
A Fleeting Thought
念浮游
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 409k Words
- Genre
- Baihe (GL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
120Chapters
825Favorites
8.7Score
3Nutrient gifts
2.4kClicks per chapter
353Comments
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The plot line of this article is definitely excellent. When you think this person is an ally of the love brain, In fact, she is an enemy spy, When you thought she was the protagonist's crush; In fact, she is just cannon fodder used as a spy by our side. And he's still the anti-faith kind. Is this a spoiler? It doesn't count, right? Anyway, I didn't say who it was. People watching still have to guess hahahaha Maybe there is only three hundred taels of silver here, and everyone looks like a fine craftsman~ In fact, except for Ying Ning, a child who was originally kind-hearted, There isn't a supporting role that's a brainless noob, It feels like every supporting character can pull off some tricks, Promote the plot, Gan Ning and Situ Xuewei are particularly sad and sad. Jingyan is a little weaker than the previous two, which is a little pitiful. A digression is whether the ending of Mulan is left open or not. If the plot line is excellent, Then the emotional line is a failure. In the green words in the previous chapters, The author is still saying that he can't stand the kind of protagonist who is loved by everyone. I also criticized it in the comment area hahaha. Now I take back my life, It's true that everyone doesn't like it. But he is also 50-50 and is loved by everyone~ Especially those three married women, Forgive me for smiling unkindly, My husband has been bent by floating, The fate of these three women is also different. A jealous person ends up dying, A man who fell out faster than turning over a book first hated Fuyou and then was tricked by Fuyou's beautiful "male" and ended up with a bad end. The last one is incomparable to the previous two love brains. She can be considered a strong woman... But the author's ending is a bit hasty. The ending of Huining was not revealed. It might be better if these three bent men were not bent by floating. It's just a plot and trick that has nothing to do with the protagonist Feng Yue. Then this article has been raised to a higher level. Of course, the most important thing is to look at the protagonist group. Most people cannot accept NP. It would probably be better if this article was more focused. Fortunately, everyone has different opinions on popularity and three views. Because if the relationship between the protagonists can be written in a natural and natural way without being delicate and artificial, I sometimes don't mind non-specific articles. Because sometimes some women are really unbearable, Saying a few P would be too tacky. It's better to talk about the feelings between women, cute lily, I just like the delicate feelings between girl paper and girl paper, After all, female paper understands female paper better. And it's not necessarily just two heroines who are in love living together. For example, there are a few Baihe articles that have been handled quite well. Single-mindedness is single-mindedness, The two only love each other, But it didn't stop the two of them from finally letting go of their love affairs. Turn into your own friend, A group of strange women went to live in seclusion together, I think it's pretty good too. But I don't think it's necessary to go one-on-one in this article. At least Li Meng'er doesn't like me here. I said before that the main supporting characters are not fuel-efficient without Xiao Bai. But one of the protagonists, Li Meng'er, is silly and sweet. Although the whole story is not a dispensable role, After all, pushing the dungeon plot to start, But I think it's better to give up halfway. What's more, he betrayed Fuyou twice, In the final stage, he actually lost his composure in front of Wei Anruo who looked like a floating figure! On the contrary, Wanwan was so calm when she saw Wei Anruo! Li Meng'er's image in the whole story is already a negative score for me! Let's talk about Wanwan again, I actually have a mental disorder. Although Wanwan has practiced Waigong hundreds of times before, cough~ But Wanwan has already woken up from what she did in the later period. I recognized her hahaha, (Wanwan: Do you agree that you have nothing to do with Ben Guliang? As long as my Youlang agrees!) The author's biggest failure is the bad naming of the first few chapters, which is so frustrating haha. It gives the impression that this is not a trivial article, right? It's too dramatic, The author laughed at himself before about his dark history, but I admit it, haha. But the plot's power struggle is pretty good. Especially when reading articles in the middle of the night, it is easier to be emotional... I see this article was written eight years ago. Sure enough, Lily's article is still good-looking~ Let's talk about ancient lily prose. Although there are many white texts, But the old novels that follow the plot and play with tactics seem to make people more interesting the more they read. And Bai Hewen couldn't get any colder before. Many authors write without enthusiasm because of the lack of people. Therefore, many stories that are very plot-driven and brain-burning have been fooled. Sad~ I really can't believe the list. It's better to read the Tao articles about how to make enough food and clothing by yourself. There are many articles listed at the front of the list, so what do you say? It's not wrong to say that you like to read sweet love stories. But most of the writing is childish and written by novices... It's hard to describe in one word… The taste is different haha.
Belated support, the quality of the current writing is really poor, but the old writing is still comfortable to read.
I got this from Sanshui. I was still in kindergarten when the author wrote this article (face covering)
Everyone in Qingyi Guard: My lord is actually the one below!
Why are women so embarrassed?
Why is my article so clear? I really want to see Fuyou and Wanwan...
The characters created by the author are very lovable.
Oh, it's over, I still haven't been with Wanwan... Hum.
What a long article~~~!!! Author, I admire your endurance~~!!
I have finished reading this article, but I still have a lot of questions in my heart, and a lot of resentment that I need to express... 1. What kind of life experience does Fuyou have? (The floating mother is a concubine in a brothel? And the father is an ordinary patron?) 2. What happened to the young Float in the years after he disappeared? To make Fuyou become so violent... Or cruel? 3. How did Fuyou and the late emperor meet? What happened that made the late emperor look at the young Fuyou differently and focus on cultivating him? Then I looked at the sky at 45° with great resentment. I went through thousands of dangers when floating, and it was more difficult and torturous than the ninety-nine and eighty-one days of seeking scriptures in the West. I finally managed to make it through the clouds and see the moonlight, but as my biological mother, I only gave three years to the hard-won happiness, and it kept going. Fuyou is very miserable, and Meng'er, Wanwan, and Fuyou have very little time together (appearance scenes). After finally clearing some obstacles, you can watch them happily make love together (ahem, I didn't want to see the sex scene, there really is no such thing), bang! I'm done... I have a mouthful of stagnant old blood in my chest. I can't cough it up and can't swallow it. I'm really so depressed that I'm going to get internal injuries... I couldn't bear to have the protagonist God activate the invincible shit luck mode for ten thousand years. Suddenly, an immortal descended from the sky and cured his eyes and sinisterness. The three of them lived a carefree and happy life freely on the grassland, and then, click! Ended... [I was moved to tears by my own fantasy] Woo hoo hoo... Please make a sequel! ! ! Woo hoo..