[New Love vs. Old Flame] [Three Women Caught in a Love Triangle] [Three Possible Endings]
My next novel is fully drafted: She Made the First Move (all-female cast, sweet romance, love at first sight for the main couple, second chances for the side couple)
After seven years together, Lin Wan and Su Yan have forgotten that love takes constant effort to maintain.
Lin Wan: "I've seen how you look when you love me, so when you don't love me anymore, I know it better than anyone."
Su Yan: "No relationship can stay at its peak forever. It all gradually grows more ordinary..."
Lin Wan: "I agree. I don't love you as much as I used to, either."
Gu Qing fell in love with Lin Wan at first sight. "If one day you need someone to rush to you without a second thought, I hope that person will be me."
Lin Wan: "We shouldn't do this."
Gu Qing: "My flight leaves at three tomorrow afternoon. I'm going."
Lin Wan: "So soon?"
Gu Qing: "There's nothing here to make me stay."
Lin Wan: "What if I asked you to stay?"
One is the habit of seven years. The other is a half-month-long spark.
Lin Wan has to choose.
But no matter what she chooses, someone will get hurt, including herself.
Theme: People must take responsibility for their choices.
If the purpose of this article is to condemn cheating, just pretend that my subsequent words are not. If we are discussing "cheating" and the reasons behind it, my personal opinion: Endings 1 and 2 are both very "ideal" solutions. But the third ending is very realistic and in line with our conventional reality. Gu Qing does not trust Lin Wan, Su Yan does not forgive Lin Wan, and Lin Wan is at the lowest position because she accepted the temptation and cheated. However, this was originally the common mistake of the three of them. It was because of Su Yan's long-term indifference that Lin Wan's mind wavered when she was attracted to Gu Qing. Being attracted is not scary, but this wavering is scary because it is the fault of the lover Su Yan. Then Gu Qing did not give up after the first rejection, and took the initiative again, giving Lin Wan the opportunity to acquiesce. At the same time, Su Yan realized his long-term indifference and potential risks, tried hard, but failed to persist to the end, and then followed up. Or maybe I personally feel that ending three weakened Gu Qing and Su Yan's mistakes. There may also be an ending four to show the mistakes of Gu Qing and Su Yan that I mentioned? It doesn't matter if you don't have it. This short article is written very well by the author. Very happy to read this article.
In my heart, I prefer ending 2, but I know that even if there is reconciliation, the final ending in reality should be 3, a betrayal and eternal estrangement. So don't try to cheat. After one relationship ends, start another one. You will have an explanation for everyone.
Great writing, keep up the good work, author
Three feels the most realistic, but I prefer two. I feel that any relationship is likely to become meaningless later. Relationships are inherently man-made products and need to be maintained deliberately.
Gu Qing was the one who took the initiative at the beginning and always knew about it. She had already thought clearly about intervening and had been insisting. The sudden refusal felt inconsistent with her previous actions.
What on earth have I been watching during this time? . After reading a short story written by the author with reasonable characters and reasonable motivations, and smooth and non-verbose writing, I feel a little uncomfortable [covering my face and laughing] The author will definitely be able to produce better works in the future 💪
The third ending is more consistent. After cheating, there will really be a gap forever. Although I feel sorry for the relationship between Su Yan and Lin Wan. If Lin Wan had not cheated on him, Su Yan would have discovered the rift between them and changed himself in advance. Will the two of them last forever? 😭 😭 😭
2026.06.11
It hurts, hurts, really, seven years, so does Su Yan really not love him anymore? 😭 😭
Lin Wan nodded: "Yes." Gotta..."Catch a big bug for the author~ Missing a quotation mark