The Spirit Behind You

The ending came a bit too suddenly. I felt that Tom had lost so many times and didn't know how to cherish it. There needed to be a transition or a confession to the heroine at the end. However, the extra story gave people an understanding of Tom's final thoughts. It was still very beautiful. His final thoughts were somewhat of a change of heart. The timeline of the whole story was very orderly, and the description was also relatively delicate. The shortcomings of psychological activities were all brought out in the extra chapter. In short, it is an article worth reading:)

Looking back after reading the full text, Abraxas also truly loves the heroine, much more than Avery. Although he was not as capable and smart as Tom, he did everything he could in his position. He knew from the beginning that he could not be with Eleanor, so he ignored his love, even Avery and himself were deceived. He felt that Tom's nature would hurt the heroine in the future, and because he had a premonition that Eleanor liked Tom, out of jealousy, he arranged a match Avery stayed with her because he thought Avery was better. However, when Eleanor was about to drop out of school, he was willing to ask Tom, whom he hated, to keep her, and beat him for his change of heart. He gave up the dignity that a Malfoy should have. At this time, even Avery had given up. He still wanted to keep Eleanor. To a certain extent, he was as persistent as Tom. When he discovered that Eleanor disappeared outside the school, he even violated school rules and stole the potion. If it weren't for the Veritaserum, Avery would not have believed that he had always been in love with Eleanor. When he found out that Avery had fallen in love with someone else and hesitated to steal the Veritaserum, he felt angry. He felt that Avery no longer He doesn't care about Eleanor anymore, and Tom doesn't care either. No one cares about her except himself. He is not worth it for Eleanor. He should have blessed Avery's new relationship, but he feels the same resentment towards him as you do towards Eleanor. After all, he chose Avery, and he failed to live up to his own expectations. He himself couldn't give Eleanor happiness, and Avery, who he wanted to entrust to her, was unreliable, and he didn't trust Tom. There was probably a moment when he complained about why he was a Malfoy in such a powerless moment. In order to bring Eleanor back, he did not hesitate to agree with Tom's use of black magic to harm the original Muggle Eleanor. When Eleanor's body died, he also collapsed. He cried out for Eleanor that it was not worth it. He resented Tom for never truly cherishing Eleanor. However, when Eleanor came back to life, he couldn't help but hug her at that moment and shed tears and tremble, but he quickly calmed down. He said goodbye to her, and was deeply afraid that he would stay here, because he had not forgotten that he was getting married. He did not dare to look at it for one more second and let himself hesitate. For him, as long as Eleanor could live, he no longer dared to ask for more. His sincerity was covered in tears, and Eleanor would never know all this. He was willing to only be Eleanor's "friend" forever. In the name of friends. It was not until the end, when all his children entered Hogwarts, that he was willing to admit that Tom, whom he hated, could bring happiness to Eleanor. He finally let go of all this more than ten years after Avery. Even though he has been trying to avoid the union of Eleanor and Tom by breaking off the relationship, even though he has been reluctant to admit it, he has already recognized in his heart that Tom values Eleanor. Even though Tom is a evil person, he will be good to Eleanor, otherwise he would not be at the wedding. He concealed Tom's malice, even though he had a premonition that Holliday would encounter misfortune, but he didn't want to ruin the wedding that Eleanor was looking forward to, and he didn't want Eleanor to know the truth. His body instinctively made the choice for Eleanor, hoping that she could be an ignorant and happy bride. To my eternal friend Abu, I never think that his daring to declare his love is cowardly, nor do I think that his daring to confront his family is cowardly. After all, a person's emotional expression should be controlled by himself. He just made his own life choice. Eleanor was not hurt by anything that he didn't dare to admit, except for his failure to face himself calmly. Apart from hurting himself, he had done everything a friend could do for Eleanor, and even more than that. He had never exceeded her rules. Until the end, he did not regret his choice to express his love or trouble her. He had made a choice, so he walked on decisively, and he would always be a friend. This is what I admire most about him. I sincerely wish Eleanor's most sincere friend, Abraxas Malfoy, that he can start a new stage of life and move forward, and that he have a happy and fulfilling life.

Although all the reactions are reasonable, I have to say that the heroine is really a complete loser, and it is not pleasant to watch at all. I also understand rationally that the heroine is an ordinary person, and fate has brought her to where she is today. Tom is not a good person either, a couple with a broken pot and a broken lid. To be honest, this article made me feel useless.

I feel like the ending is not he, like a glass with a sweet heart sandwiched between illusions, and I feel a strong sense of emptiness. . .

Great article. I saw it too late. I can't imagine how happy I was reading in Jinjiang.

How should I put it? I feel that this kind of happiness is too dreamy, and the plot and character development are not coherent. After all, this is fan fiction, so the original characters are inevitably OOC, but I feel like the original heroine is also OOC. The setting's keen intuition, longing for magic, and bold straightforwardness have gradually lost their original color and become blurred. It feels like it is rushing to give the male and female protagonists a happy ending. The exploration of the characters and the emotional resonance between the two people are missing. It can only be said that the book shortage is edible.

This ending is a bit difficult to reconcile, but it feels like it is the only way for them to be together, but it feels like this kind of being together is not he, alas.

By the way, what about the side story of Little Black Room?

I really like the feeling in this article! Love is not the most important thing, the most important thing is how to manage your life!

I also like this kind of protagonist!!!!!! Xiaobai is often written like an idiot, and Madonna often wants to save some really bad people, which will kill others. The most annoying thing about being calm and noble... It feels very pretentious. If we classify them by the mind type of hunters, the ones I like the most are those of the strengthening type