
[Honghuang] Every Time I Undergo a Tribulation, I Find Ancestral Dragon Hatching an Egg
[洪荒]每次历劫都看到祖龙在孵蛋
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The emotional line is a bit rough, but the prehistoric main attack is really fragrant
Haha, what I thought was to turn on the light was that they flirted with each other first, took off half of their clothes, described it in detail from the neck up, turned on the light, woke up the next morning, described their physical condition, and then chatted with each other... I don't believe that I am the same person! ! !
I thought someone would describe this lamp when I clicked on the comment section. As a result, it hasn't happened in five years (? ???ω??? ?)
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The description is delicate, the flavor of life is strong, and the words and sentences are accurate and expressive. 20. The language is accurate, clear and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific. 21. The examples are described vividly and concretely, and the words and deeds of the characters are consistent with their respective identities and characteristics. 22. The article comes from life, so although the language is not very beautiful, it is true and interesting, and the writing is emotional and reasonable. 23. The article is written in detail. 24. The language is lively, lively and interesting. 25. Use a lot of spoken language in daily life to make the article more natural and friendly. The ending of the composition: 1. The ending just highlights the center, the language is simple but profound, and thought-provoking. 2. Turn on and off with feelings and end with feelings. This will make the article coherent and coherent, and at the same time make the article's theme loop around and have a strong appeal. 3. The praise for the characters at the end is sincere and touching. 4. The implicit ending of the article not only highlights the topic, but also is thought-provoking. 5. Concentrate your emotions at the end, which not only reflects the beginning but also summarizes the entire text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go. 6. The vivid portrayal of details can effectively reveal the inner world of the characters. This is the success of this article. 7. The article ends with..., It is concise and concise, but its meaning is endless. 8. The sentence that reveals the central point at the end of the article is truly a clear-cut statement. The summary is short and powerful. 9. The ending is full of expectations and enthusiasm. The words have been finished, but the meaning is still unfinished. 10. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read, and can't bear to put it down. 11. Although it is a small matter, the author describes it vividly and vividly, and the indispensable point-of-view at the end better highlights the theme of the article. 12. Although the story is ordinary, the emotions are sincere, abundant and touching. 13. The ending of the article is unconventional and gives people a feeling of reluctance. 14. The ending ends with... To point out the end, which is implicit, meaningful and meaningful. General comments: 1. The article is complex but not cluttered, and can be detailed and focused. 2. The article renders the atmosphere of... Fully and appropriately, and depicts the focus of the article delicately and vividly. 3. ... Is realistic and contains simple and profound philosophy. It is inspiring and exciting to read. 4. This article is full of passion, and you can feel the author's love for... From between the lines. The full text is clear in level and the sentences are fluent. 5. The case description is vivid, specific, interesting, and consistent with the previous metaphor... Finally, the author uses a few words to express his feelings about..., Which is touching. 6. The article is coherent and forms a complete image. 7. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can capture the main characteristics of things, the length is short and concise, and it is worth reading. 8. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable. 9. The article is detailed, well-organized, and the content is vivid and concrete. It can be regarded as an excellent article. 10. The close-ups are unique and full of interest. The full text is full of childlike innocence and fun, and makes you feel cordial when reading it. 11. The article can use fresh and interesting language and describe... The words between the lines are full of the true childishness of childhood, and the laughter is endless. It can be regarded as a masterpiece. 12. Appropriate detail and the coexistence of reality and fiction are the two major features of this article. The content is richer and more vivid. 13. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and tactful, simple but not vulgar. It is worth reading. 14. The language of the full text is vivid and accurate, and the plot is exciting and tortuous. It seems to bring readers into a happy paradise, making people smile. 15. The full text is easy to understand and interesting. 16. The full text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting. 17. Pay attention to observing specific things and develop appropriate imagination. This is the success of this article. 18. The article blends emotions into the scene, expresses emotions while depicting the scene, and is good at using metaphors to make the article vivid and concrete. 19. The content of the article is novel, the structure is reasonable, smooth and coherent, and natural and accessible. 20. This article is based on real life, the material is appropriate, very innovative, the paragraphs are clear, the transition is natural, full of interest, and highly readable. 21. The language of the whole text is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful work. 22. Although the language in this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, rich in emotion and true, and it is enjoyable to read. 23. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author has a very deep and thorough understanding of the original text. The language of the full text is sonorous and powerful, and it makes people excited and excited when reading it. 24. This composition uses novel materials, wonderful ideas, and vivid language. The fresh breath of life and children's interest are revealed between the lines. 25. The article describes the events of... In the order of their development. The language is relatively fluent, the level is clear, and it seems enjoyable from beginning to end. 26. The full text has a lively rhythm, fresh language, and is always full of humor and fun. It is a joy to read. 27. The full text has a concentrated narrative, without branches or branches, with simple and smooth language and sincere and touching feelings. 28. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, making it full of wit and fun. It is hard to put down after reading it. 29. The author has a clever conception and is good at selecting points to expand on. His writing is full of ups and downs and is thought-provoking. 30. There are many noteworthy sentences in the whole text, which adds some literary interest to the article.
Finally made it clear that they had sex. After giving birth to nine sons, their existence was like a clear spring.
So what's going on... You've taken off your pants and you're showing me this? ? ? ! ! !
Damn it, what the hell are you doing by turning on the light? !
Good guy, hahahahahahahahahahahaha
? ? ? What about the content of the lantern that was agreed upon? 555
After finishing "Sahua", I read two big novels in a row?