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11 返 Cashback Makes Me Invincible: Starting by Taking in a Troubled Young Woman 返现无敌，从收留精神小妹开始 Sleeves Full of Galaxies满袖银河Urban2.1M WordsOngoing The old geezer’s run out of money for food. You know what to do! Plenty of girls in this feel-good story, and no angst. A cashback cheat starts with a pink-haired, edgy little sister. This is the place to shake off the day’s fatigue and leave with a smile. A lovely place to while away the time. [Feel-good story + harem + comedy + passion++] 15.5kReads7.3Score1.1kShelves

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In the first book, the early stage is a normal urban god novel and the later stage is full of fighting, which is super exciting. In the second book, dormitory survival, you can become stronger while sleeping. In the third book, the protagonist takes tourists through history to visit other science fiction planets.

15 关 The Mountain Ranger of Guandong 关东巡山人 Tianshan Shield天山盾Mystery3.8M WordsCompleted Black-handled blades, jade-faced foxes, the Thirteen Guardians who shook eastern Manchuria. Princes and generals, spirit mediums and magistrates. Limping beggars with long-stemmed pipes, monks and Taoist priests. Dragons, serpents, tigers, and leopards: none can escape the flying knives. A mountain range in a parallel world's eastern Manchuria, a feud sealed away for thirty years, a black blade that fills everyone with dread, a world of outlaws teeming with heroes, and a mountain patrolman who w 29.9kReads9.2Score4kShelves

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I have been a book fan for 20 years, and I recommend it honestly. I read all of it on Tomato. It is definitely not inferior to the starting point. It is super hilarious and the writing is first-rate. It is worth reading.

25 孽 Wicked Master, Follow My Lead: I’ll Make the Jie Sect Invincible in the Primordial World 孽师听我指挥，我带截教无敌洪荒 Rampaging Portuguese Egg Tart暴走的葡式蛋挞Eastern Fantasy2.0M WordsCompleted Ying Yuan woke up one day to find that he had transmigrated to Mount Kunlun in the Primordial World. He had become an evil dragon, formed from the power of wickedness at the dawn of creation. As an innate evil dragon, he was steeped in wickedness and burdened by karma. The Human Religion refused to take him in, the Chan Sect despised him and called for his death, and the Dragon Clan of the Four Seas wanted nothing to do with him. With no other choice, he joined the Jie Sect as an outer sect disc 107.3kReads9.2Score10.9kShelves

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Contrast between master and apprentice in an anti-routine way: the protagonist Nielong's identity is rejected by many factions. He enters the Jiejie religion and relies on the diary system to develop, but because the diary is peeked by Tongtian, it turns into a famous scene of "disciple commanding the sage master". The interaction between the evil disciple and the evil master's counterattack is super hilarious. 2 God-level diary cheat: you can become stronger by writing a diary. The content contains the prophecy of the destruction of the Jie Cult and the secrets of the ancient times. It can not only predict the future to avoid pitfalls, but also unintentionally guide the layout of Tongtian. The setting is novel and dense with cool points. . Jie Jiao's counterattack is full of excitement: Breaking the fate of Jie Jiao's destruction in the Fengshen Tribulation, the protagonist brings Tongtian to integrate the forces, gather Lu Ya, Jian Yao Ting, Jian Gang Chan Jiao and Western Jiao, shouting "Be born as Jie Jiao Immortal, die as Jie Jiao Xiong", and the rhythm of the defensive counterattack is exciting. - Lovers of great novels: Nielong brings a diary system to save the Jiejiao sect, the disciples take advantage of the saint master, fight back to kill the Chan sect, toughen the Western sect, break destiny and counterattack to become a god, every chapter has a slap in the face and is exciting, the more you read, the more you get addicted! - Set party readers: The diary predicts the future + the golden finger that makes you stronger by writing a diary is super novel. It reconstructs the destiny line of the Jiejiao, plots counter-routines such as the Tongtian layout of the pseudo-demon court, and the seizure of innate spiritual treasures. The prehistoric world view brings new tricks. - Those who prefer funny interactions: There are intensive scenes of masters and disciples quarreling with each other. Tongtian peeked at the diary and went from being angry to being "brainwashed" to listen to the disciples' instructions. The contrast between the protagonist who wanted to be stubborn but was forced to rise was cute, and the laughter and excitement were seamlessly connected.

