Who Killed the Robin?

So?? Is Zhou Jingwen just a cannon fodder??? Well, even if you are sleepy, this is a novel with a good idea~~ (Of course, it would be better if you are not sleepy~~)

In your articles, I can always find reflections of people around me, such as Zhou Jingwen. I once had a classmate like this. It would be great if what she said was 100% true. However, unlike Zhou Jingwen, her words were lies that were easily exposed and were extremely exaggerated. She seemed to be living in her own fantasy, treating others as fools. I haven't finished reading the article yet, so I still don't know what role Zhou Jingwen plays. Continue

Playing dead games doesn't pay for your life. I had an ominous premonition when I saw in your copy that "I started to feel sleepy in the third chapter." Alas, with such an attractive beginning and enough momentum, how did it suddenly turn into a psychology case tutorial? In other words, in the second half, the theme you want to express overshadows the story. It is too preachy and prominent, but does not leave enough plot and details to support it. For example, Su Su's sensitivity and extreme autism were the key cause of her death. Such an ultimate burden was dropped directly through Moi's statement. There was not enough side description and evidence. Even if there was, it hinted that she was calm - and this calmness was ironically told to everyone through Moi... Mo... As for To Kill Mockingbird, the first half was specially set up to mislead everyone to point the finger at Zhou Wenjing's suspense. The second half became synonymous with "indifference" as the culprit. Suddenly it had nothing to do with Zhou Wenjing. Yes, she was crazy, but in the end you didn't tell us why she went to someone else's house before the wedding?? I'm just complaining, I'm just resentful. I complained that the first two chapters were such a good novel, but why did the last three chapters become a story outline? I hate that even if you are sleepy, can't you take a nap before writing? Obviously you can write very well, very well... I feel resentful. Actually, this is another type of trap for you, right? Right, right??!! Someone who fell from heaven to hell left the author's reply: I wrote it all night long, but then I got sleepy and couldn't write anymore. . . In other words, if I don't finish it all night long, this article will be a mess.

The skill is very deep, I think the plot is intertwined and the suspense is very reasonable.

Fengyi's thinking is very rigorous.

I really like it~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ But I still like the first few chapters

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Beautiful~~~~~~~~I feel a little scared

It's very beautiful~~~~~~~~~~I feel very suspended~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~··

It's well written, but the plot is so simple, that's why it's so cold.