read. The whole book can be divided into three stages: before the heroine enters school, after entering grades 1-4, and after the Goblet of Fire, the Death Eater stage.
The first stage is also the most attractive to me. Here, the clown-like Lockhart in the original work is brought to life. Because of the addition of the heroine, the originally cool Lockhart has gradually become more responsible. I really like the interaction between the heroine and Lockhart at this time. The joyful father-daughter team is really so loving and heartwarming~ It is at this stage that the foreshadowing of the two heroines' life experiences was laid, ① why they were resurrected and what happened before they died; ② where does the heroine's magic power come from, and why does the vampire heroine protect the heroine so much.
The second stage enters Hogwarts. Because it has the original plot as a basis, although this part is not that original, it is still readable. It also gradually reveals the first two foreshadowings, especially the entanglement between the heroine and Voldemort when she was a child. It's just that after the first foreshadowing was revealed, I stopped caring about it. I felt that it would be better if I could continue writing.
The third stage is my personal least favorite. The heroine has to join the Death Eaters camp and leave school because of her unbreakable bond with Voldemort. This is a purely original plot with no original work to refer to, and it exposes some weaknesses in the author's wife's writing. The plot setting is very sparse, and some aspects feel unreasonable; for example, the love and sacrifice of the heroine's father for her are very poignant, but they are carried lightly; Peter Pettigrew's position suddenly changed to helping the heroine to kill Death Eaters. In the previous chapter, he still captured the image of the heroine's pigtails, but why did the change happen so suddenly without much introduction? There are many more like this... I didn't want to give up and ended up skipping through it, which didn't affect the plot~
Good looking, good looking. One of the best Xiaolong fanfics I have ever read!
After reading Sa Hua Hua, I also read the second spin-off, which I feel is pretty good. The writing of the final battle was a bit jumpy, so it would be nice to have one or two more chapters in the extra chapter...
Hahaha, the little dragon that can't be eaten, hahaha
Although it's been a long time... But I unexpectedly found a very interesting article
Suddenly there were a lot of updates Σ( ° △ °|||) Mr. Persimmon is a bit strangely diligent. . .
Updated (≧≦) I really want to bite a persimmon
It's great. Please tell me more about Silly Baitian.
Give Persimmon a little encouragement!
It turns out that the foreshadowing was laid so early. Kelly's identity is really intriguing.
Having been with Voldemort and being reborn is no longer simple. Before that, there was the identity of Bonnie!
The story has officially reached its climax, Little Persimmon-kun continues to work hard.
But I'm still confused about Draco being close to other girls before!
I personally think that the most exciting part of this book is the chapters that are free to read. The whole book can be divided into three stages: before the heroine enters school, after entering grades 1-4, and after the Goblet of Fire, the Death Eater stage. The first stage is also the most attractive to me. Here, the clown-like Lockhart in the original work is brought to life. Because of the addition of the heroine, the originally cool Lockhart has gradually become more responsible. I really like the interaction between the heroine and Lockhart at this time. The joyful father-daughter team is really so loving and heartwarming~ It is at this stage that the foreshadowing of the two heroines' life experiences was laid, ① why they were resurrected and what happened before they died; ② where does the heroine's magic power come from, and why does the vampire heroine protect the heroine so much. The second stage enters Hogwarts. Because it has the original plot as a basis, although this part is not that original, it is still readable. It also gradually reveals the first two foreshadowings, especially the entanglement between the heroine and Voldemort when she was a child. It's just that after the first foreshadowing was revealed, I stopped caring about it. I felt that it would be better if I could continue writing. The third stage is my personal least favorite. The heroine has to join the Death Eaters camp and leave school because of her unbreakable bond with Voldemort. This is a purely original plot with no original work to refer to, and it exposes some weaknesses in the author's wife's writing. The plot setting is very sparse, and some aspects feel unreasonable; for example, the love and sacrifice of the heroine's father for her are very poignant, but they are carried lightly; Peter Pettigrew's position suddenly changed to helping the heroine to kill Death Eaters. In the previous chapter, he still captured the image of the heroine's pigtails, but why did the change happen so suddenly without much introduction? There are many more like this... I didn't want to give up and ended up skipping through it, which didn't affect the plot~
Good looking, good looking. One of the best Xiaolong fanfics I have ever read!
After reading Sa Hua Hua, I also read the second spin-off, which I feel is pretty good. The writing of the final battle was a bit jumpy, so it would be nice to have one or two more chapters in the extra chapter...
Hahaha, the little dragon that can't be eaten, hahaha
Although it's been a long time... But I unexpectedly found a very interesting article
Suddenly there were a lot of updates Σ( ° △ °|||) Mr. Persimmon is a bit strangely diligent. . .
Updated (≧≦) I really want to bite a persimmon
It's great. Please tell me more about Silly Baitian.
Give Persimmon a little encouragement! It turns out that the foreshadowing was laid so early. Kelly's identity is really intriguing. Having been with Voldemort and being reborn is no longer simple. Before that, there was the identity of Bonnie!
The story has officially reached its climax, Little Persimmon-kun continues to work hard. But I'm still confused about Draco being close to other girls before!