A Gentle Shot

Leave your name after reading it! I especially like the big ideas and writing style, and I have been reading it recently. I read this book relatively quickly, but I can clearly feel that the author's lack of writing skills in the early stages caused the entire worldview to be a bit confusing. In fact, if you think about it carefully, you can still figure it out, but it is a bit complicated in the author's writing. The branch lines and main lines are intertwined, and the entire worldview and related characters are relatively messy. But the author's current work does not have this problem. Is it really because of the early dark history and the synthesis of two very different works? There are also some typos, which is very uncomfortable. I read relatively quickly, but I still saw a lot of typos, which affected the reading experience... Maybe it's because I stayed up late to read the article. I felt that the structure of the entire article was not very clear, including the ending. I felt I could understand it but it was a little confusing. Since it is a dark history work, I won't go into details about these aspects, but let's talk about the advantages. I especially like the author's great character creation, including the emotional line between the male and female protagonists, which I feel is the highlight of the entire article. Ahhhh, staying up late to code and comment feels like my brain is like a paste, and I may not be able to think clearly. And the final confession to the male god R, the author, you see, I have already given you a review, do you really want to write a reborn side story... I really want to see the side story between the heroine, R Demon King, and Tsunayoshi.

Woohoo, so beautiful! Why is there no extra story? I really want to watch the extra story about the child era. I also want to continue watching the extra story about Harry traveling to this parallel world.

Nice looking but not sweet

The author is great, extra chapter

To be honest, I actually want to watch the extra story about a family of three. Is there a sequel?

Although some parts of the plot feel a bit abrupt? However, that kind of complex, definitely not simple, but unexpectedly strong emotion is very popular. Great Malfoy fic, love him.

Although I didn't understand it for a long time, I finally understood it. Old Malfoy and Old Black only commented on this chapter, haha, I am happily waiting to be slapped in the face. The flame of the world and the global □□ are clearly yours to climb up╭(°A°`)╮

"Exploded on Christmas Day 1967" gave the author a big bug ~ Lucius was born in 1954, wasn't he 13 years old in 1967?

"He doesn't seem to be too meddling", which is a big thorn in the side of the author~ He didn't want to interfere with the little one

Hahaha, I also want to read the follow-up about the original Harry Potter?(?? V??)?