Profaning Dreams

Pei Yuqing was stunned, why was he the one who sent the heroine to the hero? It was so powerless. But the difference between him and the male protagonist is probably that he accepts his fate? So helpless, Pei Yuqing must be her salvation for the ignorant and ignorant heroine who had just traveled through time. It's still such a pity for Pei Yuqing

After reading this article, some people said that the writing was not good, but I thought it was okay. The author wrote very smoothly, but the writing was good at the beginning and the characters were well-developed, but it fell apart later on. The plot jumps very fast in the later stage, so that the relationship between the male and female protagonists also seems very impetuous. Although it is a romance novel, everyone and everything are done in the context created by the author. In the end, how to cultivate immortality and so on are not explained clearly. It feels like love is just for the sake of romance in the end. In fact, the early years when the two escaped for their lives can also be written in detail, so that the emotional development of the male and female protagonists will be clearer, because I feel that there is no love for no reason in the world. I will continue to support the author next time.

I came to read this article after reading the author's copywriting. The author's idea of this article is very novel, but I think the time span in the article is too big. Three years and five years later, these words appear almost five times. Also, I don't know if the author has stopped updating it. In some cases, The plot is too jumpy, and it feels like some parts are unfolding before the groundwork has been laid. In fact, I think the author could have written a longer article, and many parts could be detailed and written, which might make it more exciting. Otherwise, I always feel that the plot is not profound, and the characterization of the characters is not very rich and slightly pale.

This article is really well written! I like male protagonists like Pei Yunshu, this is the real male protagonist who bravely faces his own heart!

Ah, I haven't read this article for a while, and I kind of forgot about it at first glance. . . Okay, actually I didn't understand much of the story in this chapter. Why did the maid Ying want to harm Gong Su? What happened to her? Why is Acorus forced to practice?

Big, happy 2016

I want to watch the post-marriage extras!!!

It's really not easy being the male lead! Finally together!

Let's write a side story or two. I think the male protagonist is quite miserable.

The author is very perseverant, congratulations on the completion.