Portable System in the Nineties

This is an early version of Raven. TTThe full text, regardless of the main CP or the secondary CP, makes people feel particularly frustrated. That is, no matter how good the heroine or the supporting actress is, they can only be manipulated without any resistance in front of men. Their so-called happiness can only rely on the gift of repentance from men. Just, the man slaps them, and then confesses his feelings to the woman, ah, I slap you because I care about you. . . . . What is particularly powerless is that even if the woman has a system and powerful biological parents, It can change the course of history, but it still cannot change the fate of being eaten to death after meeting a man. (Although it was written that it was love at first sight between childhood sweethearts) But generally speaking, women love men, but men don't cherish them and abuse them. When the woman wanted to pull away, the man regretted it again, confessed his love to the woman and continued to be with the man. . . . .

I came here from the small ranch. After reading it, I just want to say, are you kidding me? ! This article probably has many problems because it is an early work, and I felt really sad after reading it. I originally thought it was pretty good at the beginning. The little girl is as likable as Ning Ning. Although the subsequent characters are not as plump as in Little Ranch, they are still likable. But at the end... First the time fast forward method, and then the sudden ending. The author of the male and female protagonist's emotional line also said that he was not good at it, so he didn't complain about it. Then I feel like there is still a lot of plot that I haven't written yet. I just started the story and there is no follow-up. Some people feel that they can dig deeper and just take it casually, as if just to finish it quickly... The last episode... To be honest, after watching it, I felt angry that I had eaten something disgusting... Although it is said that the prodigal son can't change his fortune, but I really feel aggrieved for Ning Ning. Probably because I hate forced love, I couldn't bear to see Ning Ning and Li get together in the end. I bought the whole story at once, and I was really confused when I saw the sudden ending at the end. Then I saw the extra story about Ning Ning and Li. I thought they would break up and torture Li. I never expected that they would end up with such a poisonous ending. I couldn't help but come to comment and complain... I feel that the author has really grown a lot from this article to Little Ranch... I originally planned to dig out the previous articles before Little Ranch because I like Dada's writing style, but after reading this article... Well... I decided to think twice... After all, my writing skills probably hadn't been honed at that time... Although I know that the author will probably not see the comments under the article so long ago, I still want to explain. It is not directed at the author. It is just a pity that this article had a good beginning but ended up feeling like it was cut in half. It would be great if I could come back and revise it... Now I can only look forward to better works in the future!

Wow, the author is a teacher! It was a few years ago, but I don't know now.

I stayed up late to read it, I was stupid

The writing is very good~~ We originally liked each other, but due to various misunderstandings? (Dense fog) The hero has an epiphany!~~~~Cp,~, I think the deputy CP's feelings came out slowly later on. The article only started with the warmth, so this emotional line is not too abrupt (dog head). My personal thoughts will give me some face.

This ending really feels like being fed something like that

3Rd time I checked, I discovered that there was a deliberate negative review. Is this article considered a bad review? Although Tian Tianchun prefers to be cruel, the logic of the text is very good, and she will not torture for the sake of torture.

Masochism, too graphic, unacceptable

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