Cultivating Immortality in the Stars

Finished! The first part is pretty good, but it's a pity that this article was hastily completed under special circumstances. It's obvious that the second part is not up to standard. The heroine is different from the previous one but I also like it. Unfortunately, the plot is thin and not well-developed. The latter plot is boring, especially the ending. Emmmm, it's not bad, just a little disappointing. Still a good review. Looking forward to the masterpiece ~

The ending was too abrupt and felt a bit sloppy. The front looks great!

So where are Feng Chaoyang and Nu Heng? ~

Finished spreading flowers! I still haven't finished it, I feel like there's a lot more I want to see

Generally speaking, it's okay. It would look better with richer content and fuller characters.

The description is not detailed, and the adventure and love lines I originally pursued were not exciting enough.

Throw flowers???????

The writing was pretty good, but it was too short, and the ending ended hastily, and the rest was completely about being doted on by your husband...

Write and wear it quickly! Change the subject more often!

Damn, let's fill in the old pit in the interstellar world