The Ancient Pit

The real and fake twins PK live and watch from the front row

I would like to make a small comment. It seems that the author has not saved the manuscript. The lines are not obvious. It has a feeling of writing where it is. It can be seen that the author wants to write about the palace politics, but the writing power is not enough, and there is a sense of confusion, which also makes the readers very helpless. To carve out the scene and atmosphere, you still need experience. In the early stage of writing, you can lay out a main line (something like a pig's foot) Career or emotion can have an impact on the development of this or that in the middle of the story and determine the future direction of Pig's Knuckle). Two sub-lines (the regret of missing out and the sublimation of one's own value, the impact of position issues on the friendship of close friends and the decisions of oneself and others). For example, in the article, when his maid is mentioned, there must be an explanation. You can say Because of some modern habits and requirements of pig's trotters, the characteristics of the people who serve are: thoughtful, taciturn, lively and clever, and later betrayal, but people who meet the requirements of pig's trotters on the surface may not have thoughts in their hearts and will not take advantage of the characteristics of pig's trotters. They can also make other choices based on different values, so understand the people around you. The maids have their own ideas and ask people to investigate. It can also usher in the recognition of the servants and the understanding that they cannot be fooled. Because in that kind of social environment, if you don't set rules for the servants, they will set rules for you. This can lead to greater integration and adaptation to the environment while fighting. It is undoubtedly a growth. Then when faced with a struggle again, they will not look down on their opponents and cause regrets. The above can be adopted by the author at his discretion.

Zhong Yun was so deceitful, his whole body was full of peach blossom debts, and he died speechless like this. The two female protagonists like both uncles, but the uncles don't like them. When will real male protagonists appear?! I prefer the cold Chong Jing. Although the amusing Yuan Ling is also good, I feel that Chong Jing is more courageous. What made me burst into tears the most was that I thought someone finally liked the double-take, but in the end I found out that they had mistaken the wrong person, why should they be so deceitful? . The author is great. I read the entire article yesterday. The ending made me vomit blood. I said that I will read it again. Please give the author a heart-warming man! T_T

The author is great, don't be discouraged⊙▽⊙

Um... Is this the end?

How could it not be discovered…