26 万 The Cauldron That Unites All Things 万物归一鼎 Beware, Illiterate小心文盲Eastern Fantasy1.1M WordsCompleted Wang Ming, a modern-day treasure hunter, has a keen eye for identifying treasures and tracking down spirits. While exploring a secret cave deep in the mountains, he accidentally touches the ancient treasure, the Myriad Things Return to One Cauldron. In a flash of golden light, his soul transmigrates to the world of immortal cultivation. He becomes a child in a dirt-poor farming family, with cultivation barely reaching the Body Tempering Realm and a life hanging by a thread. Fortunately, the div —Reads—Score—Shelves

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Everyone I know is selfish

31 你 Why Pick a Fight with Him? Even the Weakest in His Sect Is a Great Emperor 你惹他干嘛？他宗门最弱都是大帝 Mihoyo, Watch Out米忽悠看刀Eastern Fantasy3.1M WordsOngoing (Invincible protagonist + taking disciples + sect upgrades + ruthless and decisive + expansive worldbuilding + ensemble cast + gradual build-up + the pacing is a little slow for the first 200,000 words, then becomes explosively fast) “You have to pay to cultivate immortality?” “You even have to grease palms to get a spot?” “And pay the sect thirty taels of silver every month?” “You have to serve as a menial for half a year before you can even get a chance to study immortal arts?” “You came first 137.8kReads8.5Score11.9kShelves

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#Brainhole#Fantasy#Shuangwen

32 无 Endless Forum: From the Mortal Realm to Eternal Hongmeng 无尽论坛：从凡界到鸿蒙永恒 Young Master Immortal Snake仙蛇公子Eastern Fantasy214k WordsCompleted Endless Forum: From the Mortal Realm to Eternal Hongmeng: A good-for-nothing on the brink of death binds himself to the Forum of Myriad Worlds, scavenges cultivation techniques and resources from countless realms, and rockets through the ranks. He shatters the void from a small world and ultimately becomes the eternal True Ancestor of Hongmeng! —Reads—Score—Shelves

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How about giving it a try?

35 齐 Heavenly Immortal Qi 齐天仙 Leave It to Fate and Dream随缘就梦Eastern Fantasy246k WordsOngoing The path to immortality is vast and elusive, while the human heart is ever-changing. Qi Tian bends to karma, yet the Dao heart remains steadfast, beyond the bounds of yin and yang. This is a story about Ye Zizai, and also a story about me. Please take your time and enjoy it. (This is my first book, so please forgive my writing. If anything needs fixing, leave a comment and I'll make changes. Thank you all for your guidance.) 2Reads—Score—Shelves

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36 全 Global Survival: The Outlaw of a Magic Wasteland 全民求生：魔法废土世界的暴徒 The Wooden Cabin Keyboard Warrior木屋键盘侠Sports3.1M WordsOngoing [Signed for print publication, new setting, no golden finger, no heroine, pets, expansive worldbuilding, disasters, construction, transmigration, game, apocalypse] Everyone transmigrates to a magical wasteland. At the start, all they have is a drafty magic tent. Chopping wood at sunrise and building walls at sunset becomes the fate of billions of survivors. Tent → wooden cabin → stone fortress... Jiang Xun thinks that’s all there is to a shelter. Until he discovers another way to upgrade: powerf 53.3kReads8.4Score4.2kShelves

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🪄Recommended cool article about Survival in the Magic Wasteland|"Survival in the Magic Wasteland: My blue bar is infinitely long!" The whole people collectively traveled through the magical wasteland, and all they had at the beginning was a magic tent? The tide of magic energy is raging, ancient forbidden spells are out of control, magical creatures are rioting, and disasters are coming one after another! The protagonist does not have the blessing of a golden finger, but he can change his destiny with unlimited blue bars. He starts by building a simple tent, farming to build and upgrade shelters, and unlocks various development routes such as conch houses, magic towers, and steam trains! There is no heroine, but there are adorable pets. In a vast wasteland world filled with the bones of giant beasts, do you want to survive or create a legend? Fill your stomach first, and then crush this dangerous magical wasteland! A serial with a high reputation of 8.7 Points, read by 55,000 people, the 1.683 Million-word plot continues to be high-energy, and the unique setting of wasteland survival + magic construction makes you more and more addicted to it.

37 武 Mad for the Martial Way: Eat People to Get Stronger, That’s Too Xuanhuan 武道疯魔：吃人就变强，太玄幻了 Become a God Through the Left Path左道成神Eastern Fantasy238k WordsCompleted (Fantasy) + (Martial Arts Training) + (Wild Imagination) + (Cthulhu) + (Cannibalism) + (Martial Dao) + (Decisive and Ruthless) Martial arts are inferior to cultivation? Body tempering and opening meridians are impossibly difficult? Thanks for asking. I just finished eating an Old God. Now bring me a cultivator for dessert. A secret realm is crawling with tentacled horrors? Take one bite in a desperate moment and refine it directly into the source of martial power! Devour the bizarre and level up 1Reads—Score—Shelves

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The deceased is like a husband? Reluctant to give up day and night