My Hand Through Your Black Hair (Harry Potter Fanfiction)

Checking in again in 2025, the last time was 4 years ago [Milk Tea]

Check in 2018! I, Hu Hansan, will come to read this article again, White Moonlight, White Moonlight!

Say goodbye to this article, and also say goodbye to this author. See you again.

The emotional line actually feels a bit strange. After reading the comments, I realized that it was too OOC to be so strange, hiahiahia, but in fact, I don't think it is particularly bad. Although the writing style is not particularly good, it is actually not bad. He seems to be an old writer. Someone wrote it a long time ago. It took a few years for me to remember to read the article. Hehehe

The structure and content are good, except for the ending. I personally don't like children, and I don't like VH picking up Lily's child, so I also like the ending.

This article is indeed a classic. Although it seems to be very good from today's perspective, its status cannot be denied. The anti-Soviet craze has not subsided recently, and I see people everywhere saying that something is wrong here and there. I just want to ask those who criticize the author to look at the publication date, the article in 2007. At that time, the Soviet Union was very normal, and every time had its popular memes, such as Black Lion House Black Lao Deng. As for OOC, writing fan fiction is not OOC. In my opinion, falling in love is the biggest OOC.

I can't complain about the name. All the names are in English. . . . Chinese and English are weird together! Very sexy!

So what... I want to ask if you are over 16 when you read all of this article? I admit that I also liked Su Wen when I was 12 years old... I had read Meteor Love and so on... I heard that this book is a classic and I just read it... Several years have passed, and some people still say that this book is very good... Maybe the author wrote it at the time when books like The Boss Falls in Love with Me were popular, but now it is 2014 and some people still say that this book is good! ! ! I just came here to complain about the last one!

In fact, the reason why I came to read this article is that many people say that this article is a classic-especially it is frequently mentioned in the answers that Baidu knows. So even though I am a Snarry addict, I still came to watch it. What I didn't expect was that this article had such a serious OOC tendency. I have already mentioned that I like the pairing of Snarry very much, which means that I can accept a slight OOC. After all, if there is no OOC, it is almost impossible for Harry and the professor to be together. But the characters in this article can no longer be explained by being slightly OOC. Let's talk about James first. One is Harry's attitude towards James. The author has given an explanation for this. I don't remember the original words, but the general idea is that any individual will always have bad feelings towards people who keep making trouble for themselves. I don't agree with this. Even if James keeps messing around, he is still Harry's father. It was he and Lily who sacrificed their lives to save Harry. So I don't think that Harry, who is in his twenties and has been through a lot of tests, will lower James' status in his heart because of James' ignorance when he was young. The other thing is that James likes Lily and Harry at the same time. I don't know how much the author hates Gryffindor, so that James and Sirius become pure scumbags. What James did when he was a student was indeed a bit despicable, but his dedication to Lily has always been his indelible shining point. We all know that the professor loves Lily deeply, but this does not mean that James' love for Lily, which seems less magnificent in comparison, can be questioned casually. The author carelessly erased this obvious advantage of James, which makes me feel very regretful. Next is Lily. The author once mentioned that the reason why Lily is kind and great is just because Rowling wants to praise Harry's mother. However, every character in HP, including this world, was created by Rowling. This kind of choice is entirely based on my own preferences and needs, rather than an objective treatment, which makes me feel very unworthy of Lily. I don't think there's much to say about Sirius. I think the author must not have discovered even a little bit of his merits. Dumbledore is now at the peak of controversy [laughs]. I don't need to whitewash this old man. Some of the things he did are inappropriate and cruel, but it is undeniable that he is a great man. As the original book says, he is worthy of the title of the greatest white wizard of the contemporary era. It's a pity that he becomes a clown in this book. Now let's talk about Harry. The author made Harry a few years older than in the original work, and Harry changed so drastically that I didn't know how to evaluate him. He seemed to have completely abandoned his previous values, forgetting how many people Voldemort and the Death Eaters had killed - what, was that done by V in the future? But I thought they were the same person. Admittedly, this change cannot be said to be bad. So, I decided to put aside the question of what Harry's character should be and talk about Harry's appearance and magic. Harry is very beautiful. How beautiful is he? He was so beautiful that he put on a hairpin and a beautiful robe, and then walked around in public, and people all over the world were fascinated. And what about his magic? Even though he is only a teenager, his body can carry magic power that even Dumbledore was shocked by. Even Voldemort may not be able to match it when he was young. There is a very typical noun that can be used to describe this kind of character, and that is "Tom Su". People who travel through time can bring a lot of things, but it also depends on whether the container can hold them. Finally there was Voldemort. The V in this article carries the fantasy of many little girls: there is such a person, he is very powerful, sometimes a little evil, and very smart. He is popular with countless people, but he never gives them a good look - his good looks and gentleness are only given to the one he loves most, and that is himself. Such a partner is indeed very attractive, but this person will not be the real V, he will be an original character wearing V's skin. I don't want to list in detail the difference between V in this article and V in the original work - of course you can say that V in the original work was blackened by Rowling, and I have heard many such comments - but I have to say that whitewashing too much is a very representative approach that disrespects the original work. I quite like Draco, but I don't deny that Draco is a little bastard. What I like is the little bastard Draco in the original book. I like the professor, but that doesn't mean I'm going to dismiss the problem of the professor being mean-spirited - he's just mean-spirited, venomous, and vindictive. You may like V, but what you like is the V modified by you, not the real V. Having written so much, it only involves a few characters, and I don't want to continue with the rest. It's all OOC. However, it can be seen from the author's remarks that he has passed the age of liking Gryffindor. In the author's eyes, Gryffindor is extremely childish and ridiculous. If he cannot treat the four houses equally - at least when writing, it is impossible to write an objective work. Such as Rita

For a long time, Voldemort didn't look very good when facing his son alone. How can I put it, having children was originally my dream, but I watched this little episode with great joy Maybe it's because Hall V gave birth to a child. I always feel that HARRY's love life won't be worth it