Perhaps This Is Love

I feel like I'm in a vegetative state after being asleep for eight months? Boys would come to call her every day and tell her little things in life. One day, the girl finally woke up. In the endless darkness and pain, I struggled to wake up for that ray of light, only to find that it was not the case. So where did that person go? Where are you? Let me wait patiently. The dropped water glass left tears on the cheeks. Hopeless waiting, dead love. I don't know where my love started, but I love you deeply.

I'm not good at short stories, so I didn't take any orders but just came here to give a short review. From my understanding, some words and phrases in heart-warming articles need to be understated. If they are not particularly sensational, emphatic sentences should be used sparingly. For example, when someone says she has been sleeping for eight months, the doctor can be more emotional and say: After all, she slept for eight months. However, the eight-month sleep in the article is a bit overemphasized. And there are too many descriptions of the doctor's reaction. As a doctor who is used to seeing life and death, he feels uncomfortable but will not stagger... It's an exaggeration. The second half was too understated. There were so many details described in the first half, from anxiety and bitterness to a small movement of turning around. However, after Wen Ting knew who this was, the author didn't know what his thoughts were, so he described less. However, it is quite good to explain the whole story. There are no redundant words and there is no need for redundant words. Overall, it is a simple and complete story that can be understood without much speculation.

I proudly came to receive the gift~~~! Throw flowers! *★,°*:.☆\\(￣▽￣)/$:*.°★* .