Time is like the folds on a silk skirt
Changing its appearance with fashion
However, I always love its elusiveness
Because of the person I love most
Once in this dream made of silk
Smiling Smiling
Until it seems to melt into a fragrant dream...
Intention:
Reader comments
One wants to stay, and the other wants to keep him, a match made in heaven, hahahaha
I'm still waiting for the streamer to update, but I found this new pitfall...
I crawled away, I didn't see anything, 5555
表示默默路过。。串啊。。0w0
Hahaha. . I like the Luther family~~I guess brother Luther is also very curious about his sister-in-law~~~~
In fact, Qingxin, your writing is not that bad! Cheer up, Liu Che is shaping up well~
Duo geng yi xie ba!
So, having a dark belly is very scary, children, please be careful!
默...看出来了，难得我今年天RP爆发留言..
一年多了啊……一年多！
It's obviously a very romantic thing, why does it involve an abandoned body again? ?
我真的好佩服大大啊，明明是虐渣男的文，我居然看哭了好几回……抹泪ing
The method of boiling frogs in warm water, add fuel to Loutai and Taya. By the way, Zuowei and Loutai become one?
从前的我想要一目连结果出了大天狗
大大啊，你怎么可以卡在这个地方呢？？你若无意写第二部，就不要让宫九抓到猫猫啊！！！！
好幸福啊！完了，真寂寞a！
Is the child really pure?
More and more, I always think Heechul likes the female lead.
Heechul, Ki and Bum Hyun Joong are both very loving.
Big love, big love~~
Is this Roufu Emperor a fake? The prototype of Hedan is Pei Man? Is Wu Zhen's prototype Zong Wang? Without Wu Zhen and wood, Qinying has to live alone. By the way, what is this piece of wood doing? He is disabled and has amnesia, why hasn't he appeared yet? If the wood was intact (I mean in terms of memory), then he shouldn't have left Qinying there to suffer so much. He would have sent someone to give Qinying a squeak, knowing that he was still breathing. The author just let us know that the wood is not dead, and the result is that Qinying has given up on him (maybe she has not given up on him, because the Camellia girl dropped her chain at the critical moment, and she said it so vaguely), and we worry about him blindly. If Wu Zhen's cruelty means forcing others to do something difficult (this word is relatively light), then wooden cruelty means being indifferent to violence. It depends on whether the author can find a good reason to overcome it. The wood has not come out yet, and I have almost forgotten about him. Now I firmly believe that the male pig is unreasonable, even though he is very bad. Two chapters of Wu Zhen haven't come out yet, so I miss him a bit. I love the two characters Wu Zhen and He Dan very much. I also wrote several novels when I was in high school, but of course they all came to nothing in the end. One of them was about a person who was extremely struggling between good and evil. When I saw Wu Zhen, I thought of my child who died in infancy. I don't know how the author will arrange the ending. I hope it will not be sloppy but a vigorous and "bad" death, hehe. As for Qinying, I think it's best if the wood doesn't come out and stays in Qinying's heart. In the end, Qinying was strong enough to support the two older children alone. Of course, judging from the extras, this is no longer possible. Count on my inner YY, I like strong women.
Finally, give a big bag of good quality bleach and save it for the wood.
加油哇~好好看的~~作者抱一下，你要努力更新哦~~~
Let's continue with the waistcoat on~ Would it be better if the middle part was divided into sections? I have always felt that it would be nice if there was a clear distinction between mental activities and external actions.
Good writing is always a trap [beat the ground]
我想精灵了...让他出来遛遛吧
大大，呼唤你快回来，也祝愿起生活一切顺利
大大加油更新啊~作者回复：
不知道乃们还想看谁的番外咧~？
Waiting for paper books. . . She said she still prefers "Where is Xiao Lang" = =
Still pessimistic about the outcome
I think... Maybe it would be better to end up with no one. . .
5555555 Third Young Master. . . .
The author is great, please update the article. Isn't this article a scam and abandoned?
One wants to stay, and the other wants to keep him, a match made in heaven, hahahaha
I'm still waiting for the streamer to update, but I found this new pitfall... I crawled away, I didn't see anything, 5555
表示默默路过。。串啊。。0w0
Hahaha. . I like the Luther family~~I guess brother Luther is also very curious about his sister-in-law~~~~
It's really incredible... I'm so dizzy...
