[The Twelve Kingdoms] Storm Breaking the Chains, Sky Vast and Blue

The writing is very good, and I very much agree with the author's view that it is heaven that chooses the king, rather than Qilin choosing the king. So instead of placing hope on a king he has never seen before, it would be more reliable for Qilin to learn to govern the country by himself. Unfortunately, the original book stipulates that the king will rule the country, and Qilin will be an assistant at most. As for Lan Ruoxi's comment below, I also read the one he mentioned. It is indeed good, but this person's comment is a thumbs-up. Which article is more outstanding? I hope readers will have their own opinions after reading it, instead of being kidnapped by other people's opinions.

It's so uncomfortable that I wrote two long reviews but didn't send them out. Now I'm manually writing for the third time and can only say a few words. It's a pity that Yugen died. Just because she knew that she was a stepping stone and could still die for Kirin, she was the most suitable king, and she also had emotions that Rakujun couldn't match. I read Lok Jun in this article as a passerby, and it doesn't resemble the original work in the slightest. I think it would be better to replace it with an original character. After all, the contrast between Lok Jun's image is really huge. I thought all the other bugs were caused by the Emperor of Heaven. In the end, Jie Gen was really persecuted... Can you give her a chance to show her grown-up self... Hey, I haven't read a novel in ten years and I cried. It's so uncomfortable.

Lejun is so healing, so cute, so cute

The best article I have ever read on the Twelve Kingdoms. There is no love that we are used to seeing. But it is the article that is most consistent with the original work and the background of that era. It's really good to create characters.

Reading this article for the fourth time, it is definitely a classic among Twelve Kingdoms fandom. I also like Naruto fanfics, so cheers for the author ↖(^ω^)↗. I really like Lejun ~ Confession.

This is one of the few excellent Twelve Kingdoms fanfics! Sorry, most of the V chapters were pirated texts. I couldn't find the next 4 chapters, so I bought the V texts, but the writing is really good! I feel like I can watch it a second time~ Many years ago, many fans felt that Lok Jun was qualified to be the new king of Qiao Kingdom, but some people said that if he had the same surname, he would not be the king. At that time, fans were very quarrelsome. This article makes the upper and lower logic coherent, so good~~~ It's really a pity for Jiegen. In fact, she already has a lot, and finally got what she wanted, but she willfully abandoned everything she had.

Maybe it's because the Twelve Kingdoms itself is very cold, which caused the author to also become cold. But as someone who has watched the anime and read the original novel, I think this article is really well written. The world view is completely consistent with the original work, and the writing is also great. Even the logic of the story is very similar to the original work. People who have not read the original work may be really confused, but for me, this article is the best one among all the Twelve Kingdoms fan fiction I have read!

Finished Spreading Flowers ~ It's a pity that there is no more space to describe the story of the two supporting each other after Lok Jun came to the throne. I really want to see the grown-up Xie Lan.

Your wife writes so well. I like your articles so much!

Well written, I like this article very much