A Turn of Good Fortune

Reminds me of that character from Ice Monster

He gestured. . . I discovered that I could also put a fist. . . . Tears running! ! !

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It only costs 9,000 to shoot an advertisement. It's too deceiving. This is an internet celebrity.

There is a grapevine in front of the door. It is tender and green and has just sprouted. Feng Yi is carrying the heavy vine on her back, climbing up step by step. There is a wild monkey on the tree, laughing at her, the grapes are still ripe early, why don't you write about me first and then write about it? Father Zhao was standing next to the tree, crying and asking her, "You don't care about the grape monkey, Fengyi, what are you doing?" I'm afraid that by the time you write about me, my son will become a father, a father~~~~~~~(>_<) P. S. Merry Christmas in advance

Score before going to bed. Go to sleep, good night~~

——BY Ranger What is the decisive force in the 21st century? Talent! What are the key elements in the novel? Figure! The setting of the heroine in this article is very attractive. The heroine jumped down from the scaffolding nimbly in the rain, which also jumped into the hearts of readers. The author did not deliberately beautify the heroine. She has a pair of calloused feet, swollen breasts and strong facial lines... All of which made me feel that this is a novel about the struggle of the grassroots people. Migrant worker heroines are rare in Jinjiang, where handsome men and beautiful women are everywhere. Let me temporarily define this novel as a novel about the passionate struggle of the grassroots class. The characteristic of the grassroots class lies in the ordinariness of the characters. They are just like most people in ordinary life and the same as the readers who read the article. They are ordinary and ordinary. When ordinary people do extraordinary things, it is easy to satisfy the readers' YY, and the readers will be happy, so this article will be successful. The biggest highlight of this article is the grassroots heroine, but the biggest regret may also fall on the heroine. The heroine does not have much thought, or in other words, the author has not discovered the connotation of the character so far. As a novel of passionate struggle, the heroine does not need to have a high IQ, but she must have specific qualities, be perseverant, and conscientious... How did the heroine enter this celebrity circle? The first time I was discovered by the male protagonist was because of the strong figure on the scaffolding. The second time was discovered by the male partner. Because of the lack of a certain model, the male partner went to the construction site and randomly selected the female protagonist. And how does the heroine perform? So bad, I can't even walk. The author did not see the show through the heroine's vision, but only from the perspective of a bystander. Facing this sudden incident, the heroine saw nothing, thought, and felt. He also did not see the embarrassment, shame, anger, persistence, and shock caused by the heroine's embarrassment on the catwalk. The reader only saw the stupefied heroine left on the catwalk. In fact, looking at such a heroine, I can always think of Xuri Yanggang, who also came from a grassroots background. If Xuri Yanggang had not practiced guitar after work, had not played a song between heaven and earth, and had not become popular on the Internet, would they still be able to attend the Spring Festival Gala? The fame of Rising Sun Masculine is accidental, but there is an inevitability behind this accident. Where is the heroine? I feel that if anyone has such overwhelming sympathy and support from a famous male protagonist and male partner, the tree will blossom, not to mention the female protagonist's IQ is still normal. The golden finger can be opened, but it must be opened so confidently that people have nothing to say. For some novices, there is no problem in opening up golden fingers, dancing with monsters, or letting such-and-such company go bankrupt as autumn is coming. But for this article, if the grassroots female protagonist does not have her own unremitting efforts and only relies on the support of the male protagonist to get on the catwalk, then this article will not be much different from other articles, and readers will not be able to resonate with it. Regarding the development prospects of this article, love is undoubtedly the main subject in Jinjiang. The male supporting character packed up the female protagonist and sent it to the male protagonist. What followed was a process of how the two sparked love through friction, how the male protagonist admired the beautiful figure of the female protagonist, and how the female protagonist fell. But how to conquer the handsome, enchanting and powerful male protagonist? It still has to fall on the heroine. The heroine's stubbornness, the heroine's strengths and weaknesses, the heroine's brain... Even if it's the same thing, I didn't see it before, I hope I can see it in the heroine in the future. ——BY Muscle Master The girl's writing has the charm of a divinely unfolding girl, with many novel ideas. For example, one of my favorite parts is the scene where the skylight is raining, which is very joyful. But more often than not, the author's description cannot concisely summarize the effect you want, giving people a very subtle feeling, such as [the wolf's waist is twisted, the ape's arms are relaxed, and the man has climbed from the seventh floor to the second floor in the blink of an eye]. This is a failure in description. Firstly, it is inaccurate, and secondly, it is verbose. Especially the encyclopedic introduction by the great masters at the beginning made me feel powerless. I can understand that the author hopes to fully describe the "contrast" so as to better promote the development of the plot, so he inevitably spends a lot of ink on the details and constantly adds weight to the two levels of contrast, such as the male protagonist being very powerful and the female protagonist being down and out. But I regret to tell you that it failed. So although I am very optimistic about the author's overall plot development trend, I still need to work hard. ——BY Scythe Priest Scratching my head, the progress I'm looking at is the first four chapters. The first impression is that it is long-winded, filled with unnecessary descriptions of everything in detail. The direct result of this is that the conflicts of the plot are directly submerged in the description, and are not highlighted at all. The most obvious one is the first time on the catwalk. A beauty has to be curvy to be good. If she is convex all over, she is a bucket. There is also the viewing angle. Indeed, there are many viewing angles and it is quite confusing. So author, who are you going to write this story about? With one as the main body, the others serve and assist this main body. Otherwise, the audience will not be able to relate to it. I originally wrote this review, but then when I saw Ranger, I suddenly wanted to add something about character traits. The author gave the female pig a special enough setting, a working people at the bottom. But it didn't give this setting enough extension. A girl who is struggling to survive at the bottom like a stubborn rock will inevitably have some very unique traits in her character - such as wildness, uninhibitedness, and the stubbornness that ten cows cannot pull back. (I'm just giving an example, the author will decide based on his own settings) But in this story, I didn't see the characteristics of the protagonist at the beginning. Her words, actions, and movements didn't have enough to support her "specialness." Then let's go back to the debut catwalk show. In addition to being stiff, uncomfortable, stumbling and being saved by a male model in the end, has she shown the "traits" that make her unique as a model? No. So why is this girl so favored by God? We need miracles, but we don't need miracles. It is a miracle that a migrant girl becomes a supermodel, but it is a miracle that a nondescript migrant girl becomes a supermodel.

Uncle Monster, if you become obscene, you can still be like this. Alas, the image of the elegant prince has undergone a complete transformation.

Hahaha, the drooling and obscene uncle

My heart rushed towards Mr. Zhao~~The swollen male pig is extinct. He is too bad to be a good guy. I'm afraid I'll be jealous as his girlfriend~~~My dear, if you don't write the male pig in a more gorgeous way, I will completely switch sides