我去，你这么就写完了让我怎么写长评。。本来当时想把你所有的bug汇总起来，展示一下，可是现在你这种更法，我前面的都忘了，bug也懒得找了，我看就这么凑合几个字儿就行了。。好吧。 这篇文章一开始的时候，有种气势恢弘的赶脚，死这么多人作者是想要做出那种悬疑大片的赶脚吗？本来觉得作者要放大招了，结果等了一年，断断续续更新了那么几个字，然后就这样结束了，结束了，束了，了，了……结束了也就罢了，还结束的这么奇葩，以这种方式，你还不如倒着讲这个故事比较通顺……【我的意思是把结果先说，然后描写主人公的心理。 不过，话说回来，我就以我写了这么多年小说的经验，稍微说几句？首先，亲的人物形象还需要丰满，你这整篇文章，比较丰满的形象是那一对姓伍的兄弟，其他人么，你换换名字我都不觉得有违和感的，不过这种问题棘手的很，就像是我写出来的那些人物，虽然是有点儿性格，但是有的时候难免显得很刻意，而且就那么几种人。 其次，情节问题我就不评论了，大家看过的肯定都自己默默吐槽了，我还把你这篇文章放在我的文案里面= =，我怕我的读者看了之后怕我也会这么写。。 怎么说呢，期待你的下一篇作品？不过如果真的按照你说过的字数的话……你要还敢连载不一次性发完，我估计我就真的受不了了。 这样应该已经算是长评了吧。 好了，长评扔在这儿了。
Complement the points and support the author...
In fact, Qingxin, your writing is not that bad! Cheer up, Liu Che is shaping up well~
Duo geng yi xie ba!
So, having a dark belly is very scary, children, please be careful!
默...看出来了，难得我今年天RP爆发留言..
一年多了啊……一年多！
It's obviously a very romantic thing, why does it involve an abandoned body again? ?
我真的好佩服大大啊，明明是虐渣男的文，我居然看哭了好几回……抹泪ing
The method of boiling frogs in warm water, add fuel to Loutai and Taya. By the way, Zuowei and Loutai become one?
从前的我想要一目连结果出了大天狗
大大啊，你怎么可以卡在这个地方呢？？你若无意写第二部，就不要让宫九抓到猫猫啊！！！！
好幸福啊！完了，真寂寞a！
Is the child really pure?
More and more, I always think Heechul likes the female lead. Heechul, Ki and Bum Hyun Joong are both very loving. Big love, big love~~
Is this Roufu Emperor a fake? The prototype of Hedan is Pei Man? Is Wu Zhen's prototype Zong Wang? Without Wu Zhen and wood, Qinying has to live alone. By the way, what is this piece of wood doing? He is disabled and has amnesia, why hasn't he appeared yet? If the wood was intact (I mean in terms of memory), then he shouldn't have left Qinying there to suffer so much. He would have sent someone to give Qinying a squeak, knowing that he was still breathing. The author just let us know that the wood is not dead, and the result is that Qinying has given up on him (maybe she has not given up on him, because the Camellia girl dropped her chain at the critical moment, and she said it so vaguely), and we worry about him blindly. If Wu Zhen's cruelty means forcing others to do something difficult (this word is relatively light), then wooden cruelty means being indifferent to violence. It depends on whether the author can find a good reason to overcome it. The wood has not come out yet, and I have almost forgotten about him. Now I firmly believe that the male pig is unreasonable, even though he is very bad. Two chapters of Wu Zhen haven't come out yet, so I miss him a bit. I love the two characters Wu Zhen and He Dan very much. I also wrote several novels when I was in high school, but of course they all came to nothing in the end. One of them was about a person who was extremely struggling between good and evil. When I saw Wu Zhen, I thought of my child who died in infancy. I don't know how the author will arrange the ending. I hope it will not be sloppy but a vigorous and "bad" death, hehe. As for Qinying, I think it's best if the wood doesn't come out and stays in Qinying's heart. In the end, Qinying was strong enough to support the two older children alone. Of course, judging from the extras, this is no longer possible. Count on my inner YY, I like strong women. Finally, give a big bag of good quality bleach and save it for the wood.
加油哇~好好看的~~作者抱一下，你要努力更新哦~~~
Let's continue with the waistcoat on~ Would it be better if the middle part was divided into sections? I have always felt that it would be nice if there was a clear distinction between mental activities and external actions.
Good writing is always a trap [beat the ground]
我想精灵了...让他出来遛遛吧
大大，呼唤你快回来，也祝愿起生活一切顺利
大大加油更新啊~作者回复： 不知道乃们还想看谁的番外咧~？
Waiting for paper books. . . She said she still prefers "Where is Xiao Lang" = = Still pessimistic about the outcome I think... Maybe it would be better to end up with no one. . . 5555555 Third Young Master. . . .
The author is great, please update the article. Isn't this article a scam and abandoned?
小柳，昊天兄真的好有爱啊，如果清池不要把你就把他给我好了~~好不好