Against the Light (Killua Fanfiction)

I have been putting off this long review for a long, long time. This article is the only long article that I chased until the completion in Yaba. For me, in addition to the story itself, watching it progress little by little, changing the title of the article, and revising it many times until it was finally published, this long but unconscious process has also become a special witness. During the most exciting second year of middle school, a lot of time spent in Tieba was given to hunters. I will never stay on any other forum to watch an article like this develop to its completion and get to know the author intimately. First say sorry to Sister Lian, and then say thank you. When I first read this article, I had a strong sense of stupidity - jumping off a building with a comic in hand, directly naming someone in love, etc. This plot has been used too much. I see that there is still some bloodshed in the back, but this does not hinder the excellent plot arrangement and character creation of this article, which makes me willing to keep following it. In fact, when I write this review, it has been a long time since I last read the article. I reopened Jinjiang and searched my memory along the article. The impressive clips still make my eyes shine, and there are also points that I have never discovered before. Here they are one by one. Ayu's feelings for Qi Ya were clear and deep from the beginning. He didn't give any special reason, it seemed to be instinctive. So the entanglement of the article lies in Qi Ya's attitude towards Ayu. The characterization of this part is very good, step by step, and complementary to the plot. The author's writing style describes Qi Ya's mentality at different stages in great detail. Qi Ya's delay in awakening became the keynote of all abuses. I watched anxiously, but when he finally regained consciousness, it was already a big tragedy. I was tortured and flustered. Ayu's character is one of the reasons for the tragedy. Her feelings for Qi Ya go beyond her own principles, and it is natural for Qi Ya, a freedom-loving child, to conflict with her controlling feelings and even want to escape. The Ayu at the beginning of the article is simply a girl's fantasy of traveling to the ideal state of beating up enemies. She has a close relationship with her family. She is Kurt's favorite sister. She is accused by El's sister and is recognized by her family. Even unethical romances are accepted. (Actually, just being controlled by Yiermi's sister is enough to make you fond of Yiermi here. XD) In the context of hunters, the hardship Ayu endured after arriving at Meteor Street did not move me. I positioned it as the experience that must be accumulated for upgrading. However, Riya and Ayu were separated in two places. What happened in the two places were narrated simultaneously in fragments, and there were similarities at certain points. Such a simple but effective method clearly established the link between the "Twins" for the first time. I had a vague premonition that the following stories would probably develop in this tone, and then I discovered that it was indeed the case. This method of writing about long-distance relationships has been used for a long time, but it is still very cruel. This is all due to the author's grasp of details. However, reading this, it feels a bit monotonous. At this point, the article only focuses on the emotions of two people. Without the support of a more exciting and complex story, always emphasizing "I am your twin" and "Let's go to hell together" will produce a sense of unnecessary moaning. At this time, the first extra chapter of "Six Years of Facing Backs" jumped into the eyes just right. I literally applauded this chapter. The montage processing naturally explained the growth status of Ayu and Qiya after they were separated. At the same time, the world that was laid out in one breath suddenly made me see the breadth of the future plot. The Hunter World finally officially became the background of this article. After reading this chapter in one breath, especially with the small layout of the previous chapters, I actually felt a surge of heart. I can't remember whether there was such a suitable extra chapter when I was following the article. If it was added later, then I give this extra chapter full marks. But my favorite part of the whole novel is the scene in a later chapter where Qi Ya eats sweets. Recalling that Ayu said "eating sweets can make people feel better", Qi Ya rushed into the dessert shop and devoured the cake, but tears were falling, thinking why it didn't work this time. This detail is so real and beautiful that I feel troubled and uncomfortable every time I read it. I even borrowed this gag when I was writing my own article. The contrast between sweetness and tears, a new interpretation of Qi Ya's sweet tooth, completely hits the point of abuse, and it is here that Qi Ya's image suddenly becomes fuller. Another character who left an impression is Kain. Compared to Kurapika, maybe because the concept of revenge is too young for manga, but Kain makes me feel more real. He seemed to be an annoying character when he appeared, but the strong contrast immediately pushed him away from the label of "villain". His gentleness and meticulousness can be seen in every detail. Ayu's various irritability and impatience towards Kain were all resolved silently by Kain, which was even more of a plus. I have to say that Sister Lian's control of details is unique. You can see the big picture from the small, just from the small details that a grandma ordered Kaiin to carry Ayu back to the room but he was scrupulous because Ayu was the future mistress, you can tell what kind of person he is. This is undoubtedly a successful original character. Let's talk about IL fans. I really like the image of the eldest brother in Sister Lian's works. He has a paralyzed face, chatters when he should talk, and is silent when he should be silent. He has long flowing hair, is cool and indifferent, but has a strong desire to protect his younger brother and sister. All his actions are very reasonable. The early interaction with Ayu Qiya made me, the eldest brother, feel heart palpitations. Ayu's feelings for him are also the feelings that a Hakka sister should have in an ideal situation to me. In the hunter exam, he played the role of the manipulator who has insight into the minds of his younger siblings, allowing Qiya to choose between Alluka's injury and Gon's death. This change is really great, and it does not deviate from the original image of Ilmi at all. It also gives Alluka a heavy blow to suppress his emotions, laying the foundation for the subsequent explosion. At the same time, this detail also fully demonstrates the attitude of the twins: Qi Ya also likes Ayu, but it is far from the persistent and deep love Ayu has for him. When Qi Ya reveals his feelings later in the article, it can also be seen that he is more like a passive recipient. This is completely reasonable for Qi Ya, but it still makes the readers feel sorry for Ayu. What makes me confused is the sudden "hatred" attitude Qi Ya has towards Ayu when Ayu goes to Meteor Street to practice. The previous explanation of this word is that Qi Ya believed that Ayu had abandoned and betrayed him, but Ilmi had already let Qi Ya untie his heart knot, so I felt that the sudden insertion of "hatred" was a bit abrupt. It wasn't until the two of them actually met that they realized that it was more about anger than hatred, which was resolved in Ayu's hug. If the previous article could be explained more clearly, maybe it would be better to read at this moment, otherwise it would feel like the thunder is loud but the rain is small. But soon this dissonance was drowned out by the sweetness. Ayu finally meets Qiya and finally feels like they have achieved success. The rhythm of the article is very good. After half of the torture, it is just right to make you feel sweet, and at the same time, you are preparing for the next tense climax. It can be foreseen at this point that the full story is expected to reach its climax in the Youkexin chapter. Ayu's motivation for joining Spider to protect Qiya is understandable, but at the same time, it is also foreseeable that the two will probably break up again. At this moment, Kurapika seems very important. As expected, the author also gave Kurapika enough shots. The portrayal of this boy may not be very consistent with the original work, but it is the most comfortable part of the plot of this article. And then the final climax, Youke Xin. In fact, according to the final plot, even if Ayu didn't do anything, Qiya wouldn't really be fine. But even in order to prevent him from being hurt even a little bit, in order to cut off the possibility of deviating from the plot, Ayu still bothered to deal with Kurolo Hisso. Therefore, thinking about it roughly is a climax that makes it difficult to take it seriously, but thinking about it carefully makes me feel sad for Ayu's attitude again. The core content of the whole article is Ayu's attitude towards Qiya. Her love is similar to Yi Mi's love for Qi Ya in some aspects, and her dedication to Qi Ya even has symbolic meaning in my eyes. The final ending was read to me by Sister Lian before it was officially published. At that time, because I didn't read the whole text in one go, I simply thought it was a bit tragic. Now after reading the series, I found that Ayu's attitude has not changed from the beginning to the end of the article. The plot is only an auxiliary promotion. Her feelings for Qiya may be what the author really wants to write. I don't want to say anything more about the ending. In my opinion, it is a very perfect ending. It has a tragic component and is in line with the tone of the whole story. It is also the final interpretation of Ayu's psychological activities throughout the story. In the end, Coola's treatment, Kain's treatment, the brigade's treatment, and Gon's treatment were all light and heavy, but each of them had an ending. This is not the most powerful fanfic that will arouse people's thoughts in life, but it depicts distinct characters. Each character has his own values, and the collision with each other leads to the development of the plot either joyfully or tragically. This is an article that pays attention to details. From the title to the careful layout at the end of each chapter, it all serves to summarize or pave the way for the following content. It is really rare nowadays for authors to quote a lot of foreign texts and pay attention to rigorous grammar. This is what I admire about Sister Lian. I also got the physical book, and I was surprised and moved to find my name on the end of the volume. Thumbs up for the cover and thumbs up for the layout. This book has a physical form. I believe that for Sister Lian, it is also because of the symbolic meaning it represents. Finally, I wish Sister Lian a happy new year.

