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After reading this article, I really felt the author's intention. The writing has its own unique style, which is serious, meticulous and moving. But the ending was really abrupt. Until I finished reading it, I thought it was one of the funny double endings. This statement about tragedy for tragedy's sake is actually true. Why? Tragedy is not terrible, and it is never that hard to accept. A successful tragedy is definitely more shocking and emotional than a comedy, and will be unforgettable for a long time. But the "shocking scene of separation that comes in an instant" that the author wants is not so easy to achieve. Whether there are any hidden foreshadowing clues before this, whether there are any hints or metaphors in the text, whether there is a strong logical inevitability, are all necessary conditions for placing the reader into the role. A tragic ending that is not touching and convincing cannot be considered a success. Regardless of whether the young and willful Huaju, who is half water demon, will still insist on her own choice between getting married and letting him die after admitting her love for Cong Quan. Perhaps she did underestimate the viciousness of her relatives and overestimated her ability to control events. As Yuan Xingruo, Guilan and others who have always "loved" Hua Ju, they have high positions and powerful powers. Do they have to give Hua Ju this choice and make it end tragically? No matter what, Cong Quan was kind to Hua Ju and took good care of her, and even abandoned his official position, country and family to run away for Hua Ju. How could this not end in death without being able to get married, right? What is the inevitability of emotion and reason? Besides, it's not that Hua Ju doesn't love Cong Quan, she just doesn't love her enough to give up her freedom for him and is afraid of marriage. Is it necessary to cause terrible scars that will make her sad for the rest of her life? Aren't her family worried about her suffering? Let's talk about Xia Congquan, as a powerful official with deep scheming thoughts, would he die easily even if he was sad and resentful after being rejected by Hua Ju? When others ask him to jump into the sea, he jumps into the sea without any intention of struggling or resisting? A woman who is desperate for love may die so generously, but a man, come on, is too different from his previous image, right? To sum up, there are too many irrationalities in this tragic ending, and it is really unpleasant to calm down and reflect on it. It is no wonder that so many readers cannot accept it. After all, everyone has reason and emotions. So readers don't need to be excited, and the author doesn't need to be angry. It's just a beautiful dream with two murmurs at the end, which is a bit unreasonable, so what does it matter?
After reading the author's comments, I became even more confused. But a 15-year-old girl is so willful.
The sudden tragic ending, why? Because Huaju is the lucky one who has always been protected and tolerated but doesn't know what to do, so do you want to destroy Suquan on behalf of the moon to make her disillusioned?
This ending Are you sure it's not a prank?
That's okay. I'll give you a little flower.
Such a girl... I believe her crying is sincere, but it is conceivable that after crying, she will pat her butt and go about her business, and only show her sincere crying again when she needs to cry.
In Star Realm, Captain Raphael of Basloyer said that she had no time to talk to the battleship. Xiao Ai replied to the other party according to the order and said to himself expressionlessly, "I'm angry, I'm angry." To this day, I'm not sure whether Xiao Ai is talking about the princess or the captain of the battleship... These are off-topic. I have decided not to leave any more messages here anyway - when I said that, I thought that readers would not have new words to express my feelings. However, obviously I was wrong, or underestimated the extent of corruption. Since I have been called a pervert, and I think this is too much - I am not Hannibal or Nero or Tiberius. At most, I just wrote some so-called sexual crimes against minors - so I want to say something and do something to express my position. First of all, I'm not a pervert. Secondly, I don't deny the view of tragedy as tragedy, because there are always various attempts. I want to see whether the shock-filled separation scene that comes in an instant is more tragic, or the slow tragedy that has always been hinted but cannot escape the sense of fate is more tragic. It turns out that the effect of the former is quite gorgeous. Those who have doubts about this can watch The Fragrant Dream Next Door, which is also a tragic ending, but it is not unacceptable. In addition, I appreciate the comment of neurotic, maybe it is just accidental, but in my opinion, the character prototypes of Xia Congquan and Hua Ju are indeed neurotic people, and my persistence is that I never think that a pairing of similar personalities is a good pairing. It is true that it is not that they will not be happy, but it is too hard, for both parties. Of course, it also involves the construction of the entire world being affected by a certain game, and the most important point is the inheritance method of ability inheritance, and the setting of the favorability level with the highest personality opposites. What should I say in the end? People who want to watch a comfortable or uplifting tragic route should think about their own lives properly. Of course, we have excluded the problem of dyslexia, so we must either go to tutoring in Chinese language and at least be sure of the meaning of the tragic route, or learn more about the universal behavioral patterns of human beings. Basically, so-called normal humans will not seek a comfortable mood from a story marked as a tragic route, right? After the last part, I suddenly thought of a sentence that shocked me a few years ago when I was playing Classmates 2. The manager of the Royal Sister said to the protagonist, to the effect of "Boy, these beautiful words you are saying now, wait until you have been living in society for ten years before you say it, even if you have the guts!" Suddenly, really suddenly, it didn't just resonate, I really wanted to scream like this once, no matter who it was to. Or, the third possibility, going back to the original digression, since Xiao Ai did not use honorifics, and generally speaking, she should use honorifics to Shangguan, so maybe she was just angry for herself for doing a boring thing, and of course I was too.
