
Fated in the East, Destined in the West
东缘西份
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 203k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 11y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
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65Chapters
240Favorites
51Nutrient gifts
1.9kClicks per chapter
258Comments
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I am the author, and everyone has come to QAQ. This article is very cool, but I finished it because of everyone's support. Today I read all the comments one by one. All readers who supported me and encouraged me, whether they have finished reading or not, sent a red envelope, because this is my first time trying to write about Danmei. If it weren't for everyone's support, I might not have been able to finish it. Because there are so many readers, I don't know if I have sent them all. If there are any that I have missed, please tell me in the comments and I will make them up^ ^. I will work hard to write more thoughtful novels in the future! !
In fact, when I was first asked to read this kind of romantic and beautiful article, I refused. But I don't know when it started, and I got deeper and deeper into it. I always wanted to know what the follow-up development would be like, and whether the relationship between the two people would develop further. Fortunately, as Shuda said, all the positive and negative characters are there to assist the East and West gates. From an emotional point of view, Zhu Ma's feelings are particularly touching, especially since this relationship is still growing. Dongmen's bravery and perseverance [of course, to put it bluntly, shameless hahaha], Ximen's tenacity and loneliness, both make people feel very comfortable, but at the same time they also make people very anxious - can they make it happen? I was very moved by the fact that Dongmen applied for the police academy for Ximen's wish. The training at the police academy cannot be said to be difficult. It is rare to meet and spend time together, but it feels indescribably warm and cozy. Until later, Ximen was willing to take undue responsibility for Cui Dingguo's death, and some of the things Dongmen did for justice made me feel that I had a good outlook on life, but I felt a little uncomfortable in my heart. There are always trade-offs in life, and you still need to be able to bear the judgments and choices you make between trade-offs! Watching it in one breath, I saw the growth of two people and the steadfastness of their relationship. If there is any shortcoming, it is that the emotional line at the end is a bit blurry. Maybe it's because the ending has been reached and the two of them have finally settled down, finally returning to the original plainness from the heart-stirring part. In terms of writing style, Shuda's writing style is undoubtedly good. The words and sentences are chosen just right, and the characters are created in a comprehensive, three-dimensional and lifelike way. From a structural point of view, the appearance of the characters is very thoughtful, and almost every character has played its value in the article. Overall, the article is just right whether it is a description that is so bland and very close to life, or a description that is so "bloody" that it makes people feel a little distant. I can't help but give it a big thumbs up! It's just that some plots always give people a depressing atmosphere. When watching it, it feels like half of the sky is dark, which always makes people feel very uncomfortable and depressing. Although it is a good thing for the author to give readers a strong sense of involvement, it makes people feel that suppressing it for too long will always have an impact. Every time I see the later part, I always feel like giving up. Fortunately, the ending is suddenly bright and sweet, which makes up for the lack of sunshine near the end! Anyway! Come on Shuda, I will always support you~ I hope you will have better and better works!
Hahahahahahahahahahahaha What the hell is stuck? Is it the kind that automatically releases the gate when the water level is reached?
I haven't watched it for just a few days and it's finished so quickly.
It's finished. It looks good.
The author's writing style is very good, delicate and smooth, and the long-lasting relationship between the two people is touching. But I don't like Ning Anqi's relationship too much, this kind of love is too humble. Loving someone will make you humble, but if you are so humble, no one will treat you as an equal. The moon revolves around the earth, but the earth revolves around the sun. The moon is a planet and will always be just a planet. Even its light is borrowed from the sun. I wish Dada's new works will be on the list soon and there will be many readers~
It's great. I will continue to support you, author.
It's finally finished! When I read the first half of this article, I always felt a sense of depression, because Ximen refused to accept Dongmen, and Dongmen unintentionally caused the death of Ximen's father. I always felt that it was both bloody and confusing! Fortunately, the author is a biological mother, and most of the plots are sweet. But when I saw that Dongmen suffered from depression because of the mistakes his father made and sent him to prison, the tragic atmosphere suddenly came back. I have always envied the author for being able to write the kind of long-lasting relationship between two people, but the only drawback is that the plot is a bit bland. I hope this can be strengthened~ Use your imagination w
I just came up with something after I finished writing... The end of the article was a bit rushed, but the final extra is still very sweet (・ิϖ・ิ)っBut it's a pity that it's not cute in the entertainment industry
ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ʎ□□39;✎・✿. Looking forward to the extra episode, by the way, I would like to ask about the new pit (๑>ڡ<)☆