Pep

Reading the first chapter, there was a comment saying that the extra story made Alice a mistress... And missed Narcissa when she was not dead. I jumped here specifically to watch the extra (●—●) I really feel like that... Maybe I want to write about that... Alice has liked Lucius since she was a child?? But the writing is weird (?ω?), As if... How should I put it... When Lucius's wife was not dead, he acted coquettishly and competed for favor. And the professor seems to have been written down in this article, at least in the extra chapter. Why does the professor still miss Lily after they have been married for many years? Confused. Why does Penny keep enduring her husband's mental infidelity? Personally, I think that if the professor got married, he would have accepted this woman wholeheartedly. Even if the professor got married because he wanted to have a family, he would definitely fall in love with the woman who gave him the feeling of family after many years. After all, the professor grew up in an environment of domestic violence, and his mother didn't care much about him. He lacked love (●—●). In fact, I originally wanted to give negative points, but then I thought about it, why should I make it difficult for the author? It is not easy for people to write articles. I haven't read the rest. Thanks for demining the first chapter, I'll abandon the article. (Don't tell me not to abandon the article or anything like that. When I said abandon the article, I was just talking to other readers who were reading the comments and wanted to get into the trap. I hope I can tell the key points first, so that other readers will not step on it.)

When I read an article, I usually like to read the beginning and end first, and the same is true for this article. I originally didn't want to watch the middle anymore after watching the end, but considering that the money has already been spent, I might as well watch it and finish it... In addition, the big he/she indistinguishability really made me watch it very hard... I think that either Snape was spoiled by Petunia and was just living a good life all day long to miss a woman who did not belong to him physically or mentally; or it was because of a man's bad nature that he ate from the bowl and looked at what was in the pot. But if you put it this way, the fact that he was able to insist on having only Petunia for so many years was probably because of the author's golden finger~ I always feel that Petunia's love is very hard, maybe this is life, full of compromises and concessions, so helpless... Fortunately, she has not lost herself, still stick to the bottom line, and Snape should also love Petunia, otherwise Petunia would have kicked him long ago, where would there be Lucia... The setting of Lucia's appearance does not conform to the explanation of genetics. If I were Penny, I am not sure whether I would strangle her to death when she was just born... It's really all kinds of obstacles... In short, this article looks like: panic--not so panic--sweet and happy-- panic--not so panic--happiness and sweetness, a constant cycle. Although it may be more in line with real life compared with the sweet article, it really means "it's not easy to say that I love you"... Ugh...

Well. . . Who does the professor like? It's too bad! The professor feels that he has established a scumbag here who is wavering between Lily and Petunia ("), and Dumbledore has always made excuses for Lily's death. The living are really not as good as the dead, and the heroine is not uncomfortable with the hero...

In the end, Lucia marrying Draco was a masterpiece. . . .

Moreover, Muggles are what house elves despise and hate the most. Kreacher's stubbornness about bloodline is so deep-rooted that the heroine changed his mind and became convinced with just two words. . .

Draco: "I didn't expect you to be like this Alice. I treat you as a good friend but you want to be my mother"

This side story is so cute, let's write a story about Alice and Lucius!

Hahahahaha~~~~~ Well done to Alice!!!!!

It's so confusing. . . . This pairing

Please write more extras~~I love you so much~~