[Harry Potter] Pride and Prejudice

Looking back, it is Harry who is arrogant and prejudiced, and Ola has become just a wife who drifts with the crowd and has no sparkle.

First of all, I would like to thank the author for generating love. But I still have to say that it was too scary to read it all at once. At the end, I felt how ruthless the heroine was... Was the author taken away from her? ? ? The text describes everything before the second breakup The plot is just right. Ola and Harry go from pranks and friction to hormonal adolescence to finally opening up to each other. The emotional line is very pure and has sexual tension. The characters of both people are full and delicate. Ola's arrogance, Harry's kindness and slyness. They are all full of the freshness and cuteness of teenagers. My aunt laughed the whole time I watched it. But after the second breakup, and after Harry attacked Aura, I felt as uncomfortable as being fucked by a piece of shit! Harry's character completely collapsed. At the age of nineteen, when he was supposed to be young, he turned into a greasy, wretched, and possibly domestically violent daddy. Ora went from being a self-reliant and proud young woman to a "beautiful girl" who spends all her time acting coquettishly on Harry. In the BE extra chapter, the author even specifically wrote that she had become a depraved and humble prisoner who wanted to sell her body to Harry in the interrogation room. The most disgusting part is the scene where the heroine gives Harry a blowjob (as well as the "fighting for a son", the fact that a child born in ten months of pregnancy cannot be named by himself, etc.), And the scene in the extra story where a group of male characters discuss girls' bodies obscenely, the meaning of which is unclear. And maybe the author wants to highlight the "political" factor, because Harry and others finally achieved political victory, so they can become superior to the heroine? ? I understand this plot but have no respect at all. Also, in the Auror chapter, Harry spoke in a vulgar and obscene manner that was very uncomfortable. What was he writing about? ? It completely destroyed the image of Harry that was successfully created in the first seventy chapters. I advise everyone: just read the text, otherwise you will be so angry that you can't sleep. The ending of this article can no longer be described as "bad". It is completely bad from a male perspective.

I didn't want to leave a comment at first, but after thinking about it for a long time, I still don't understand why HP is such a spoiled wife literature. Is there any benefit to be gained by deifying a man and belittling a woman? Let a living woman surrender to a man and take the initiative to gain his love, and the protagonist is Harry. I really don't think Harry will be like this in a relationship, and he even takes action against the woman? This kind of man is no longer just "arrogance and prejudice", he completely needs to be given up by women in the emotional world, and my final question is... Is this really Harry? Really?

I don't think Harry and Ola are on a relatively equal footing in this book. Ola doesn't have a complete personality from beginning to end. Although I like Ola very much, and I think the author who wrote this kind of setting and created power for love is excellent, I still feel pity after reading it no matter how many times I read it. Originally, Ola might be able to become a better player than Klum with her talent and hard work, but she gave up on her own, although her reason was that others on the field might attack her injuries, and that she only competed to prove herself. But every great athlete has injuries all year round. None of them has stopped or given up their career because of this, because this is the power of passionate faith. Not only have they achieved outstanding results, but they have also been praised by their opponents. It makes sense to want to prove yourself, but if you can prove it in one game, others will question her again in the next game. After quitting the game and returning to her family, Ola will not have the quality and willpower to prove herself again. I believe everyone knows that sports competition is actually quite cruel, especially for female athletes. It is really a pity that Ola has not thought about fighting injuries and fighting herself. She can obviously get more things through her own abilities, a more successful career - and even a better man. But this is the power of love. No one forces Ola to become an independent woman. She becomes a member and spends more time at home with her husband and children. There is nothing wrong with giving up her career for love. But she will never be able to stand up for the rest of her life. Without her young body, tenacity and strength, she will always be trapped in the identity of Mrs. Potter. Harry has become her only support. It would be best for her to keep relying on him, but no one can guarantee it. In the original work, Ginny relied on her own hard work and strength (everyone who has read the original work knows that Ginny is very powerful and courageous) to become an excellent reporter. This is completely different from Ola. I think Ginny is better in terms of career and personality charm, which is also a bit sad about this work. But this work itself is very good, except for the concept and the portrayal of the protagonist, it is impeccable

I watched it a year ago. I felt that the final episode was not very satisfying, but it was much better than most old Ford JJs. The front part was really great. To be honest, a free long fanfic was suddenly judged by so many people. I thought it had written something that directly subverted the protagonist's three views. Don't look like a god when reading free articles. If you don't like it, you can leave. It's enough that the characters in the text are not big problems. It's really weird to hit the cook while eating.

The backend is so bad... I know the author is Harry Dreams, but the heroine is also an independent character...

Wow, a very good article, it successfully corresponds to the title of this article. The author is also very biased. He writes well at the beginning, but towards the end, he writes the heroine like shit. Don't you think it looks like pua? This is the real spoiled wife literature (applause, applause), the male and female protagonists have completely changed. Look what you wrote about Allen? Harry has been written as a greasy and confident man with a big belly? Not to mention that it is written based on the game, this is completely a fanfic with the name of the so-called protagonist. Damn it, in the end the heroine doesn't even have the right to be named, right? How much do you hate this heroine?

It can be seen that the author is indeed Harry's mother... Something was wrong with Harry being given oral sex so easily before. A noble girl with a proud personality volunteered to give oral pleasure... Harry still looked confident. Later, she became a housewife and gave birth to a son as soon as she got married. I'm really speechless. I can only say that this has almost become a domineering savior and her noble little wife.

This article has been recommended many times, so Wenhuang read it. It was pretty good when it was written during the school years. Although sometimes it makes me feel a little weird when I read it, it can be explained by the fact that the child was still young and immature. However, when it was written after the war, many parts of the story portray Harry as too broken. Moreover, Ola is written as a spoiled wife, which can be explained by the fact that the author is Harry Dreamgirl, but Harry writes it like this... I have never seen any character Dreamgirl write this character into an adult body that looks daddy, greasy, and pua female. It makes me feel sad.

Before Chapter 73, it was very good, very sweet, relaxed, and the details were well handled. The relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist was also very good, and the male protagonist was not too OOC. But! ! In the following chapters, after the male protagonist becomes an Auror... Uh uh... The male protagonist "grows up" too fast, is daddy-y, preachy, and fails in the heroine's character quality - he wants to have his own career and a spoiled wife, especially when the heroine gives the male protagonist sex, which is really not in line with the heroine's tsundere and proud character. (It's a bit ugly to say, but it's the truth) Alas, I really hope that my wife back then could love the heroine more. But maybe each character has its own direction; maybe my wife is no longer under her original control as she writes it; maybe my wife will read this article again many years later and will arrange a different route for them, because the characters are growing, and so is the author.