
[Bakuman Fanfic] Outline
(食梦者同人)轮廓线
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 132k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
39Chapters
352Favorites
7.6Score
10Nutrient gifts
3.4kClicks per chapter
206Comments
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It is really as plain and warm as the relationship between Reino and Eiji's childhood sweetheart, as plain and warm as a quietly flowing stream. It is far different from the original work =-= Needless to say, but I like both the warmth and the passion. Eiji in the anime is my favorite character. I always feel that when I see him, I will be a boy forever. Time does not seem to have any impact on the boy's heart. It is really a very passionate character, but maybe too passionate. It seems hard to imagine what kind of person is standing next to him. A life that focuses on comics every moment makes people feel that there are only comics and rivals in the boy's world and there seems to be no room for lovers. It really makes people feel helpless, but Ling Nai already exists like this, and it makes me feel that she is the only one who feels that maybe this is the only way to go on with the new wife teacher. The friendship between the four people is also very touching. It is really a very warm article.
It has a warm and literary feel. Although it is not the passionate style of the original work (which I personally prefer), fan fiction is originally a process of re-creation, writing things that the original work does not have, and supplementing the original work. Since the original work is so passionate, let's add some warmth. In this regard, Xin Kong has done a good job [laughing, "The Story of Love and Dreams" is indeed a little... Eiji's character is indeed very cute~ It should be said that everyone in the Fukuda team is very cute. When I watched Dream Eater, my whole body got excited and I was super excited [laughs] Finally, I would like to make some small suggestions. This style of shorter articles is quite suitable (such as this one) and seems warm, but if it were longer, it would be a bit too bland. I hope to see better works. Above.
Although it is bland and warm, I always feel that it lacks climax and climax.
I really like the big text!
I, I, I am here to ask for hookup, please Penguin, please help ~ [face covering We will contact you slowly for details =3=
The article is very warm and healing~
Very heartwarming article. I felt warm in my heart when I read it. I really like the kind that doesn't show the dark side, but knows it's there. Looking forward to the new pit, I will read it immediately~
Finally appeared——!!!
It's finished. It's good to watch, but it feels a bit unsatisfying. It's like looking forward to the new issue of Dream Eater every week and finishing it in one go...
First of all, I want to thank you. This is the only fanfic of "Dream Eater" that I have seen, and it is my favorite Niizuma Eiji. I really, really thank you! I read the whole article in one go. I liked it very much and regretted it a lot. I had all kinds of regrets about why I hadn't seen it before! So we couldn't help but leave a message! It would be better if it could be used as a long review, but I don't know if I can write it (laughs) So, let's talk about this article~ First, when I first received the notice from the subtitle team (we are doing animation subtitles, haha), I was fascinated by him for a while, not for anything else, just because of his dream. Dream Eater talks about the growth process of a cartoonist, which is very relevant to us, because we are also engaged in this, haha; the contour line gives me the same feeling. As a fan, although the protagonist has changed, the essence of the original work is still reflected in the article. On this point, I want to learn from you. Secondly, the whole story is connected together, it is clear and light, and it never loses the desire to read. It is a beautiful and sweet article. However, I really want to complain... From the current perspective, it seems that Xin Zhi's journey to become the most popular cartoonist has been smooth. As his woman, Ling Nai's stardom... Is there really no obstacle? Well, luck can be considered a kind of strength, I respect myself. Third, the family love in this article, okay, I also want to complain about it [PIA Fei] Initially, when Ling Nai left, she mentioned grandma, because her broken leg and the harmonious family began to fall apart. If the final ending could repair this, I would like it more, really; this is just a personal opinion, and I apologize if it makes you unhappy. Fourth, friendship, after reading this article, I also started to reflect a little. Many of my first friends have lost contact. It is really a pity not to have friends like Ling Nai, no, close friends. Therefore, we must start to cherish the present. Although the probability is very low, situations like Chikako may still happen, so don't regret your youth. Fifth, dreams, this is connected in series from beginning to end, and it makes me passionate about it. I first saw in the original work that the tallest uncle died of overwork because of comics, and the new wife's love for comics. I can only say that I admire them. How many people can do this for their dreams now? Even though they are just virtual characters, I still admire them. Sixth, let's talk about the topic of love now. Maybe many people like vigorous love, but I really prefer this kind of plain love. I have to hide my feelings and guess whether the other party likes me. This is really the most innocent student romance, especially That kind of childhood sweetheart and best friend, actually I also want to find someone like this, but unfortunately, we don't have this blessing, so I am jealous of Ling Nai in various ways; for Ling Nai's other friends, they all have a HE in the end, which is really great. In fact, at the beginning, I was still in the relationship between YY's agent brother and the president... OTZ... Seventh, I have to talk about the cutest and cutest cat~~ When I learned that the author used his own cat as the prototype, I once had the idea of abducting it... However, after that, I can only say, okay, I want to K. O the person I abducted first, really. Next, there are the parents of the two living treasures. Although they have seen their concern for their mothers, they have never gone back to take a look... This... Well, it is just a personal opinion. Lala Zaza wrote this, it seems a little off topic, well, I hope you can forgive me~ As long as the new wife and their family have a happy ending in the end, we will be very happy~ The most beautiful things in life are family ties, friendship, love, and dreams coming true. So, Ling Nai, I am jealous of you~ I just want one thing now, to have no regrets about my youth and to chase my dreams. Then, we will succeed! If someone from our family sees that I have no code and comes to write a review, they will definitely hack us to death, but this is my youth without regrets~ isn't it~~ Haha. Since this is my first time writing a long review, I apologize if I offend or do anything wrong. Thanks. I'm looking forward to seeing Dream Eater fandom again, which is also the way we dream. Hehe.