A Comfortable Life in the Wizarding World

The writing is great, but I think it's a little harsh on Hermione. She didn't do anything wrong and studied very hard. She shouldn't be treated so unfairly. But the part about Ron and Harry was very relaxing.

The writing style is relatively novice, and I personally think it is a bit extreme, and the whole story is rather anticlimactic. This article is like a catharsis when the author is emotional. How can I say that the conflict between the heroine and the professor is resolved in such a way that it makes people speechless. In the end, the character of the heroine can actually be very good to the professor without any grudge. HE is also awesome.

It's still very interesting. Although there are others who are dissing them, they are just passers-by to me. As long as the professor is happy (it's not easy for me to discover such an old article)

It's okay, Su Shuangwen. There are bugs, but the flaws don't cover up the flaws. The highlight is not to follow the plot line by line, but to watch the exhalation. Let me tell you for those who haven't seen it: Snake House, Crazy Black Robbers, here it is set that the four robbers are not dead, and they are tortured alive. Among them, Sirius' torture method may be controversial. Black Lily Evans, it is set that Lily is not dead and comes back alive. There may be people who, regardless of whether they really like Lily or not, are unwilling to criticize Lily due to some moral reasons, or even though they dislike Lily very much, they will come forward to criticize anyone who criticizes Lily. However, the criticism of Lily Evans in her article is still within logic. It may be controversial to criticize Dumbledore. Dumbledore is a bit too evil. Although this character in the original book looks complicated, it is actually very clear in the writing. If he is too negative, some fans will criticize him. I hate Ron and Hermione, especially Ron, but the annoying things about Ron are all left by his mother, Rowling. To criticize Ron based on his shortcomings instead of making them up freely is not considered OOC. . . Those who don't mind this, or those who feel suffocated after reading other professors' articles, may feel relieved after reading this article. Although the first few chapters are really baffling, a 3-year-old can convince Lucius. . .

It's pretty good. Although there are still some unpleasant things and a lot of bugs, it's normal to have different literary thoughts more than ten years ago. The most important thing is that I totally agree with Master's last sentence, "You are not a fish, how can you know the happiness of a fish?"

I really think this daughter is quite alienated and ex-girlfriend.

I also think that I really liked Sri Lankan teacher, but because of what Old Bee said, he didn't trust the heroine so much. I felt it was a bit worth it. What's more, in this chapter, the heroine even apologized to Sri Lankan teacher. What did you think? Anyway, I felt that the heroine didn't do anything wrong. Why should I say that? Sorry, she is too humble. If it weren't for the heroine, Lily and the others would have died long ago. I really feel that she is not as good as Draco. Lucius and his family all trust the heroine unconditionally. I really like the heroine's character from the beginning, but after that, I feel that the heroine is like a love brain, humble.

Although I like professors, I think the professors in this article should be separated like this.

Yes, after reading so many HP and SS fanfics, I found that they are really too conniving. To be honest, I really can't stand them. They have poisonous tongues, facial paralysis, and are all dressed in black.

I feel speechless that the heroine always forgives Snape. This is the case in many novels in which HP Snape is the hero! ! ! No matter what mistakes Snape made, the misunderstandings, the tormenting, and the venomous words, in the end the time travelers would forgive Snape! ! ! Maybe I'm a bit biased, but I think these time travelers thought Snape was affectionate, cute, hard-spoken, and soft-hearted because of the characterization in the novel. Who could stand it if her boyfriend treated her like this in real life? If you would still pursue someone like this in reality? The earth is so big, it's hard to find someone who is affectionate, venomous, hard-spoken and soft-hearted, but it's not hard to find either! It is impossible to give without reward. Look at how good Snape is to be treated in HP novels. They help him, pick herbs for him, remove the Dark Mark from him, do anything for him, just to make him happy. Even a little bit of happiness can make the time travelers ecstatic! What do you want? It's this person, this person's deep affection! To be honest, if the time-travelers' feelings for Snape were to be pursued by another affectionate, poisonous tongue, hard-tongued, soft-hearted person, they would still be able to win! Snape was absolutely unlikable in terms of appearance. He had a gloomy, sallow complexion, sunken cheeks, yellow and uneven teeth, oily, granny-shaped hair, and was always dressed in black. He was as thin as a firewood stick, and had It smells like medicine (how can slugs and toads smell like medicine?) If this is not based on Snape's name, but on your boyfriend, let's think about it, that girl or a boy who loves cleanliness will like it? It's good if you don't vomit! ! ! ! She also always loses her temper with herself, throws shame on her, and has a venomous tongue! No matter how well you do, you won't get a "plain" compliment, and you have to lick your face to get it. Everyone has parents, and their parents won't be able to stand it if they see it! How heartbreaking it is that the treasure I have held in my hands since I was a child has melted away in my mouth, and I have raised it with the fear of falling. Just because of an old man, I have to be humble and flattering, and even throw my dignity and face to the ground for the sake of an old man. The old man still dismisses it. Having said this, I have to say, please don't make mistakes~ I just feel a little unworthy of the time-travelers. After reading the article, I feel like I just listened to my best friend telling me about the love process~ The author's writing is so good! ! Not criticizing Snape or the time travelers! I just don't think it's worth it. Are you willing to do anything for such an old man? There is anyone in the world who is better than him, someone who is more affectionate, more handsome, someone with a better figure, someone who is more talented. As long as you are willing to look for it, everyone is better than Snape! Of course, my girlfriends who have already fallen in love will definitely tell me that I don't want anyone except Snape. No matter how good Snape is, he is not as good as Snape. Those Snape fans are more likely to bombard me and say that Snape is good or bad, and they are more likely to scold me. I would like to apologize in advance. For this heroine who has a feeling similar to that of a best friend, it makes me feel that no matter how good Snape is, he cannot let my best friend get hurt, whether it is heart or body! ! ! That's too much! ! ! ! Men who hit women are not good men, and men who hurt women are bad men! After the injury, Snape actually didn't suffer much and repented, and the two got back together? This is absolutely unacceptable to me. If my boyfriend had dumped him earlier and told him to go away, I would have been able to live a good life no matter what. It's hard to find a good man with two legs for a three-legged toad~ Who hasn't fallen in love with a scumbag when they were young? Right~ Oh~ Sorry~ I got excited again, this is not good. . . My sense of justice is too strong, and I always feel that my daughter is being bullied. Of course, when my daughter bullies others, it is definitely someone else's fault. Otherwise, why would my daughter bully only one person if there are so many people in the family? Right~ It's a bit defensive~ Hey~ No matter what our daughter says about that man, I will always list the man's shortcomings, some bad ideas, etc. At least I can't let the man get through too easily, as if our daughter is easy to bully. What if it happens again? Still forgive me? How endless! ! ! But this is an article that the author has already written, not a real best friend. . . And if you have forgiven that stinky man, you won't change it again. . . No matter how many bad ideas I come up with, it can't change the fact that our daughter can't let go of that man. I can only look at it and wonder why so many time travelers are so stubborn~~~~Sigh~ But the author's writing style is very talented and his characterization is very profound! Great writing! ! ! Sit back and wait for the extra story~ For the sake of this long review of my virginity, thank you all for patting me~