Reborn: The Top Student Takes Charge of Her Own Life

At first, I thought this article was about the heroine doing her best to study, build a career, and fall in love. However, it turned out that most of the article was still about falling in love. There was too little description of learning, and it always felt like it was a piece of cake. She had to get top grades in the best city high school, and still be in love. It was too easy to write to get admitted to a good university in Beijing. During this period, the heroine also had to write novels and work as a screenwriter. In short, I just read this article to relieve my boredom, and I have no intention of reading it again. The tension of the dramatic conflict is not very high, emmmmm, it needs to be improved.

Mo Chenyi was also reborn (˙-˙)

Wao, the fattened article is different after reading it in one sitting, and the face is as sweet as honey.

After reading it, I didn't abandon the article, but I still felt uncomfortable reading it, so I would like to make some suggestions. First of all, regarding the emotional issues between the male and female protagonists, to be honest, I didn't see how much they love each other. After all, it is a novel or a romance novel. The emotional line of the male and female protagonists should be highlighted. I always feel that the male protagonist is not as good as the Queen Mother, especially during the period after going abroad. I am a little forgiving. It's inexplicable; also, since the heroine was reborn, she also taught her mother to combine work and rest and eat well. It's really weird to mess with her, and she was drunk for six days in a coma. In addition, because of her rebirth, her mind has matured, and she should understand that this method of reporting good things but not bad things is really not suitable for maintaining a relationship. Emotions, this is why I feel that the relationship between the two of them was not right after the male protagonist went abroad. They both excluded each other from their lives, did not say anything bad, and did not mention the good ones. It is really strange that the male protagonist didn't talk about the problems in his business, and it can be said to be a man's self-esteem, but It's because the heroine didn't even say it was unnecessary when she was stolen. Although I don't say it must be mentioned, there is no need to deliberately hide it. Also, I still don't understand why I didn't tell the hero that she was a writer. I barely understood it before the debt was paid off, but I didn't understand it at all after the debt was paid off. The female protagonist doesn't feel like she understands the male protagonist very well. He has clearly shown his ability on computers many times, and he is surprised when he offers to help with Taobao decoration. Also, if he had told the male protagonist about stealing the computer, it might have been solved long ago. It is really unnecessary to do the so-called luring the snake out of the cave. In fact, the police can search the dormitory when they come. In such a short time, the stolen goods should not be moved so quickly. Then there are the last few chapters, which are completely streamlined. I find that the author writes more urgently towards the end. If you don't want to write the later chapters, don't write them. It's really pointless to be so anxious. The author's writing style really needs to be exercised, and his control over the article is not adequate. In short, writing is not easy, so I won't give it a negative mark. Keep up the good work

_(:з∠)_ I think about the past life extra chapter... I hope the male protagonist will avenge the female protagonist... Then the male protagonist will not get married... I have been waiting for the female protagonist to be amazing... It is true love...

Why is it over? I feel so reluctant to let go! ! !

Huahua mentioned me! What should I do if I'm so excited? ? Come on, I really like your writing^_^

It's over, I can't bear to leave Brother Mo and Tangyuan'er

I want to watch the extras after my marriage, but I don't want to watch the extras from my past life.

Don't look at it! ! ! ! ! It's so heartbreaking, people who love each other can't be together.