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This article is very well written, I only regret not reading it sooner!

In fact, I think it's quite good, especially the imagination, so I'm also curious why there are so few comments on each chapter, but I really like this article, really.

It's really super pretty! However, I didn't feel like I had a good grasp of the rhythm. It was very tight in the early stage and relatively loose in the later stage. Although I also really liked the cool writing in the later stage, I was more impressed after reading it and reflecting on the early stage. To be honest, I was very depressed and nervous watching the first part, but because the previous conflicts were resolved very coherently and the sutures were buried and removed cleanly, I felt very refreshed. But it was a little rushed when we actually solved Lin Jinghe's line later. If my wife changed the game content into a side story to make the main line more prominent, this article would definitely be great! The second half has a very clever profile of how the male protagonist chooses to create social value and his relationship with other selves, including Nan Er. It made me feel impacted by the time and space spanning the past and the future, and I was also moved by human nature. I can't quite describe it but I will say it! This article gave me different experiences before and after, especially the first part I loved it so much! ! . ... Ahhh, the actual reading experience is amazing, I can't even describe it! ! The writing and concept are really great! !

I saw someone asking why so few people were watching. I thought I could answer it from a personal perspective. In fact, the copywriting gives people a very cheerful feeling. As a reader, I will presuppose that this article is a cheerful and refreshing genre. Then the girl suddenly dies at the beginning. The content is suspense and decryption to find the murderer. After it is revealed that there will be someone coming from the future, everyone around Nanwu seems to be taking advantage of Nanwu, giving people a terrifying and depressing feeling. But the author writes very well, each character is very three-dimensional, and the protagonist Nan Wu also has a very charming personality. I really like this kind of protagonist who has a firm goal and sticks to the bottom line. The logic of the article is also very tight, making people want to read the following. Nan San's appearance is also very good. It has a feeling of sweeping away the depression in the previous article, making the whole article feel relaxed and happy. But the content written by you, the author of the future chapter, I have the impression that whenever Nan Wu has doubts, Nan San or Qing will abandon the setting, or a large definition setting. This makes me feel like I am reading a professional book, and I feel very painful. In addition, I don't know if the author is trying to make the whole article have a sense of suspense and decryption. He wrote a lot of suspenseful holographic games in the future chapter. Well, I read it as if I was reading an infinite novel. But for the Infinite Flow novels I have read, one copy has about a dozen chapters. The author's game, the most, one copy has three to five chapters at most, and at least half a chapter is over, resulting in a lot of content definitions. Of course, I personally don't like to read detective novels, and I also don't like to read unlimited streaming novels. The first half of the chapter written by the author was for the main plot, and I read it very carefully. But in the second half of the game, I basically just crossed it directly, just to look at the interactions between South, South, and Five, as well as the jokes about computers in the 19th century in the game. If I were following the serialization, I would just abandon the article. And there is a very bad thing about the game. Players and NPCs are all thrown together. In the second half of the future chapter, I remember the atmospheric circulation quartet, Nanwu and Qing, and most of the other characters are very flat because they don't get much shaping. The last thing I want to say is that in the future chapters, there will be a live broadcast but not a live broadcast, there will be a wealthy family but not a wealthy family, and there will be a Shura field but not a Shura field. Being attracted by the copywriting, I felt that there was indeed relevant content in the Earth article, but it was just different from what I thought. For example, I thought I was buying a dragon fruit with a white heart, but when I opened it and saw that it was a red heart, it was indeed a dragon fruit, right? In the future chapter, it becomes like this is not a dragon fruit at all, but a pomegranate. However, the author's whole article is very good. It has great imagination and good logic, and the characters are also very three-dimensional. It is my favorite novel that I have read this year! PS, Damn, you forgot about the God of Wind and Thunder

It's good to watch, but I feel like I could write more extras about Nan Si, Nan Nan's past time and space, and the present and future.

It's so beautiful, the author is so powerful, and the imaginative plot is amazing. It would be nice if the emotional line could be described a little more later. It's a pity that I didn't see the extra.

I like this article very much. I hope you will continue to work hard.

The subject matter is really novel~ Maybe it's because the foreshadowing of the future in the front is too vague or too little, and the future part feels a little out of touch in the plot. I feel like it would be better to divide this article into two parts... At least some foreshadowing or plot development can be discussed? After all, some places are really worthy of more description, instead of not having an extra chapter? Overall, it is great~~ Some of the three views written in the article are also very good. It is really refreshing and comfortable to read. Keep up the good work~~~fighting~

I like this article very much, even though it feels like it's a bit cross-server, like two stories. But this article is really special, especially the setting in the article. Regarding the future, I think it may really become like this in the future. Now we have more and more learning resources, people's knowledge and quality are getting higher and higher, and they are also subject to the supervision of the people. It is indeed due to the development of technology. Maybe one day there will really be a future world like the one in this article. Although the perspective of this article is in the third person, I feel a bit like the first person. This feeling is very strange. Hahahaha, but what I like most is attacking myself! Come on, this article is very different from ordinary Danmei. Others are all plots for the sake of falling in love. This article is about inserting love into the plot as a seasoning. Really good! I saw above that someone said there could be more to this article, and I agree. I feel like each of their characters could be a novel on their own. Also, every generation of Nan Nan can write a book, Fan Qing can write a book, and there can even be a quick travel setting. After all, this background is acceptable. And I am very curious about the fourth brother. He is the most mysterious among these generations. Is he taking the route of a non-CP male god? Very curious! Hahaha I said so much. The flowers are over~ But do you really not consider doing a side story? I think this book is really beautiful and special!

Of course, there is a problem with the wrong rhythm, but I put my imagination first, and this has convinced me, thank you very much ~