[Kuroko's Basketball] Little Tomato Ball

The author is great. I read this book with the mood of reading ordinary fan fiction. Just like my confession, when I was young, I was called Xiaowanzi. When I grew up, I met some people and some things happened. We all once said big words to hold on to our dreams and preserve our feelings, but we are always changing. Thank you for this article, which made me understand a lot. I read it at noon on May 14, 2017. It's a coincidence, I think so too!

After reading the previous chapter, I thought Kise had received a bento, but it was okay, okay, it scared the baby to death qaq

Erhuang was really abused. The author Sang quickly gave me a chance to explain clearly that the hair tie is a token of love!

In fact, when I saw this, I felt that school memories suddenly came to mind. Looking back at when we first entered junior high school, we made many friends, but forgot about the people who were with us. As time went by, we began to talk about the changes of others without shame, but forgot that we were not changing ourselves.

In circles, ten years have passed, but fortunately you are still here. Looking for a sweet extra! ! !

I finished reading this article in one go, and I feel like I am filled with sour and sweet feelings now, maybe because I am not satisfied. Maybe there was too much sourness and bitterness in the relationship between Kise and Maruko-chan, so I didn't notice the hint of sweetness at first. It wasn't until the end that I saw the true love and tenderness of that boy. I'm really sorry. Such a gentle Kise is really hard to take your eyes away from.

I am a reader who started chasing Tomato from an auditory hallucination. Because it is not the kind of hard work to pursue articles, but the kind that likes to be fattened and then slaughtered. So for a long time I couldn't say that I can be considered a fan of the author. Since I'm not a fan, let's evaluate this article from a purely neutral perspective. I have seen negative comments on the author's article. As an author who also writes articles, I can understand the feeling of receiving negative reviews. Even many 0-point and slightly venomous reviews are hard to accept. I have also seen the author's reflections and the support from the author's fan base. Here, I have been worrying about whether I need to mention this matter again. But in the end, I still feel that as someone who has read this article, it is still necessary to express my thoughts. Many readers think that tide's writing style is not suitable for Jinjiang. I think this is a very one-sided idea. Maybe many readers don't know what the long tail theory is, and they have only scanned the recommended articles on the Jinjiang Tongyan interface. But I personally believe that there are many objective aspects to low popularity, and sometimes it is really impossible to have both good hits and good writing. But are all Jinjiang readers ignorant? Everyone only reads articles about young women. I personally don't think so. In other words, the author tide has an unshirkable responsibility for causing the indifference of this article. Let me mention again the light novel "Literature Girl". Anyone who has read this novel will easily find similarities between the author's writing style and that of this light novel. Whether it is the first person or the lyrical paragraph, the author's writing already has 70% of Wen Shao's writing skills. However, a very serious fact has been ignored; that is, Literary Girl is a very standard light novel. As a loyal reader of Wen Shao (I started following it as a pilgrim), I have encountered many difficulties in promoting Wen Shao's Chinese language. Even though this novel had repeatedly won the title of "Great Light Novel" in Japan at that time, for a long time, very little was known about this light novel in China. The reasons for this problem are similar to several of tide's novels published in Jinjiang: they are far from the mainstream writing style. Although there were many light novels at that time, such as the Twelve Kingdoms, most of them tended to be a relaxing harem (this is really different from Jinjiang). Wen Shao was quite an outlier in the environment at that time: the theme was the dark youth of young people, and he had a deep literary background. To put it simply, it is a genre that is completely uninteresting to light novel readers, mainly high school students. But Wen Shao, with his superb writing style and excellent story arrangement, finally firmly became one of the premier light novels. Although Mizuki Nomura is indeed a rare light novelist with excellent writing, has he really not succumbed to reality? I personally think the answer is quite the opposite. After finishing Wen Shao, he serialized the "Light" series full of NTRs, which is exactly his catering to the main readers in the light novel world. Many readers have commented that Hikari has lost the depth of his literary days, but it is undeniable that Hikaru still has Nomura Mizuki's unique style: clean writing and superior story structure ability. In his youth, Nomura's storytelling was overshadowed by his outstanding writing style, but in the Hikaru series, it became completely dazzling. When reading Nomura's stories, as long as you read a chapter carefully, you often find it difficult to stop and you can't wait to read it all in one breath. This is the genius of Nomura. He knows very well how to structure a story, understand the priorities of narrative, how to catch people's attention, how to create suspense... And of course he also knows how to use shots that serve readers. There is no reason why such a writer should not become popular. Review the author's article. These two novels are not so much "novel" as they are weekly diaries recording a girl's heart. There are many places where people are moved and empathized, but I always feel there is something missing. Although the plot of the story has some twists in an auditory hallucination, it has become a running account of the girl's feelings on Tomato's side. If we really want to say how this is different from the Loli author's campus journal, the author's writing style is indeed superb and he can turn the journal into lyrical prose... But these are not novels after all. Like a beautiful melody, lacking deeper thinking; delicate flowers cannot withstand the passage of time. At this time, the author's "first person" writing method really exposed his own lack of plot design to a great extent. When the perspective is changed according to the plot, it almost breaks the article into pieces. Excluding the issue of the first person, the author's article about the third-person Vulcan... Feels even weirder. As usual, the author has written quite a lot of words, but the shortcomings in plot design and scene transitions not only cause the text to click when reading, but also make the article, which is already relatively jerky, even more difficult to swallow. The author's article is not so much a dish as it is Korean bibimbap that has not yet been mixed together, with vegetables as vegetables and dry rice as dry rice. There is still a considerable distance between plot and emotion. The last step is to shape the heroine. From the author's comments, it seems that he has played a lot of otome games. Of course, it also seems to have a common problem with otome games: the heroine does not have a strong color. The author seems to use the first person "I" to arouse the resonance of readers; for readers who follow these articles, you may succeed; but this will not work for more readers who have not yet followed this article. Neither Endo nor Mito stands out like the supporting female characters in Bunsho. They have a very, very strong image. Of course, it is indeed unfair to the author to use Wen Shao as the benchmark, but after reading Wen Shao, the author seems to have some experience in shaping the heroine... But the heroine of this article, how should I put it, it is difficult to have that kind of heart-pounding feeling. At least there are still dark and negative things in Yugao, and Endo has completely become the heroine who exists like a vase in an otome game. However, in otome games, the exciting male protagonist... Does not appear on the page through story or description. The insertion of lyrics is a well-known routine in Internet King fan fiction. Sometimes the heroine is artistic and hilarious... Although Touko-senpai seems to be like that, at least she makes appropriate expressions where the plot requires it. And looking at it from Xinye's point of view, Yuanzi suddenly became taller. Here is Endo's own perspective on Endo. The heroine occasionally complains, is artistic from time to time, has girlish feelings from time to time... Abrupt plot changes, occasional dialogue that is out of touch with the character's personality, and a writing style that is just a running account whether there are lyrical paragraphs or not. It makes people wonder, is this really the author of "An Auditory Hallucination"? It is true that this article has a lot of progress compared to auditory hallucinations, but the problems it shows are not a few. There are many times when I feel like I am scratching my head while reading a certain chapter, but I still believe in the author's writing style and stick to it. When I read the last chapter, I really felt that it was the right thing to persevere, but I still felt a little bitter in the process. After reading it late at night, I felt a bit venomous. I hope the author will forgive me