I want a physical book QAQ

The book is very good, the end is very tear-jerking, I can't help but want to read on??(???????)??

Ahhhh, this is such a sad ending. I feel particularly sorry for Ayu. Even if I sacrifice my life, I will fulfill your wish. You are the only light of my life. I will pay any price for you, just for you; Killua? Beat the enemy, mine. . . My love, I was crying my eyes out in the toilet

Ayu will risk everything for Killua, and she will even give up her life to fulfill his wish. She regards Killua as more important than her own life, but Killua regards her efforts as what she should do for him, and Ayu still does not regret everything she did in the end... This comment is the longest one I have written, and this article is the best I have ever read! I cried when I read the ending😭 I hope the author can write more articles in the future

After reading it, I cried. I feel sorry for Ayu, who risked his life just to be the mistress of the enemy Hakka. When I miss Killua, I can only touch myself in the mirror. Killua is Ayu's belief, and everything is Killua's priority. Ayu's world only has Killua, but Killua's world doesn't only have Ayu. Ayu's death was foreseeable. She loved Killua more than herself. Killua's experience was destined to be accompanied by adventure. Ayu paved all the way forward for him and spent his own life. The article written by the author is really great. It is a representative work in Killua BG. Now when I think of Killua, I will think of Ayu.

Already crying in the toilet. Killua's world is not just Ayu, but Ayu's world is only Killua.

Ah ah ah ah ah 2023 is still too late to watch it? ! I wanted to receive the physical book, but tb doesn't even have a store. The salted fish tag has nothing to do with it. Does your wife have a Weibo?

Why can't I open that link? TT

After a long time, I reviewed it again, but still couldn't find the big dragon and horse text QAQ