The True Lord Who Manifested in the Mountains and Seas

Attention if you want to read reviews! Absolutely true and objective Advantages: The world view is vast. I estimate that the 3,000-mile radius of the Tea Horse Road is only a small map. The characters are more three-dimensional than Xiaobai's novels. The characters of Master Shen and the corpse-carrying man Huang Zheng are relatively distinct in the few chapters. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into the description of the fighting and power system, such as the mountain and sea seals corresponding to "search the mountains and seas to reveal the holy and true king", the three basic levels of martial arts, etc. Readers who value this aspect can enter without thinking. Disadvantages: The author's writing power is still not enough, and some settings are swallowed up. At the same time, the plot progresses slowly. Sometimes it takes a long time to explain a truth, and a psychological description or an insignificant environmental description can be rendered in a long paragraph or even a chapter. It can be seen that I want to promote the growth of the protagonist through the push of the environment and characters, but it is too complicated. The characters are vivid but relatively flat, a bit like the tone of the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. Different points are in the eye of the beholder: Mutton, Grandpa, and Xiao Luchen are the points most criticized by readers. Let's start with mutton. Personally, I think mutton can be equated to Jianlai Tanghulu. It is the point that anchors the protagonist's cognition. From not being able to eat it to eating it occasionally, from eating it occasionally to eating it regularly, from eating it often to eating it casually, and eating it casually until it is useless, it is a step-by-step reflection of the protagonist's growth. Don't you think? Do you think it will be full of flavor to mention the original mutton when writing the ending? Then there is the grandfather. The role of grandfather is a reasonable motivation for the author's cognitive changes and growth. In fact, it is also in line with the facts. The principles passed down by the older generation are often the resources for our growth. Everyone thinks that the reason why it appears frequently is precisely because the protagonist needs it frequently, and why it needs it so frequently is because it grows up quickly. This is a logical closed loop, and there is nothing to question. Finally, there is "Xiao Lu Chen". I actually think the author overemphasizes Xiao Lu Chen, but this is not harmful. Those who really want to read the book will not care about this. The above is my experience after reading Chapter 60. Generally speaking, I think it is still good. I gave it five stars because the author also said that this is the first writing practice book. In fact, if someone who has written a novel can understand that it is the first time to write and write like this, it is really good.

What should I say, you can read it to pass the time. Needless to say about the subject matter and content, the protagonist's character is set to look like he is wearing something but not wearing it. I think it is a taboo and affects the reader's sense of immersion. There is nothing toxic about the content, but the background setting is very important. It depends on the author's later control. The pace should be gradual, a bit slow, but not too exciting. More than 200 photos were released. .

Five stars, but in fact there are some shortcomings. The writing is good and the rhythm is good. However, many of the things like the art of leading sheep seem to have never been used after learning it. It feels like many foreshadowings have been forgotten at all. .

The writing started very well. I feel very knowledgeable. I'm looking forward to this story. I don't know why it started at chapter 1890. It feels like it was written by a different author. I always feel that the writing is a little different. It's not that engaging and has a bit of a fast food style. [Thinking] I've read more than 300 chapters. Let me review it again.

It's been a long time since I've seen a book written like this. It's so beautiful and immersive. I gave it a 5-star review at first, but when I reached chapter 28, I didn't want to read it anymore.

The writing is very good, not a cool one, and a little bit naive. However, on the Internet, which is so violent nowadays, there are still some that write about truth, kindness, beauty, and correct values. Not many, and it is worth reading.

Everything I write is okay, but it's too overwhelming. Let me give you an example. Before 20 pictures, I will break through. Within 20 pictures, my foundation will be stronger in the middle. I am about to break through. After 20 pictures, I will finally break through. After a few pictures, I will finally break through, haha

Up to Chapter 70, it can be said that it is the best fairy grass. The author has great control over the plot, the plot settings, and the character arcs are all excellent. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into it. In terms of writing, it can be said that it beats 99%🍅 of similar articles. Keep the momentum and rhythm and don't be disturbed by what others say. Let nature take its course and write your story, and there will be applause to greet you along the way.

It is beautiful and well written. It not only depicts big scenes, but also has thrills in the mountains and seas. The big characters' ruthless outlook on the overall situation and the little characters' cautious thinking are all vividly depicted. The protagonist's combat power is not draggy, and the plug-ins are also very enjoyable. Xiancao belongs to it. The only drawback is that the author cannot update ten chapters a day [laughs]

The writing is very innovative, Feng Shui, Feng Shui, and fate practice are all my favorites. Although there are some twists and turns, the male protagonist also has to endure hardships. There is currently no female protagonist, and I am looking forward to having no female protagonist. Of course, a single female protagonist is also possible, as long as the emotional line is not too awkward, come on.