
Surviving in Secret
潜暧求生
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 381k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
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86Chapters
5kFavorites
8.7Score
1.2kNutrient gifts
30.5kClicks per chapter
5.1kComments
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For an offense and control player, I was really confused by the extras between these two. Although I knew intellectually that Gong was wrong, I still couldn't help but make excuses for him, and I really felt sorry for him when I saw the two of them missing each other for so long. In fact, when I was reading the main text, I secretly hoped that they would break up completely, each find a good man for the rest of his life, and the two would be happy and so on. I had long expected that if they reconciled, Dagu would be hurt again, and now I feel very sad.
TUT I originally thought that Brother Feng would be with Second Brother Gu... Brother Feng hopes to be happy with the mixed-race beauty Where is the spring of Gu Erdi Nai [looking at the sky]
Complementary points and congratulations on the completion of this article.
It is truly a heart-warming ending that will warm the hearts of those who watch it! ! If Brother Junfan were to have a master, he would really want to lust over him and Xiao Gu Gu. But even if he is a master, lusting after him doesn't matter~! ? O(∩_∩)O haha~
Looking at Mo Tong's writing, from the rebirth of Miyin to the latest completed "Survival of Survival", I personally like Mo Tong's writing style very much. Not only In terms of style alone, it can be said that in all aspects, it is more in line with some of the characteristics of my own reading. As far as the previous Miyin is concerned, it was very Liked it and made some comments. A particularly important point is that Mo Tong's writing will not be unfinished. There is no shortage of good writing and good themes nowadays, but It often makes people very speechless after seeing it, especially the more they look at it, the more disappointed they become. The phenomenon of random tails is almost universal now. This This will make everyone who writes the article feel helpless. But now that I have finished reading Qianmi Survival, I am even more convinced that Mo Tong's writing is of high quality. Reading Mo Tong's articles, in terms of writing techniques, I feel that this author's articles are all neatly written and have clear plot clues, although they are relatively long. It's long, but it doesn't give people a feeling of procrastination, nor does it make people feel tired and want to finish it quickly. Overall article The writing is sharp and sharp. Looking at Mo Tong's article, one point in the plot of the article is quoted (this sentence is quoted from a comment by a fellow fan on the place where survival is hidden when I was browsing the post). Said): "The ambiguity in this article is the most NB, there will be a pink aura." When I saw this sentence, my first feeling was I think this sentence sums it up very well, because when I read Mo Tong's article, I personally felt that there was some atmosphere created in her article. There will be that kind of pink aura appearing in the atmosphere or dialogue or plot, which makes people feel their heartbeats pounding (ahem, please ignore my blunt words, haha) Ha), so the feeling of reading her articles is very real, all kinds of cuteness; and another point like the person mentioned before is that It's: "The ambiguity in the article is the most NB." Personally, I think it's that ambiguous atmosphere, and the way she writes makes people interested in her writing. The feeling of exhaustion. Although the feeling of hiding for survival is more vividly reflected, the rebirth of Miyin also does not lack this point. It seems that Mo Tong is very Will use this kind of plot arrangement! ! Looking at Mo Tong's articles, another point about the plot of the article is that the plot development of each part of the article is very natural, just like As mentioned above, the clues are clear and the emotions are smooth; and the overall plot does not make people feel thin, and its framework is actually It is still relatively thick, and each character does not have the feeling of being a stranger. In other words, each character is more flesh-and-blood, and You won't ignore the speculative narrative description of that character just because he is not the protagonist. This is very good, because often the side of an article is Contrast is also particularly important, and I have always believed that one of the most important points in writing is: "The success of an article depends on its Grasp and description of details." (Of course, this does not mean that the longer and more protracted the details are, the better, but it does mean that details are very important. It is indispensable, so here it is more reflective of its accuracy, which depends on how each author understands and expresses it) There is no doubt that Motong did this very well! Since people who are not the protagonist can grasp it so well, let alone the protagonist (laughs D)! But I have to say that I like all the protagonists in Mo Tong's article very much, especially the descriptions of each person's strong aura in the article, which is even more impressive to me. Heart, O(∩_∩)O~ (Actually, that kind of all-purpose attack is not the personality I always like, but Motong's description here is very sure, no You might think it's too exaggerated, but it has a certain status and ability. After all, everyone doesn't like to see small attacks from vulnerable groups (laughs D)! And It's all kinds of cute! ! I won't say much more about this point here, so as not to make it more lengthy and make people dizzy even more! ! (Covering face, Running...) Secondly, regarding the survival of Qiannuan, I saw many people commenting on the post, especially feeling that the H is missing! ! In fact, it is proposed here that it is a People feel that this issue is one that must be said! ! I don't know if it's ultimately due to the strong winds in Jinjiang's HX, but personally I feel that this article is to highlight this ambiguous feeling that leaves people unsatisfied, ha! ! But having said that, I also think it is less Too much, O(∩_∩)O haha~ (cover your face, run...) Finally, I have something to say about Ye Haozhe and Gu Dashao. This pair of deputy CPs are relatively popular. They didn't finish writing the extra story. At that time, how many people expected Mo Tong to write their story, but they didn't expect that their story would be completed in just a few chapters. What I want to say is that this is so embarrassing for everyone who is expecting a long story! Haha! ! Ps: I personally like this pair of CPs, check it out After reading the extra chapter, I like the two of them even more. I really hope it can be longer. Speaking of which, after reading the extra chapter, I feel that the author is afraid that others will not like them. I said Ye Gu will be finished soon, but actually I would rather write more, haha! ! This couple is so in love (this is just my little novel lol + rant...) Finally, Mo Tong's writing personally feels that starting from Miyin is the dividing line. It can be said that you have found your own suitable writing style. The writing and plot control are better than those written by Miyin before, and the secret of survival can be regarded as a proof! I hope Mo Tong will continue to write good articles, everyone Let's look forward to the return of the next article! ! !
Is there just one extra story? It's too little. Sir, let's allocate Jun Fan to Ze Yi.
Spread the flowers, thank you Tongtong for ending another trap. Complete.
Finally got married, ah ah
Half of you, Brother Gu, also hope that we can make arrangements, hehe, I support you.
Married ah ah ah ah