A Broken Dream (Qing Dynasty Transmigration)

The author was torn between changing history and following history. As a result, he wrote a strange heroine who was extremely entangled. The heroine could not make up her mind from the beginning to the end. The relationship with the male protagonist is very inexplicable and strange. It's painful and inexplicable, and some parts are just for the sake of adding new words. The emotional rendering is good, but the emotions are very strange. It gets better sometimes and gets worse sometimes, and the relationship between the two completely depends on the mood of the heroine at the moment. Moreover, when writing the heroine's lines, especially the early lines, they were too modern and confusing. It seems that except for the dialogue with the male protagonist and Thirteen, the dialogue with other people is not important. The plot is too similar to Bu Bu Jing Xin, but the level is not as good. Why does the Fourth Master love the heroine so much, and why does the heroine love the hero so much? It's simply the biggest mystery in the book. The pain of the heroine is also very strange. After all, except for being forced to marry in the early stage and having too many wives in the later stage, there is nothing really bad for the heroine from beginning to end. Why she is in so much pain that she almost can't live anymore is not written powerfully enough. No matter how many beautiful rhetoric are used to enhance the heroine's pain, it is very hollow.

It's so sad. . .

Is there no update today? How much more is left to be completed? Will this V article be written again?

Oh, just torture us to death!!

Too long. . When did Baoer become Huining's daughter? . . .

I'm not going back, or else we both can go back together.

Baoer is still the cutest~

I'm starting to look forward to the finale now = =

Okay, I still don't understand the copywriting = =

Continue (~^o^~)