Primordial Simplicity

In fact, the Mary Sue setting may be more suitable for writing about furry daily life, because all the trials and tribulations are not thrilling and give people no sense of expectation. The fighting and scenery writing are not outstanding enough, and there is no real sense of immersing people in another bizarre world. In fact, many Qidian novels also have this problem, but it is just covered up by the "refreshingness" of the plot. Maybe it's because the heroine has always been more disciplined and doesn't have the chivalrous spirit of ordinary cultivation novels. It feels like the Adventures of the Chicken Little, but the description of the Little Chicken is not cute enough, and even a little "pretentious". I personally don't think it is interesting enough. There is a subtle sense of separation. You could say this is an adventure story of a cub looking for its parents, but it's not childlike enough. To say that this is an article about the protagonist's self-improvement and self-improvement, Goldfinger is a bit too big. Anyway, the writing, plot, and new maps are all good, otherwise I wouldn't have ordered them all. The above suggestions are just for personal taste, although the author may not read them [face covering]

The front part is quite good. Although some people doted on me, I still have to work hard. It is still life-threatening and exciting. The more I write to the back, there are so many people in the background, and my parents come shouting at the top of my voice. My parents are the best in the universe, and the man who snaps his fingers dies. The meaning of this novel is gone. She does not want to read the treasure hunt adventure because it is not exciting. My suggestion can have a background, but don't make it so big. The more the heroine lives, the more she comes back. At first I thought she was self-reliant and somewhat coquettish and very lovable. Why is it that when the backstage becomes more and more, all that is left is coquettishness and calling mom and dad? Then no one should practice, just those sons of gods... It was obviously good in the front, but after the parents died of gluttony with a snap of their fingers, I felt like a dog. It felt like a novel for elementary school students... I might as well have written a heroine who kills without brains.

I finally finished reading it, it's so good! I originally thought Tingfeng's ancient proverbs were well written. I didn't expect that the cultivation novels were so good. Compared with other cultivation novels, they are not too good-looking. As a person who is not very keen on cultivation novels, I am addicted to them and can't read other books. Recently, I have been reading several immortal novels written by Tingfeng. Each one is better than the last. The writing, story settings and various ideas are really great. The high-quality novels make people unable to stop reading. I can't stop reading! ???

There is a shortage of books. What should I do? Does anyone have any recommendations for similar novels?

Sure enough, I still love the author so much! Almost all the articles are very appetizing! At first, I thought I would watch it soon, but unexpectedly, I became more and more engaged the more I watched it!

I haven't read such a long novel in a long time! It's a rare and exciting novel about cultivating immortals~ The male protagonist in this book is considered to be one of the better young male protagonists among the few books I've read in Tingfeng [laughing and crying] Not bad👍🏻 But apart from Xiao Qi, why are there not more characters who seriously pursue the female protagonist~~~ It's a pity not to see Yang Zhi'an unlucky. I've been waiting to say... I hate her so much! I unexpectedly like Aotian and Taiyi [Xingxingyan]. It's also very interesting to have Aotian give birth to a little golden dragon.

I read it again and the thing I dislike the most in this article is actually the male protagonist. Ah, I don't like soft-boiled men.

Great~ I'm looking for other articles from the author.

Why doesn't the extra episode feel like it's finished? And what the person above said is right, where is Qinglian?

I really want to see Qinglian, Qinglian