
[Criminal Minds] A Love That Lasts
(CM/犯罪心理)长情
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 235k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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51Chapters
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7.7Score
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At first, I didn't understand why some people gave it a negative score. After reading the ending chapters, I felt that the negative score was too cheap. Mourning for the money and time I spent earlier. By the way, take revenge. The previous plots are relatively logical. The heroine, who originally looked like an ordinary little girl with a little selfishness, suddenly turned into a brain-dead Madonna, Baihua? In the United States, if there is a child kidnapping or missing case, it is considered a major case. Once confirmed, the Amber system will be activated immediately. Watch CM and you will know that several episodes are cases of missing or kidnapped children. The case will be directly handed over to the FBI BAU within 24 hours of the incident. Unlike in China, where 24-hour confirmation is required to be considered missing, and even if it is an ordinary missing case, the police will treat it as a priority search case. At least they must ask all the people they know around them one by one to ask for the child's information. But that child disappeared silently? Even the police don't know? No one even called the police after the heroine disappeared for so long? In addition, when Maeve disappeared in CM, Ried asked the BAU team to help find her whereabouts. The heroine who was about to get married disappeared and was dismissed with just a few cursory sentences without being able to find out? Is this taking my own IQ as BAU IQ? The first thing BAU usually checks when investigating a case is whether the victim has done anything that would make him a target. So the first step is to check whether there may be any offending behavior. In CM, the first thing that the BAU team must do in almost every episode is ignored like this? As long as it is found out that the heroine may have committed offending behavior before, plus the case of missing children, a cross-search for the child abuser will soon be included as a suspected target. Unexpectedly, we have never been able to find out who it is, and we still rely on undercover help. The biggest bug is that the heroine suddenly changes her mind and becomes mentally retarded? Someone called and said he would kill the child if he couldn't come, so she went to die? Do you think that if you go over to the pervert who made bombs to kill a bunch of people, you will let them go? Does she think she is Supergirl? Is this the brain circuit of a normal person? Anyone who has watched CM knows what will happen if a pervert who blows up so many people is sent there by himself. Not only is he unable to save anyone, he even gets involved himself! Is she saving people or harming them? I rarely give negative marks when reading a novel, but what I hate the most is this kind of money-cheating chapter. It is illogical and purely for the sake of torture. If it promotes the storyline, it is acceptable. However, there is no need for these plot designs at all. It also makes people feel that the heroine has a completely negative IQ!
What about the heroine and Reid? Why is there no extra story and the ending is not sweet?
I really want to give a negative score, but what happens next! ! Where is the heroine! ! ! Where is R Bao! ! ! 555555
I really don't know what to say at this ending = =I can understand all the abuse before. Except for the end, the last paragraph is really cruel and makes no sense_(:зゝ∠)_It feels meaningless Such a big living person is missing, and the little child is missing. Why is no one investigating = = Something happened to the family members of the BAU team members, but they didn't continue to investigate... And the second male lead, I don't know why he feels superfluous in the last part. If another person were to be the undercover agent, the plot could continue to develop. And the end of the article really feels unfinished = =... At least it makes me think that the heroine's lower body will become darker... And will they really be HE in the end... I can't imagine it at all. Moreover, Reid's perspective at the end is not enough, and it doesn't feel like he is the male protagonist. Of course, the author also has a hard time writing articles, so please do your best for future articles.
I don't understand what the theme of this article is about. If you look at it as an article, there is no theme. If it is a love theme, the later development has nothing to do with love. The heroine has been abused in various ways. If you say that this story is BE, I always feel that there may be a way to save it. The ending is too hasty. To be fair, I really can't think that it is not a bad ending. What should be explained, such as love, life, and supporting roles - well, the descriptions of supporting roles are sparse - are either vague or not explained at all. There is explanation, and the plot twist feels very subtle →_→ It is indeed well planned and foreshadowing, but it feels too plain and straightforward without feeling. The heroine's preconceptions and self-awareness are too strong. To be honest, I don't think she and REID in the article can continue their love smoothly, especially her reckless behavior [such as provocation] is a bit ignorant. Originally, when I saw the conflict between them, I thought the writing was quite realistic, but later on, it felt like a twist. Although it is not easy for the author to write, I always feel that this article should not be marked as finished. Pausing is better than not knowing what to say. It is really uncomfortable to see the twist in the ending. It is my first negative score in JJ in six years. The author may be a little emotional, but I personally feel that this ending is a bit irresponsible.
Why write Louis the young lady to death? And even though he is a CM who is full of perverts, should he suddenly change his writing style? It felt like he suddenly lost control and began to abuse the heroine uncontrollably. . . . . Why should you be so cruel to Louis? Child abuse is the most disgusting thing!
I don't understand the meaning of the heroine being abused, and the ending doesn't explain why the heroine was nailed by a pervert. If she was just being targeted, why did she send the video to Reid? The cowardly behavior of the heroine in the early stage hurt Reid and he just tolerated it. So why on earth is the heroine being tortured now! ! ! I regret spending money and taking the time to read this article! ! ! ! !
After reading it... I feel uncomfortable... I feel like I have eaten something
(?°???????ω°???????`)(-???-???-???-???-???___-???-???-???-???-???)???·(? ?????????? )??·? So sad, I feel so bad for Yiyi!
I skipped ahead to watch the ending. I started to really like the heroine's character, she was very cute, and so was the doctor. I feel like the ending is so sad, wow. However, it is not easy for the author to write the article. I feel very warm when I think back to the part where the heroine first meets the doctor.