
[Archangel Fan Fiction] No. 1: The First Family
[天神右翼同人]NO.1 第一家庭
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 22k Words
- Genre
- –
- Era
- –
- Updated
- 19y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
16Chapters
76Favorites
3.6kClicks per chapter
56Comments
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Author, I seem to remember that Mammon-sama cannot use magic. . . . . . = =
[1St floor] Author's reply Publication time: 2010-06-05 19:34:57 As long as Lan mm thinks it makes sense, the other day I was reading your loving fanfic and it suddenly jumped to the start of the fight. I was also shocked. With great difficulty, my conscious body couldn't help but come out to dance with Lulu, and I didn't even have time to explain the rest of the little box and clothes. This, this, isn't this a pity? In this article about God, everyone is really unfortunate and no one is pitiful, so we hope that someone can help our most beloved protagonist steal a little more happiness. Fortunately, the paper is still being revised, and fan fiction is not considered outdated o(∩_∩)o
Blue mm, In fact, this Mammon fanfic is very well written. The opening chapter is humorous and interesting, and the process is also touching. It has the flavor of laughter and tears. It is indeed a pity to write the last two chapters, but I understand that you were hit by a bomb. After Rice was resurrected, countless people were killed by the bomb. In fact, there is a way to make your fanfic perfect, that is, don't jump to chapter 79 of the paper, just write about your journey of Mammon's exploration of the heaven, and then return to the devil's world with the secret. Mammon can publish his book, Lulu can continue to hold Rice and feel sad, and then the consciousness can come out at any time and communicate with father and son lovingly. What a beautiful thing~~~ I like it too when I think about it. Then your article will stop before Rice is resurrected. As for the final fight, Haniya killed first. He was also sexually seduced and possessed by God the Father, so he forgot the kindness and ideals of Rice and went on a killing spree, right? Where was Haniya still at that time? Then there is nothing wrong with Mammon hurting him, and it is not inconsistent with the sincerity of the brothers in Guangyao Palace. I simply like your fanfic, which is why I'm so verbose. Thank you for your wonderful writing. Mammon's somewhat nonsensical rants, his rudeness and cruelty, and his sexiness that penetrates to the core. I can't get enough of it. It's a pity that such a wonderful person has a fruitless love. I like Mammon, I like this first family, and I sincerely hope that everyone in the first family can steal a little bit of happiness in the midst of endless suffering. Amen~~
I feel sorry for Mammon and Belial, I hate Haniya
I hate Haniya… Mamie is so cute...
Very well written and beautiful~~
Well written. But I have a little doubt: Isn't it Lu who is talking to Mi in words? How could he become Mammon?
I also ask, doesn't Mammon know magic = =||||
I like Mammon, but I hate Haniya and Belial...
Isn't Mammon blind to magic~-_-!