After reading all the chapters in one go, I felt like eating an orange candy, sour and sweet, and full of happiness. This feeling reminds me of when I was having a reunion dinner after my junior high school graduation. The boy I had secretly liked for many years shyly confessed in front of the whole class (including the class teacher) that I liked a girl from another class who had been his elementary school classmate. I still remember the faint blush on his slightly childish face at that time, as well as the feeling of my chest being pressed by a thousand pounds of stone, and the sudden soreness in my eyes. At that time, I felt that the boy was so cruel, and I wanted to pounce on him, strangle him by the neck, and yell: "Damn it, Lao Zhi has liked you for so long and you don't even feel anything at all!!!! Mahler Gobi, you still like your former deskmate, if the rabbit doesn't eat the grass from its nest, you won't do it!!!" ! After all, I have been with you for nine years, and we have been fighting for so many years, right? Don't you say that beating is love, and scolding is love? "Balabala, bite him to death! ! ! His mind is filled with thoughts of revenge against society. It was a pity that the head teacher was suppressing me, but I still did not abandon the image of a good baby and turned into a shrew, turning the luxurious box into a murder scene with blood splattered three feet away. Now that I think about it, I feel that I was incredibly stupid at that time. ╮(╯▽╰)╭It's just a crooked-necked tree. There is a big forest waiting for me in the future! ! ! ! Suddenly I found that I digressed and didn't know where to go, so let's return to the topic. Give the author 32 likes, come on, I'm optimistic about you! Y(^_^)Y

Damn it… Author, I cried

The vicious female supporting character is finally gone (he breathed a sigh of relief) I really want to cry.