
[The Return of the Condor Heroes GL] She Stands in the Water
[神雕gl]伊人水中央
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- Completed
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- 494k Words
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- Baihe (GL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 6y ago
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- JJWXC
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The so-called beauty is on the side of the water Yirenshui Central The Li Mochou in this article is more flesh and blood than anything I have read, so I always feel inexplicably uncomfortable for her. She has never been happy in her life, maybe when she was with Lu Zhanyuan, but I always feel that she doesn't love Lu Zhanyuan. He is just an excuse for her to go down the mountain, or even an excuse for her to go crazy and kill people randomly. Li Mochou never feels that she is wrong. In fact, I feel that Li Mochou is the unfortunate Little Dragon Girl. If Little Dragon Girl had not met Yang Guo but was another scumbag, would Little Dragon Girl have become someone like Li Mochou? Li Mochou has been aggressive and competitive all her life. Isn't this a lack of security in a certain sense? She has been insecure her whole life. How can we call home when we are homeless? It was and will be in the future. I hope that Li Mochou in the article, who is blind and has no memory, will meet a child like Sanshui again, and then accompany her through the long years. She will be terribly lonely.
This article by the author feels really good, especially Li Mochou, who wrote it with a different feeling. In other fanfics, everyone's personality is actually more stereotyped. Li Mochou really has nothing but a crush on Lu Zhanyuan. But Li Mochou in this article gave me a different feeling. Speaking of which, at first I thought the CP was Li Mochou, so the character was written in such depth, but I didn't expect it to be the case.
After reading it, I found that the person I was most upset about in the end was actually Li Mochou, whose portrayal was wonderful.
In this article, I prefer Ling Bo x Cheng Ying CP. Maybe it's because I've read a few articles about Li Mochou x Xiao Longnu. I have a preconceived idea and I think they are more CP. Hahaha
Although I really can't get enough of the protagonist's cp, I was truly moved by every character. Every character, even the passerby who died soon after the appearance, was so vivid that I was moved to tears from time to time while watching it. This shows that the author's writing is steady and the design is smooth. This work is definitely among the top three in Baihe Literature.
Ahhhhhh it's so beautiful, Li Mochou's portrayal is so good, and the blank space at the end is great! ! ! !
The author's writing is so good [crying] Those who find fault can't eat the fine chaff. I like people who have a clear personality and stand. They are not OOC at all, and the writing is very comfortable. This reminds me of the difference between round characters and flat people [Orange Candy]. A flat character is a character and thought that goes to the end, and her growth and changes are not described; a round character is more complex, will grow, and will change her stance, but no matter where she stands, it will not be abrupt, and the description of the changes is very reasonable. It is very difficult to write these two kinds of characters well, but the author does a great job in most of them! Li Mochou is a very good-looking flat character from the whole story, and the final transformation is both unexpected and reasonable; Sanshui feels like a complex round character. She has her own formed and stable three views, but her choices are not single. She can assess the situation and is not timid. She has many complex thoughts and will never simply accept one-sided views. The idea goes to the end, but she thinks too much about others and is delicate, which will hurt herself; Xiao Longnu should be a round character who is not that complicated. She will grow and change, but her simple and cold temperament is also very prominent. This kind of character with a certain aspect that stands out is actually very attractive, just like Li Mochou's ruthless beauty and outstanding appearance are very attractive. Anyway, the author's writing is very good. There is no character with obvious tool function. Everyone acts because of their own character and position, and has their own distinct motivation for action! This is very rare. Even if there is only a little description of a character's appearance, people can see that he is a flesh-and-blood character with his own thoughts and considerations, instead of being like a tool that needs to be moved out and used, and his life will stop when it is no longer needed.
Unexpectedly, the person who shed the most tears in the end was actually because of the supporting characters in the story.
I was following updates at that time and now every once in a while I check if the author has other fanfics. The characters in this article are really flesh and blood. After reading it, I feel like I haven't found any fanfics that can surpass hers.
I stayed up late and took an extra half day to read it. It's really good-looking. Fortunately, it was already finished when I found this article, otherwise I would be so worried. My eyes hurt from watching it and I couldn't help but continue watching.