It's too much. The author is a tragedy for the sake of tragedy. The author's writing style is a bit neurotic and makes all readers uncomfortable. The author is happy. The adult is a pervert who longs for love and treats love cruelly.
2. Don't say it's a lover, no matter what kind of person or other life form, in a one-on-one situation, I will never be so great as to sacrifice myself to save others... I made an unknown laughter... Kekekekeke... 3. Summary and expansion of the second article - your own life is more important than others, and it is most important for yourself. 4. Life is not the most precious, at least in romance stories, love and loyalty are much more precious than justice and life, otherwise there would be no such word as "sacrificing for love". 5. The fourth supplement is that in a marriage that feels like hell, life is the least precious. 6. Hua Ju and I love someone. When his life and our own freedom are put together, we absolutely choose our own freedom. This is completely a matter of consciousness and has nothing to do with personal morality or education. Well, maybe it has something to do with how much romance novels we read... 2. You can get divorced if you are married, and the other party is not a stranger, but a lover you have acknowledged. 3. Here I just hope that a marriage can save one life without sacrificing another life. 4. No matter how you look at it, this marriage should not be called a hellish marriage. 6. Love someone, but don't want to sacrifice your own freedom to save his life?? I think this is the most essential manifestation of the consciousness of an only child (I am an only child, and all my friends who are not only children cannot accept the ending, but I think it is very possible) Of course, it is the author's freedom how to write
You are not writing a love story, but a social ethics story. Hua Ju has never loved Xia Congquan from the beginning to the end. Although Hua Ju is a half-water demon in the story, I still want to compare her to a drowning person. As a simple and ignorant person with no ability to protect herself. Woman, she just grasped the life-saving straw of Xia Congquan in a state of confusion about reality and uncontrollability of the future. Once the drowning man comes ashore, will she still consider the whereabouts of the straw, and whether this straw also needs her? While giving up Xia Congquan, she was able to secrete a lot of tears from her tear glands. No matter she was mourning everything in the past, or she was sad for Xia Congquan's tragic fate, these tears could not wash away the fact that she, Hua Ju, had never loved Xia Congquan, whom she had always said she loved, but was using him from beginning to end, more than ordinary use. What is even more outrageous about others is that the former at least admitted her exploitative behavior when facing her own heart, while she, Hua Ju, who used Xia Congquan as a protective screen, always played an innocent role, acting under the banner of understanding, support and love for Xia Congquan to others, and more importantly, to herself, because she did not have the courage to recognize her own cowardice and despicability. Fortunately, when this farce caused by Hua Ju's willfulness was about to come to an end, Xia Congquan understood how sensitive and delicate he was, but also how decisive he was. Faced with this little girl who believed that she did not want a "cheap marriage", he did one thing---Part 1 For once and for the last time, he let himself go, not doing it for anyone else, including Hua Ju, but only for himself---paying homage to his feelings in a beautiful gesture. Regardless of Xia Congquan's death or life, the last gift he left was just to give others time to make an embarrassing curtain call. A revengeful and grudge ending. However, this cannot be blamed on Hua Ju, she is just a willful little girl who has not grown up, a woman who does not dare to admit that what she has done is not strong enough. The most important thing is that she does not understand what love is.